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”A Song of Garth & Fire, part I” [ post theme ] [ next ]

NORTH AMERICA
Portsmouth Naval Shipyard, Virginia

For nearly sixty years, the USS Trafalgar sailed the seven seas.

Once a proud member of the Kitty Hawk-class of so-called ‘supercarriers’ that had emerged in the 1960s, the Trafalgar had followed its predecessors USS Constellation and USS John F. Kennedy by bowing out of active service in the late 1990s, after more then thirty years of deployments in the national defense of the country whose flag it had carried across the globe. Those proud memories of the ship’s service days were now merely footnotes in the annals of history. Since the ship had pulled out of Naval Station Mayport for the last time, it had been collecting rust in one of the ghost fleet boneyards, waiting for its fate to be decided.

Scraped for razor blades? Sold to a developing country? Turned into a museum ship?

No, the Trafalgar was to be towed out to sea and scuttled to the bottom, where it would become home to a new artificial reef.

The ship had been mothballed for the better part of the last thirty years. Most of its equipment stripped away. Its paint chipped and faded, exposed metal rusting from decades of neglect. It seemed the haunted husk of a vessel.

Which made it damned creepy as the guard made his way through the sounding and security check. The hair stood up on the back of his neck whenever he walked this ship, and that was before they’d littered it with a daisy chain of bombs.

A sound jolted the guard to turn toward an open hatch. “Who’s there?” he barked, a hand coming to rest on the back of the Beretta at his hip.

There was a clatter, as a wrench dropped to the floor. “Sorry!” a male voice called out, as one of the dock workers emerged from the shadows. “That’s me,” the man offered, bending down to scoop up the offending tool.

The guard didn’t seem ready to relax yet. “I thought the demo crew had already left.”

“They did,” the man agreed, slipping the wrench back into the bag hung off his belt. “Well, most did, yeah. I was just giving the charges in the lower bilge a final check. We want the ship to go down at the right angle, after all.”

The guard gave a slight nod in agreement. What the man said made sense.

“Got your badge on you?” the guard asked, not yet moving his hand away from the gun.

“Oh, of course,” the man offered, reaching inside his coveralls to produce a white identification card that dangled at the end of a U.S. Naval Sea Systems emblazoned lanyard.

The security badge read: P. Mortimer.

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ATLANTIC OCEAN
3,600 feet below sea level

Nestled in a fertile valley of deep sea coral amid the Mid-Atlantic Ridge, the Idylls had long been viewed as a sort of vacation spot away from the hustle and bustle of Atlantis.

A fortification here had originally been constructed as a summer palace for King Atlan, though later became the residence of the High Mage of Atlantis. As communities sprang up around the mage’s tower, the residence transformed over several generations to become a barony and then a duchy, and then finally a kingdom upon itself. Of course, by that time, feuds over the post of the High Mage of Atlantis had fallen victim to the petty conflicts that had swept across the sea floor in the wake of Sareme Revolt and the Coral Riots that had followed as political opinion became sharply divided and the people amassed behind their chosen sovereigns.

Crastinus sprang up as an opposing school of magic to the one in Shayeris, challenging the traditional seat of power among the magi. Further abroad, Venturia annexed a portion of Lemuria, which elevated the conflict to one of open war. When the dust had settled, Tha-Korr of Atlantis had secured more than just his own throne. By carefully maneuvering his allies and his opponents alike, he’d managed to restore the balance of peace to the undersea world. An arranged marriage between Thar of Shayeris and Berra of Crastinus not only buried generational bad blood between the two magic kingdoms, but shored up the king’s allies against Attuma of Venturia, whose ambitions made clear that no ocean was large enough to satisfy him.

There still remained challenges. Racist attitudes and stereotypes toward the Brine lingered. R’llyeh had withdrawn from diplomatic relations with its neighbors. And as the conflict between Lemuria and Venturia dragged on for more than a decade, Atlantis had yet to so much as broker a detente between the two...

As he was scrawling on the board at the front of the room, the man stopped as he realized his charge’s attention was anywhere but. “Are you listening?”

It wasn’t spoken. Instead, the man’s thoughts projected through the water, interrupting the wandering muse of a child looking out the window.

Vibrant, violet-colored eyes blinked. His head jerked so that he was looking forward once more. “Huh?” the young prince uttered, before trying to smooth over the mistake by immediately appending, “Oh, I was listening, Vulko. Honest!”

The aging magi’s look was skeptical to say the least. “Oh really?”

Caught in a lie, the young prince did what any self-respecting politician would do.

He tried to double down on it.

“Yeah, you were talking about… uh...”

“The Coral Riots,” Vulko supplied casually.

“Yeah, the Coral Ri... uh... Coral Riots!” Garth stammered, at first tripping over the attempt at repeating it back to the man as he realized he had no idea what he was talking about.

“Then you should be able to write me an essay on the causes of the conflict and who it involved.”

The boy’s mouth fell open. His eyes darted to one side of the room.

Burying his face into the palm of his hand, Vulko gave a heavy sigh. Then, taking a seat across from the boy, opted to try a different approach. “When you are king, it will be very important to understand that every decision you make is likely to touch on some aspect of our people’s history,” the aged magi explained, with a patience that was both well practiced and well worn. “How people perceive the respect, or disrespect, of that history can prompt strong political reactions that may appear on the surface to have nothing to do with the decision itself.”

“But most of my dad’s duties are ceremonial,” the boy remarked, as though casually dismissing the notion entirely. If not the kingdom itself, as he explained, “I’m not going to be the king of Atlantis.”

This time, it was both hands covering Vulko’s face.

Straightening back up, the man took a breath and tried to get the lesson back on course. “No, but you will advise the king of Atlantis,” the man stated in a matter-of-fact tone. “And whether you’re advising the king of Atlantis or giving a speech opening a new library down the street, if you don’t understand the history of our people, then you won’t understand our people.”

A pair of large, violet-colored eyes just stared back at him, as though devoid of anything resembling intelligent life.

“I can see your eyes are glazed over,” Vulko relented finally, pinching the bridge of his nose before making a dismissive gesture. “Go, play, your highness.”

Without a moment’s hesitation, the child had bolted through the window. Already descending toward the reef where other children were playing as Vulko called after him.

“But I expect that essay tomorrow!”

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MEANWHILE...
The Pacific Ocean Basin

The sound of every chair scraping against the stone echoed through the chamber as the doors were thrown wide and the assembly snapped to attention.

The grizzled warlord moved into the room like a scarred orca that was stalking its prey. As he crossed from the threshold to the head of the long table, his eyes challenged each present to try and hold his gaze. None dared.

Before him, a map of the conflict with Lemuria was decorated with models and flags.Barely sparing the familiar scene a glance, the man’s gravelly voice rumbled as he spoke. “There’s been a change in strategy. I want conscripts drawn up from every village.”

The generals each looked at one another in turn, as though asking if any of the others had been aware of this.

“We march on Lemuria when I return,” the warlord stated flatly.

The sound of a man clearing his throat shattered the silence that followed. Speaking up, the senior military advisor began, “My lord, Atlantis will not tolera–”

“Atlantis is my concern, not yours,” the warlord snapped, forcefully halting the man mid-sentence. Turning back toward the doorway he’d come through, the grizzled warrior added, “Once we have the magi of Shayeris and Crastinus at our beck and call, I expect Tha-Korr to be more concerned with keeping his own throne secure.”

A pair of violet eyes burned with an eerie cast of hellfire, as the skeletal-like frame of the magi appeared from the shadows. “Rest assured, once I am on throne, the pacifist policies of my brother will be a thing of the past,” the figure intoned darkly.

The warlord gave a wan smile at the words, but seemed not yet convinced. “You are certain that the surface is about to attack Shayeris?” the warlord demanded. “I’m taking an awful risk, Slizzath.”

“Such is necessary to reap greater rewards of power,” the magi countered, flashing a devil’s smile as he added,“The other kingdoms are unprepared for what is to come. That ignorance will foment into confusion, and that is when you will seize power before any in Atlantis or Tritonis know what has happened.”

Taking a step closer to the warlord, the violet-eyed magi urged the man on as he boasted,“And, together, we can reshape not only the seafloor, but the dry land as well, King Attuma.”

“Or should I call you... Ocean Master.”
C H A R A C T E R C O N C E P T P R O P O S A L
G A R T H
T H E S U B - M A R I N E R

"I won't stand here and do nothing!"

GARTH OF SHAYERIS PRINCE OF IDYLLS ATLANTIC OCEAN
O R I G I N S:


The son of King Thar of Shayeris and Queen Berra of Crastinus, Garth represents the new hope that is the United Kingdom of Shayeris and Crastinus, one of the twelve undersea kingdoms that comprise Poseidonis. Under the tutelage of the High Mage, Vulko, Garth is coming of age in a realm of magic that stands in firm opposition to Venturia’s warmongering. This has thrust the boy into the midst of undersea politics he doesn’t yet understand, as his uncle, Slizzath, conspires to bring about events that will propel him to power at great cost to life both above and below the surface.

As the United States prepares to sink the aircraft carrier USS Trafalgar with the stated goal of creating an artificial reef, events are set into motion that will upend Garth’s royal life and ask the question of whether one boy alone can stop the tide of war with the surface.

S A M P L E P O S T:



N O T E S:

  • Tha-Korr is King of Atlantis, but I will make no references to Fen or Atlanna, so the royal family of Atlantis is free to be interpreted by anyone who may wish to pick up Arthur/Orin or Namor. Similarly, I will make no reference to Tom Curry, Amnesty Bay, Nereus, Mera, or Xebel.
  • I have no plans to introduce Black Manta, so if anyone wants to use him and/or introduce a version of Khaldur'am/Jackson Hyde, they're free to do so.
  • Planned Rogue Gallery is Slizzath and Attuma for the undersea side of the plot, and Dr. Dorcas and the Scavenger for the surface side of the plot. Future plots may also use Suma-Ket, the Dead King, and the Unforgiven Dead.
  • Surface side plot involves Beachrock, Massachusetts.
  • Support Cast: Deputy Wilson, McCaffey, Quisp (Silver Age version), Mar (Alpha Flight)
  • "The Brine" people refers to Marvel's Plodex race in this merged undersea-verse.

P O S T C A T A L O G:

"A Song of Garth & Fire"
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and with apologies to the magnanimous Bounce for the delays, Garth is accepted! Excited to see what you do with Atlantis and its kingdoms.


Thank you.

I'll aim to post on Fridays, starting this week. It worked as a rhythm when I wrote Kai-ro, so I'll see if I can fall back into those old habits.
The sample is a rush job, but screw it.

Go nuts.


The best part of this advice is the signature gif (also my favorite SG-1 episode... golfing through the gate ftw)
I'm working on an application that will merge DC and Marvel's versions of Atlantis.

Before I get too far, has anyone made any references to Atlantis, Namor, or Aquaman? My searches of the topic have only brought up that @Retired might have ideas (or have had ideas) early in the OOC, but that appears to be it. But I wanted to ask in case I'm about to step on any toes.

The undead child shied back behind his zombie meat shields.

Nondescript brown eyes stared out from behind the disheveled and bloodied corpses as Enzo watched the scene unfold around him.

The sight of Elizabeth ripping into one of the thugs made the boy’s stomach growl.

...wait, did they even have stomachs anymore? How did that work exactly?

He really should have packed a lunch for this sort of thing. Of course, if he’d known what they’d be doing tonight, he’d have made a couple of preparations. Cosi e la vita, as they say.

Though, shouldn’t that be cosi e la morte in their case?

Ian’s voice snapped the boy back to what was happening around them. Elizabeth had started toward the door, but the Brujah was trying to get the situation under control and the others in line with the plan.

When Ian suggested that Raph check the door, the meek Giovanni spoke up. “Why don’t we send these guys?” the boy asked, using one thumb to indicate the zombies that dwarfed his small form.

Extending a hand out toward the door, the diminutive necromancer uttered, Andiamo!

...and then bravely relocated himself so that he was hiding behind Ian as the zombies proceeded.

Elizabeth was through the door as soon as the gunfire had stopped. From behind Ian, Enzo couldn’t see much beyond the doorway. And didn’t plan to step out of line unless Ian told him what to do.
Gonna work on a post, I might be able to get it done by Wenesday or Thursday.


If you care to weave it in, Enzo would suggest sending one of the zombies to check out what's beyond the door.
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