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@The World Looks good! Very unique backstory and really pulls me back into the first arc of the series.

@RoseKnightJason Both are fine! You can revert the base form from ten to five, since you added the spiritual energy cost.

Sorry for the late replies, wifi was still having problems from the storm. We're still on track for the weekend.

Black Clover: Fool's Arcana

@Remram Hilarious, and accurate

had a power outage and bouts of wifi going out, everything should be good now though so post coming soon foreal this time.

What Are You Listening To?

Bleach: Rise Of The New Generation

So I'm assuming all our characters came up through the academy in the same year, so preestablished relationships are a thing, right?

@Psyker Landshark

You would be correct. You can choose to have them or choose to not know a single soul until the IC

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I understand these are WIPs, just my thoughts on what may be cleaned up or clarified.

@RoseKnightJason

Kobe Abiko

I love incorporating part of the story into your background, very unique. Just be aware that it takes four years to graduate the academy so he would be 28-29 if he died at 24 and joined the academy soon afterwards.

Nimble Fury: I can accept this being as powerful with a low cooldown, with the offset that it drains a decent amount of spirit energy with each consecutive use. At least until it's upgraded.

Your Zanpakuto Type would most likely fall into the Power category.

@Teyao

Yuto

There's an NPC that uses Iaijutsu style of fighting, which is what your abilities is reminiscent to. That might occur some interest. Just keep in mind what your ability cooldowns and durations will be, I'm more than happy to help in this department if need be.

Is there a limit to how much spirit energy is accumulated or is it ever growing? Either or is fine, just want clarification.

@RevekaRed

Asami

In my experience with Bleach RPs, Kido & Illusion style Zanpakuto seem to be the most versatile. You have a lot to work with here. I could send you ideas, if you need a kickstart.

@Product

Yamato Akinari

Zanpakuto Type would fall either into Kido or Light. It's really up to you to your discretion as there are Zanpakuto in the manga that have no definitive 'type'. District wise, whatever you feel best fits your clan. 50th and beyond is where life gets extremely rough. In essence, the lower the number the better the living situation.

As for abilities, maybe think a supportive ability. Maybe a flashbang ability that uses light to blind enemies, or creating a construct out of light that fights for you. Skies the limit, my friend. There's also zero shame in drawing inspiration from other series.

Seinaru kainyū no tate: Shield of holy intervention. If this is a simple defensive ability, that blocks attacks within reason, then a ten-post cooldown is excessive unless you intend for that. Otherwise, you may tone it down to 5 or 6.

@Psyker Landshark

Nakajima Ageha

I have nothing more to offer than what you've given me, it seems you know exactly how you want to play your character. Looks fine.

@Kalas

Jinzo Iori

This is probably one of the more challenging abilities I'd have to deal with as a GM. I like it a lot.

I only have one thing: How long would it take someone to realize they're being drained? Is it based on their ability to sense reiatsu like Hidden Reaping or would they have to draw this conclusion and piece it together themselves? Either or is fine, just want clarification.

Bleach: Rise Of The New Generation

@DarkHasayoVA I was wondering when you were gonna show up, bud. Been a long time.

Power restored, btw. Gonna see how it holds up before posting character reviews, but everyone is doing a good job and on the right track so keep up the good work.

Black Clover: Fool's Arcana

Edward final boss confirmed

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@The World A mixture of both. It’s for the whole planet so you have people from all walks of life, but it’s part of a bigger picture as a whole that’s unbeknownst to most Shinigami.

@Kalas I’m hoping to have as many people as possible, so definitely still accepting.

A tree knocked down a power line in my backyard it’s said to be cleaned up and everything restored within a day or two, so if things proceed how they say then I look to have the ooc up by the weekend. Additional information added will be Attribute lists, additional lore, as well as an NPC list, etc.

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Tornado warning and power outage will cause a delay in the ooc. Sorry everyone, but it’s nothing serious luckily. CS are looking good so far, I’ll give further opinions once my power is back.

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Edit: I also prefer to stay in threads as opposed to discord. The layout makes it feel more like a cohesive story imo. Reads better

@RoseKnightJason

[Too lazy to edit last post] Thank you for your opinion, it means a lot! I agree that it makes it more cohesive, and it's easier to find information/important moments we may want to go back to down the line that may be hidden otherwise by IC clutter. While the other IC welcomes it and is more for character moments. Separate the two for the sake of brevity, really.