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Current Me today: *writes action sequence* ". . .actually that doesn't work." *rewrites action sequence* *pauses* *has a good leisurely think* "Actually, if I just change it like that, the first way works."
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Writer's famous last words: "Oh it shouldn't take long." -3 hours later, it's constructed to satisfaction.
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Those times in every writer's life, when they read over something they'd written in time's past and go: "What was I *saying*?!"
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Anyone else who uses Wix: If you ever duplicate a post then start editing the copy but don't finish, make sure you publish it *before* reverting to draft. Don't let what happened to me, happen to you.

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It all never happened ~ but in your mind!
It all never happened ~ but in your mind!

Aspiring Screenwriter. Imagination whiz jumping between many 🌎s.
Self-taught Pic/🎶 Editor, VFX Coordinator & Mixer.
Independent student of 🎞; ever learning.


'The Reality Is: X-Men woke something up in me.
'The Reality Is: X-Men woke something up in me.

The Reality Is: It's getting me through.'
The Reality Is: It's getting me through.'


The comic book world is such a rich sandbox! Perhaps none richer than the X-Men -mutations to mix, slice-of-life elements to turn into anything but ordinary -the lines are drawn but the colours exceed them ~care to embark on the eXploration with me?

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X-Men Envisionings: one passionate fan's riff on the FOX X-Men franchise.
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Revisions to Part 4 ahead of Part 5's release: telkjplang.wixsite.com/xmenenvisionin…
Jaclyn "OfAll" Chreyz

Location: Asteroid M
Skills: Power Mimicry - Active Power: Chaos Magic





OfAll's expression creased with a fresh twinge of responsibility as Magneto, in answering Guin, commented on what he didn't know to be her explosion. She caught what Pietro said. He also didn't realize the "psycho" in this case had been her, technically.

Lance, however, provided some reassurance for the second time in several minutes as he clearly doubted one thing had to do with the other.

Enough of that for now. OfAll refocused with the sound of Mira's voice. She turned to her, Neil and Antionette, smiling: "It's great to see you three alright." She wanted to ask what happened, but figuring out where next to go was the priority.

It was the opposite of reassuring when Lance next surmised the rest of the team they came to rescue -who must have decided to split up too, or started out that way- could be stuck in a room or something. OfAll hoped it wasn't a classic drama TV show situation where they were trapped in a room filling with water.

What were the powers of those who weren't here? She tried to think. Edus with his magic. She wasn't sure the extent he could do with it, but they seemed reliable at least. Perry...OfAll couldn't recall. Then Marygold's had plant based powers and, as OfAll recalled from the fight on the Mansion grounds, fire. That could potentially evaporate the water --depending on rate of influx...

Magneto's voice sounded over her thoughts, as he provided directional information.
So far in the match between his apparent benevolence and Guin's skepticism, the leader of the Brotherhood was coming out ahead.

"Thank you," she said to Magneto before walking from Lance and Guin over to another of their teammates. "Max, I manifested your magic. . . There was a bit of uncertainty evident in OfAll as she admitted this, but it wasn't the time to get into everything. As it was, she was speaking in a low tone; her voice not to carry much past who was immediately near her and Max. "If that might help at all with one of your circuits, now or up ahead." She'd just wanted him to be updated as he would know if her sharing his powers would be of any additional benefit. She wasn't looking to be told what to do with them, she could think something else up herself -still unsure as she was on using them again at all- though possibly, as an aside, Max could keep her from attempting something with them again that she ought not to.

Updated:
-altered scenes/scenario in There's no going back from here
(doesn't flow as smoothly as I'd like, yet, but hopefully the idea comes through).
@Loksfjoer I'm seeing about working something out.
I have a concept just perfect for this, but it's just distilling it down into a contest entry (among the rest of the stuff I've got going on). 🤷‍♀️

There's trouble in the family -- Part 4: telkjplang.wixsite.com/xmenenvisionin…

Cyclops was questioning Ryder's choice of destination. Why plan so long to escape Umbra just to return to it? If she wanted to flatten the place, it sounded pretty clear she could've done that already, when she had initially escaped.

He didn't buy it. Something was up.
Either she was going there for a different reason than she'd stated -something she realized she needed that wasn't tech related; she didn't have remote access to?
Or she wasn't going there at all.

It did occur to him that their mini-X-jet was parked some distance in a clearing of the forest beyond the other side of Umbra. Could she have figured that out and wanted to steal their ride?

His sense of direction remained acute, though the more they travelled the more he lost ground on Ryder. He had the impulse to hurry -- he still had the advantage of size and could take much longer strides than she. But he knew better. Hurrying in this terrain at this time of day would only serve to set him back even more.

That's when he felt the ground shake beneath him, heard a sound like something being ripped from the earth at the same time, then heard the first scream, followed by gunfire.

"What the Hell?!"

Things became oddly clearer some distance up ahead, and Cyclops registered it was because trees had fallen out of view. 'Is she uprooting the forest, or...?' For all he knew this could be another mutant. The worst case scenario was it was an innocent local acting our of fear.

More sounds echoed -- quieter and less directly than if they hadn't been in a forest, but enough that Cyclops had a sense he'd be coming up on some sickening scene -- then came the shriek. It brought his mind back to the parking lot when Ryder had been injured. He was sure she'd just been again. This was not good.

Cyclops did hurry now -- recovering his footing fast each time he lost it. Pain was swept aside as adrenaline flooded in. He needed to get to the scene before --
He froze. Eyes widening behind his visor as mangled screams replaced by something worse registered through his auditory system.

His basic human instincts said to stay firmly planted where he was, but the rest -his X-Men instincts- took over; charging towards danger being just part of the protocol. Moving on, he practically felt what he was hearing, as though his body knew what his mind couldn't possibly.


Some distance away in two separate places, two others were feeling the carnage as well, though decidedly more viscerally.

She'd been making her way to them since the failed communication, sensing he needed her, and now, Jean Grey screamed, clutching at her head as she felt multiple minds die horrifically in succession, then at once. She didn't even realize she'd fallen until she made herself open her eyes -- going against her instinct to shut out the world by shutting her eyes; she needed to see the space of the world in front of her which was devoid of decimation. But it was no use.

She registered no pain from the fall -- registered nothing but the concoction brought on by her mutant telepathy and natural empathy.

Xavier had gone back to the roads, planning on influencing a mind just enough to have himself driven back to the facility. He had come across a few vehicles indicating the arrival of more townspeople without any current occupants, when he, too, felt the pain of cerebral death on repeat. "AA-AH-AHHH!" His hands, too, clutching at his head.

Separately, the telepaths fought through the pain as though physically sifting through the bodies to try and locate one in particular.

He couldn't be among them -- he couldn't be.


The townspeople were bold, but not that bold.
If the gruesome sounds coming from the altered forest weren't enough, the insane amount of gunfire certainly was.

They weren't joining this fray.

One, however, perhaps with the panicked thinking of 'is it following me?!', perhaps by sheer accident, or perhaps getting off a calculated shot before turning tail to collect their quarry another day, fired off another of those enhanced net guns.

This one did ensnare Cyclops, who went down painfully, an unsettling warmth bubbling out in all the places where he'd been shot before by Ryder, indicative of the stitching and packing no longer holding. Only he wasn't registering that just now. He had something else to worry about.

The netting had managed to bind one hand tightly in the very position required for his visor to engage. After a few scarce seconds of blasting apart the earth Cyclops shut his eyes, having to act blind until he could extricate his hand.


  • The good news was: he had blasted apart some of the net, as well.
  • The bad news was: the blasting of the already disturbed earth saw to the felling of another tree.


It CRASHED down onto another, branches breaking. A thick one SLAMMING into an incline below -- one Cyclops had only minutes before came down in a scarcely controlled skid -- the branch now careening down it.

If that branch had merely rolled from the higher elevation, he could've heard it and blasted it away. As it came with the noise of coniferous impact and breakage, however, he couldn't sort out what he was hearing in time.

Cyclops had managed to stand up.
This was one time he should've stayed down.

A yell was cut off as the air rushed out of his lungs -- the branch had slammed into him -- slammed him back into the thick trunk of another tree, and a series of tell-tale CRRRKKKKHHs resounded.

The branch fell away and so did he, finding himself in a lethal cycle --body desperate for air, but every breath CUT, the pain SEARED, breathing felt perversely like the absolute WRONG thing to do --that he would tear his lungs to ribbons if he expanded them against his splintered chest.

But he was so in need.

He lay literally gasping for his life.

His mind clouded over....

And as it would happen, so did the surrounding area.

Fog permeated the woods so if any foolhardy or militant souls were left, they'd be absolutely blind. The fog was oddly sectional, however, and where bodies lay it was clearer.

Cyclops, no longer blasting, had a vague, visual registration of the scene before his faculties fell further away.

....Jean.
He'd thought of her. He'd seen her....
No. She shouldn't have been there. No where near this.
He felt his lungs fill with a breath he hadn't taken.
They filled gradually, deeply, painfully.
Yet they didn't shred.
Another...
...Familiar lips on his.


* * * *
Three Weeks Later


"I still say, it doesn't matter who she is. That scene in the forest looked like a scene I would've left. Only worse. I know how you two feel about this sorta' thing, but you let Xavier put blocks in your mind when your power was only considered too dangerous. I mean come on -Scott was nearly among those in the pile out there." concluded the gruff voice of Wolverine.

Jean didn't need to be reminded -of the scene or how close she came to losing Scott. Truly his only saving grace might've been that he hadn't been right there when it all went down; there was no entertaining the idea that Ryder would've discriminated. "That carnage was a reactionary result," Jean pointed out in a quiet, yet authoritative voice, "Ryder felt cornered. Threatened. She's been a lab experiment all her life. If either myself or Charles try anything in her mind, she might react on an instinctive level to the exact result we're trying to avoid."

"She's been unconscious. And the longer we wait the less she's probably gonna' stay that way."

"We're not waiting, Logan."

"Right. We've just been having regular round table discussions about how exactly we should act. Same difference."

"Not to forget, she may not be quite as unconscious as she's seemed," came the hirsute voice of reason of The Beast, "though, as far as we are aware, he has been proceeding without evidential certainty on the matter, Charles has been proceeding on that thought, none-the-less. So far the place hasn't come crashing down around us."

"So far. If you ask me, Chuck is too close to this to base anything around. . .At least he's sound enough on the subject to keep her in the Danger Room."

And so that's where Ryder had been since the X-Men arrived on the unspeakable scene and jetted her, Cyclops, Jean Grey and Xavier back to the Mansion.
The Danger Room, some distance down the basement hallway from the Ready Room where the X-Men were having yet another meeting on the matter of "Ryder Xavier".

Despite Ryder's extensive injuries, she hadn't been housed in the Medical Lab for a moment. It was deemed too risky, especially as Cyclops would be recovering there. Not only was the Danger Room the most fortified of the entire building, being that the X-Men could train at realistic intensity, but the simulation technology it contained could also be utilized -and was- to make the environment appear more welcoming.

The very last thing they wanted was for Ryder to think she had just traded one captive situation for another.

They made the room look like one of the Mansion's bedrooms, complete with a window. That being said, they didn't want the gesture to be misconstrued as some ulterior motive illusion, and so they lowered the realism of the sim so it did appear, more or less, holographic. Ryder would be able to grasp her setting was manufactured, and they would be agreeable to changing it if she didn't appreciate their aesthetic.

They didn't delude themselves either --knowing full well once she was awake, it likely wouldn't take long for her to get a technic read on the place and be able to adjust the simulation at will. But at least anything she could do with it would be contained within this space. Beyond it, they had removed anything they thought she could use as a weapon, going analog where possible.

A return trip had also been made to Umbra within these past three weeks, with the intent to shut the place down. They were unable to locate Becker, and the only hidden rooms they found were the ones Jean already came across. But they had seen to absorbing the young charges into Xavier's institute, and had recovered some things, including -thanks to Beast's eye for advanced technology- a bit of the material the guards had had which blocked Ryder's powers. Beast had what amounted to an educated idea that's what it could do, anyway, and was currently in the midst of understanding it so he could do something with it himself.

In the meantime, Xavier had been making regular visits to the Danger Room to visit his daughter.
And for at least the past week, he had been making mental visits, too. Even in true coma, a mind was still active where the body wasn't.

He took it slow. Like a new neighbour making themselves known in no greater way than merely being outside, doing things in their own yard. Smiling when they'd catch your eye, but not making an attempt to draw you into conversation.

Today, Xavier decided to knock politely on the door, as for the first time the curtains hadn't been drawn. He had been able to see a few scenes within the mental "house" -Ryder seemingly going over her days at the Mansion so far.

They hadn't consisted of much beyond what care someone in her state would require, which was mostly carried out by Jean both because, despite the odd sensations she'd experienced, they felt she was best suited power-wise to be in such a position -a decision Cyclops couldn't argue, though he felt uneasy about each time Jean went in- and because from what Jean understood from the facility, it never seemed like Ryder was dealt with by anyone but males. They thought Jean would feel like a less hostile presence to her. As well, Jean had her level of empathy gained from the knowledge of Ryder's life.

Her husband's discomfort notwithstanding, Jean took the position willingly and, truth be told, had made similar "visitation attempts" to Xavier's, from a place of wanting to understand this girl. Both her pain, and how she could manage the degree she inflicted on others. That scene in the forest was the very embodiment of blind rage, and Jean wondered how Ryder's mind was processing that; if it even realized. But she had been treading even more carefully than Xavier.

Xavier was cognizant of Jean "stepping" here, like noticing remnants of footprints on the sidewalk. He had to smile at this. Though, he didn't perceive she had gotten as far as he now had.

This apparent fact pleased him all the more.
Jaclyn "OfAll" Chreyz

Location: Asteroid M
Skills: Power Mimicry - Active Power: Chaos Magic





OfAll was still trying to get back on top of her pain. She wasn't sure what was going on between Max and Carolina, but registered how Max answered her and made an attempt to contact Edus.

Why didn't he..? Her thought trailed off. Her figuring mind needed to take a back seat at the moment.

Soon after an orange glow was discernable over Guin and Lance beneath Lance's yellow light, and their injuries seemed improved. OfAll understood -- Edus didn't have her hair, yet, so he couldn't do the same for her. At least this was proof Max had made contact and that was reassuring.

OfAll thought she heard another voice down the hall when her attention was shifted back to Magneto as Guin requested he remove his helmet, clearly not thinking he would. Yet, he did.

Lance was carefully taking OfAll's arms at that point to have a look at them. Somehow, she felt a bit better from the acknowledgement. If nothing else, hearing the words "you should be fine for a little while" was like doubling down on OfAll's own thought 'you just have to overcome the pain a little longer'..

She could manage.

And. . .had Magneto just said, with no uncertain wording, that they could leave?

Forget flood of relief, though -- a literal flood seemed to be on its way to them -- Magneto blocked it just in time with a makeshift wall of metal, though water seeped through the cracks.

One of OfAll's brows lowered over her eye. Where had that come from? The Asteroid would require a supply of fresh water. Had the storage bay for that just burst?

Pietro's thought on the place being cursed reached her ears. Her mouth twisted a little guilty -- the first part of that "curse" had been her own doing. Surely her explosion hadn't had anything to do with the flood, though?

"We're supposed to be meeting up with the rest of our group," OfAll stated to Magneto, concern evident in her voice and expression, "are there...are there any flood protocols that would seal off rooms?" She didn't know where they were in relation. She looked to Max. "Do you still have a link with Edus?"
Updated:
-eXpanded on Scenes in In What World Do We Walk?
Updated:
-Added What If...?.
-Added to X-Men: eXtant.

An ebb and flow of connections and detachments lead into the gloves coming off --or the flesh and connecting tissue?!

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