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@ActRaiserTheReturned

In that case, with those placed in mind...I believe I can officially accept Ganon.

@mattmanganon

I'd love to review these two (I mean, hell, is that hero Megatron?), but you're missing a certain something that I need to credify that you read my rules.


Name: Ganon

Nicknames/Titles: Ganondorf, King Of Evil

Age: ??? Millenia

Gender: Male

Affiliation: Villain

Personality: A schemer, but also a ruthless dictator and monstrous cur to his absolute core. He works well both as a brazen dictator and a manipulator.

Biography: Eons ago, the god of evil, Demise was defeated by Link the Legendary Hero. Demise left a curse on Hyrule, that his hatred would form into a wicked blight on the land of Hyrule, and would try to conquer the world every time he was reborn.

Powers/Skills:


Other: (Where to put anything these broader sections might've missed)
Wielder of the Triforce of Power.

As for my favorite super power, my answer is the same. Magic.


Alright, rundown time. First off, hider, my guy. Second...Maybe pick a more recognizable picture of ganon? Most people don't know him as a wrinkly old sorcerer anymore; heck, even pig ganon would be more recognizable lol. And now, the powers. That I can't obviously understand/need questioning/need nerfs.

  • Can Only Be Harmed With White/Holy Magic - Well, obviously, a big no since pretty much no one is normally capable of those things lol.
  • Teleportation - I believe Ganon is only capable of short-distance warping, correct? If so, no issues. Otherwise...Definitely weakened.
  • Necromancy - You mean...Like, all the undead enemies in Zelda? Or like, honest-to-God Necromancy? If I can get that clarified, it'd be nice.
  • Invisibility - ...Ganon can turn invisible? Far as I can find online, this isn't apart of his power set...Unless you're referring to that Shadow of Darkness thing, in which case...I mean, ya made its own section lol.
  • Banishment to the Dark World - Yeah....No. We've got more than enough worlds here already, thanks. xD
  • Magic Resistance - Similarly to others with this ability, it'll be softened, but still around; you'll handle magic better than most.
  • Healing/Regeneration - As long as it isn't too strong; the good guys still need to be able to put him down, or they'll be fighting him for hours.
  • Clairvoyance - Well, depending on the potency of said clairvoyance...Maybe. He better not be peeking into the future or anything though.
  • Portal Creation - Again, not something I can find...And regardless of the validity, depending what these portals can do, they might be too much. Hard to say, would like clearer definition.
  • Curse/Spatial Manipulation & Dimensional Travel - Probably best for all of these to be ignored. The first two because they're way too vague and possibly ridiculous (especially Spatial Manipulation), and Dimensional Travel because, well...If he could, there would be nothing stopping him from ditching this place lol.
  • Attack Reflection (Magic) - Again, like his Magic Resistance, would be nerfed; would find it harder to deflect magical assaults.


...Alright, I think that's everything. My only other concern is, well...Ganondorf isn't exactly known to be the best team player (shocker as a bad guy, I know), but I'm afraid he could end up solo and leave you with little RP opportunity. I could be wrong, but that's just my thoughts on the matter. If you can address these concerns, then I'll see about accepting him.
@TruthHurts22

Y'know, never gave much thought to Miraculous Ladybug itself, but Shadow Moth here looks pretty dope! And honestly, nothing looks particularly in need of nerfing; plus, who doesn't love a villain who can make other baddies (or potentially power-up existing ones).

In other words, accepted! Get him into Characters and see about posting him up once ya can!


Location(s): Control Center, Paradox Engine.

Mentions: Merlin @ActRaiserTheReturned, Bruno Bucciarati @Lewascan2, Terra @Dead Cruiser, and Danny @Crimson Flame




Whoa. Whoa, whoa, whoa! So much happened that even as XLR8, Ben's head would've been spinning to keep up. Feedback barely had time to glance his singular eye to Danny before an old man popped in behind him, and without warning, he was held up a few feet above the ground, grunting in effort. "H-hey! This how you greet an intergalactic superhero, old timer?!" His struggles were made worse with the fact that he'd just spent all that energy, not to mention the adrenaline wearing off from his fight with Driscoll. The sting of those crashes were catching up to him...

Before the wizened old man could respond, another newcomer popped into the scene. And her introduction left something to be desired...Seriously, single out the weirdest looking guy in the room and say he's a kidnapper? Not. Cool. That much was clear on Feedback's deadpan expression staring at the person who called themselves Terra. And they were an agent of the...Viltrum Empire? Didn't ring any bells. In fact, Ben's gears started to turn in his head...

This lady could recognize he was an alien, but it seems the others were clueless; heck, the white-haired guy called him a ghost! Heh, if only he knew about Ghostfreak...Still, it was even stranger that while she could point out he was extraterrestrial, she couldn't recognize him as Ben Tennyson. He began putting the pieces together, and came to his conclusion with a groan.

"Alright, alright. I think I've got a good idea of what's going on. Lemme just..." While the telekinetic bonds were strong, Ben had a lot of practice as Feedback; sneakily jamming his tail back into the core, he siphoned back a bit of the energy, and with a surge of strength through electrically-powered muscle, he forced his hand to the symbol on his chest, and in a flash of light that broke the spell, there stood...

A completely normal human.



Ben didn't hide the grin on his face, knowing he'd get some great reactions from these people; he was used to it, but it didn't make it any less fun to see. "Name's Ben Tennyson. Protector of Earth, Savior of the Universe three....Maybe four times? But I doubt any of you get what I'm saying, so..."

Ben's attention was snatched away. In spite of the situation, and accusations coming in from all sides, he couldn't help but notice the man nearly collapsed to the floor, clearly in pain. He, uh, dressed...Differently. But still, Ben knew a person in need when he saw them, and he didn't hesitate to drop all pretenses and stride towards the struggling Bucciarati.

"Hey, you alright? You're not looking great...Here, let me help you up." His cheesy grin from before was replaced by a face of genuine concern as he reached down, offering a hand to the confused and suffering Stand User. If these people weren't happy about this, then they could take it up with him later; when there's someone in trouble, he always knew what he had to do. If Bruno was paying attention, he could also tell just how selfless the young man was. Judging from his slight limp and the pained gritting of teeth as he leaned down to offer his hand, he wasn't in the best of shape either.


I, um....Definitely didn't forget about this post like a bad GM. I think Ayesha's fine! Although the defining of her powers is a touch vague, though I'd expect that given she's from some kind of RPG or the sort it seems. Accepted! Just don't expect that dress of hers to stop as much as she'd hope, or for that staff to do as much work as she needs xD

He seems a little powerful, so i built him in with an easy way to kill him. If this doesn't work out, i've got some other ideas.


Yeah, gotta agree with Lewas here; reimaginings are one thing, but you began dragging in a whole different universe with Gotham and Mr. Freeze, and, yeah, the weakness of Infinity Stones is pretty pointless. Unless a Simulated Universe is running a simulation involving them in some manner, they'll almost never come up, and would certainly be functionless inside the Paradox Engine itself.

So as things are....I'll need to say no here.
Also, Bonesaw is great and horrifying! Most that would need tuning down is likely her ability to survive some extreme things like decapitation and the like. But luckily, she won't be doing much dying ideally. Send her in!
IC is now up! Heroes will be cropping up in the Control Center alongside Ben, while baddies will be popping into one of the many Simulated Universes alongside The Forever King.

@Lazaria As for Agatha here, yeah, a lot of small limiters places here and there. So I'll just list them off for ease.


  • Magical Negation/Reflection - She'll find it more difficult to reflect/negate magic. Maybe not impossible, but certainly challenging. She can still resist magical assaults though.
  • Sealing - This sounds like quite the power, so I'll say that to do it under her new restrictions, she'd need a fair bit of time and plenty of effort.
  • Soul Manipulation - Mostly fine, just don't expect her to pull a resurrection move anytime soon lol.
  • Telekinesis - Weakened down to where she won't just crumple people with a thought xD.
  • Telepathy - Main changes would be that altering someone's memories or outright controlling them would be far more challenging.
  • Teleportation - She can do smaller teleportation moves with some ease, but the longer the distance and more people she's bringing, the harder it is and more time she'll need to prepare. Theoretically it could teleport people directly outside of a Simulation if necessary, but it'll be hella difficult.
  • Transmutation - Sounds cool, as long as she isn't turning people into jelly 'n stuff. lmao


Overall though, she sounds cool! And it'll be fun to have a baddie with some magical talent for certain. Accepted!


Location(s): Undertown, Bellwood/Control Center, Paradox Engine.




Seriously? The one time Ben has an off-day, and it couldn't even be a cool emergency. His grandpa just sent him a message about the Forever Knights stirring up trouble un Undertown again. Just his luck most of the Plumbers were off-world. Something about Vulkanus being up to some seriously shady stuff in some remote corner of the galaxy. Not to mention Rook taking the week off to go visit the family on Revonnah. Ugh...

Well, heroics never waited for personal life. Mr. Smoothy would have to wait for today.

And thus, that was how he ended up near the center of Undertown, after having thrashed through a small army of knights as Four Arms; an imposing, ten-foot-tall tower of muscle with double the arms for double the pain.



"Seriously guys, how many times do I gotta teach this lesson?" Ben spoke, his voice tough and gravelly to match his Tetramand form as he took two Forever Knights and unceremoniously had their heads meet, the clank of helmet armor ringing out as they hit the ground with a grunt.

"So what is it this time? Another DNA bomb? I swear, if it's another DNA bomb..." The remainder of the knight grunts rushed forward, to which Four Arms only grinned. With a clap of his hands, the shockwave was enough to floor the lot of them. However, nearing the center of the commotion, Ben couldn't help but have his jaw hang. Atop a spire-like device, clearly ready to release some unspeakable evil across all of Undertown, was a familiar, and shocking, face..

"Driscoll?!"

"The one and only."

With a tremendous leap, the armored king landed down to the battlefield below, quaking the ground enough to even knock Four Arms off balance, if only for a moment. However, as Ben was prepared to talk to and likely snark at Driscoll, he instead caught a powerful optic beam to the chest, skidding the Tetramand into the stone roads of Undertown and several dozen feet back.

"Ugh...Did he always pack that much of a punch?" Four Arms puzzled to himself, lifting up from the street rubble, finding himself already winded. That blast had some sting to it for sure...But before he could think, he could see the Forever King readying another blast. With seconds to spare, he slammed the dial on his waist. By the time the blast hit, Ben was gone...But a new voice could be heard in the skies.



"I feel like we're skipping some steps here. Usually, this is the part where we give witty jabs at each other while you spill the evil plan." The grinning Aerophibian could be seen in the heights of Undertown, keeping a close eye on Driscoll and his device. Growling in annoyance, the King attempted a few more times to unleash his optical beam, but each one a miss; Jetray was far too fast for him.

"I must admit, this one was unprecedented...But you would be a fool to think me outmatched, Tennyson!" Without warning, a thin red line of energy shot from the wrist of Driscoll's suit; Jetray reacted as fast as he could under the surprise move, but it just managed to clip his foot. For this maneuver, it was more than enough. Barely able to offer a yell of panic, Ben found himself being hurled from the skies back to hard earth, smashing into solid stone with a groan. Retracting his tether, the king made his approach to what he believed was a defeated Ben 10...A reckless mistake, to be certain, but maybe not unwarranted.

Grunting with effort, the Aerophibian weakly rose up to his knees, dazed and weak from the brutal slam. "So, he's strong...And got some new tricks. Maybe it's time for one he won't be ready for." Ben whispered to himself, already hatching a scheme in his head as, only partially an act, he collapsed to the ground once more as Driscoll arrived to the defeated hero.

"Ah. So this is how the great Ben Tennyson falls. With a whimper..." With a crushing grip, the Forever King grasped Jetray, dragging him up face-to-face with him. "And to think, I had planned for far greater contingencies than this...How sad. Now, hero, you may watch as your precious Undertown will soon be laid to waste!" While his weakness was partially feigned, it was true Ben was having difficulty staying conscious. But what he saw next shocked him back to his senses.

Around the entirety of Undertown, an energy barrier crackled to life, likely ensnaring all the residents there at the time. An innumerable amount of alien civilians. Ben didn't know where this was leading, but his stomach was already curling. "Now, as much as I'd love for you to see the fruits of my labor, I'm afrai-AGH!" His attention torn away for a moment too long, Ben had shifted yet again, as the Forever King's grip on the hero was loosened, and he caught a face full of radioactive energy.



The Forever King was sent sprawling across the street as Ben's new form staggered into standing upright, a deep Russian accent coming from the clanging steel of the suit. "Sorry Driscoll, but the show's over. I don't know how tough the new suit is, but I doubt it took a point-blank blast like that well. So just sit back, or I'll put you on your rear again." The heavy-duty suit began to lumber its way across the empty street to the strange device. He'd like to just melt through it and be done with it, but who knows what that'd do...

But with his attention away from Driscoll, the King made a desperate move. With a switch emerging on one of the suit's hands, he pressed the button...And the machine began its dark work.

Immediately NRG snapped to attention, glaring over to Driscoll. His voice, while he tried to keep it steady, was edged with a bit of fear and confusion. "Driscoll! What did you do?!" He was met with dry laughter as the Forever King stood once more, though his helm notably burned and damaged. "It is simple...This is a temporal displacer. In other words, it takes things from one place in space to another. Though, this one..." His laughter, at first humorless and devoid of energy, grew in adulation and triumph. "It's programmed to transport everything in a massive radius into the nothingness of space! Of course, the barrier will prevent it from reaching Bellwood, and I have it set to transport creatures that do not match Human DNA."

If Ben could go pale, he would've. This thing will strand thousands, maybe even hundreds of thousands of aliens, in the middle of space! It was certain death for nearly all of them! Out of snark, the only thing the hero could give was a growl, and a declaration. "I'll stop it!" While he wasn't sure how he would, he knew his best bet, given how dangerous the thing already looked, crackling with energy and threatening to go off.

With a flash of emerald light, Ben made his last transformation, the last hope for stopping this catastrophe.



"Driscoll, if you've got half a mind, steer clear!" This new form's voice crackled like static, as Feedback jammed his fingers into the Temporal Displacer, energy siphoning off into the Conductoid. But still...It wasn't enough! In desperation, he plugged in his antennae and tail in, trying to take on as much power as he could from this thing. He could feel it slowing down, but it wasn't stopping! As Ben grit his teeth and put his all into it, he could tell it wasn't going to be enough...He failed.

In the last moment, however, he found himself tackled by Driscoll. "This is my MOMENT! You dare, Tennyson?!" With the electrical charge of Driscoll intermixing into the process, the two of them were caught entirely off-guard as a blinding flash engulfed the both of them. In the end, the Temporal Displacer was stopped....But what of Ben Tennyson and the Forever King?

Feedback found himself knocked to the ground of a strange new environment; a room filled with cords and screens, and at its center, a towering device that, unbeknownst to the Defender of Earth, served as the de-powered core of what was a massive structure soon to be known as the Paradox Engine...

What Feedback did know is that he had appeared in a weird dark room and was filled to the brim with energy threatening to blow this place apart. "Oh man, oh man...Gotta discharge this somewhere!" Not sure of what to do, the Conductoid casually plugged himself into the core, outletting all the siphoned power, and with it, restoring energy to the station as the room suddenly brightened, with screens he couldn't possibly comprehend flickering to life.

"Ah, crap. Looks like things just got complicated..." And as he spoke, more flashes of light began to emerge. "...And I might've spoken too soon."






Location: Paradox Engine, Simulated Universe #1 (Open Fields, Current Simulation: Unknown)

When Driscoll came to, the only thing he could think of was his defeat. Yet again, in spite of all his planning, years of effort, he was waylaid once more! He couldn't help but slam his fists to the ground in fury, craterizing the beautiful, luscious grass plains around him...Which is what brought him to his senses.

"Well then. This is neither the cold, emptiness of space, nor Undertown. It seems my plan was less foiled, and more...Complicated." Uncertain of his surroundings, he tried to get his bearings, but as far as the eye could see was the windy grasslands, scenically peaceful, in stark contrast to the crater he had made. Wherever he was, he had the strange sense it wasn't quite Earth...And this was only impounded as familiar flashes of light began to emerge across the plains.

"And so the plot thickens..."
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