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7 yrs ago
Current 乇乂ㄒ尺卂 ㄒ卄丨匚匚
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9 yrs ago
A sentence you wasted 5 seconds to read.
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9 yrs ago
Who came up with the idea to make our statuses quotes from philosophers, anyway?
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9 yrs ago
We could be doing something productive with our lives... instead, we're here.
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9 yrs ago
A random quote from some philosopher that we'll forget in a few moments.
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After 8 months, even the most interested guy will leave. You should put up a new interest check to attract new blood.
Ehh, not sure. All I know is that I finished both of mine.
Ehh sure why not? I'm in.
Damien was beginning to get a little less intimidated and a little more annoyed when the fox girl continued to get on his case. "What's your problem?!" Damien asked. "Spit it out." The mood was then cut short as the scarecrow began yelling for someone, making Damien cover an ear and take another step back from the loud noise. At first, there was nothing but silence as nothing happened. Then, the door to the farmhouse opened, and a man holding some sort of rifle emerged. That alone set off a number of alarms in his head. He could handle baseball bats and metal pipes, even knifes if he was careful enough, but a gun? That wasn't something he was willing to fight against.

Fortunately, it seemed like the fox girl was attempting to defuse the situation, although he was slightly irked and glared at her when she was still threatening him. Still, he didn't exactly have much else to add to the conversation, and decided to let it go its course for now. If things went south, though, he wouldn't hesitate to make a break for it.
Hey uh, could someone remind me what the Phantasmagoria is? I can't seem to recall it.
I might be interested, depending on the ooc.
@Lunar

I dunno. To me, it just says "lazy", which I can relate to about writing bios.

However, I'm 95% sure you're not actually being lazy about the bio, but it really doesn't help the people trying to judge your cs. At the very least, it doesn't help me. If you still prefer showing the bio in the ic, though, I won't stop you.

Anyway, enough about the bio, that's just a minor concern. You should balance your character's abilities.
@Lunar

Well, it is rather difficult to gauge exactly how to make your character "balanced". Hell, I'm playing a demonic character and even with his Gift he's probably about 3 times as strong and fast as a normal human.

Your character is, without a doubt, still very much OP. Moving so fast you're basically teleporting and having a "crazy amount of strength", just to name a couple examples. That's not even mentioning your extraordinarily acute senses that can pinpoint an enemy's location. She's basically a Mary Sue. Ya gotta remember that all of us are still Level 1, so we're not meant to be that powerful just yet.

What really makes it difficult is that we know nothing about your character's bio, so we can't tell what kind of knowledge she is meant to have.
I'm not sure if anything was changed about those. Still seems quite overpowered, especially the Cold Radiance.
Damien stared at the scarecrow for a few seconds, thinking about the threat it had made. Beat him off the property, eh? Then he threw his head back and laughed, loud and hard. As if a straw man could deal any significant damage to him. Returning his gaze to the scarecrow, Damien responded, "And how do you plan to do that? Tickle me with your straw hands?" On that note, Damien began to laugh again.

It was then that he felt a hand on his shoulder. Pausing his laughter with a "Huh?" as he turned around, he saw the fox girl smiling at him. Damien quickly realized that she was quite serious. Damien knew a threatening smile when he saw one, and that was certainly a threatening smile. Of course, the flaming tail and the countdown also helped. Throwing his hands in the air and taking a step back from her, Damien said, "Alright, alright, I'll leave the thing alone, jeez!"
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