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7 yrs ago
Current 乇乂ㄒ尺卂 ㄒ卄丨匚匚
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9 yrs ago
A sentence you wasted 5 seconds to read.
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9 yrs ago
Who came up with the idea to make our statuses quotes from philosophers, anyway?
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9 yrs ago
We could be doing something productive with our lives... instead, we're here.
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9 yrs ago
A random quote from some philosopher that we'll forget in a few moments.
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Well that sounds interesting. Good thing I already got plans for Damien's next abilities. Do I need to post them somewhere or anything?
@Leaves I'm not really sure what to do with that skill point. There's no info in the first ooc post about it or anything.
Upon finding the letters, Damien muttered to himself, "Well, what do we have here?" as he picked them up and skimmed through them. All of them were written by some guy named Samuel, which Damien noted. Looked like he and the farmer Ezekiel had a falling out. Ehh, not really my concern, Damien thought as he put the letters away. The mentioned treasure, though, did sound appealing to Damien. Heck, finding a lost treasure sounded fun, and he sure as heck didn't give a damn about the "danger". At the very least, it gave Damien a goal in this world.

As Damien put the book back on the shelf, he felt a little... different, like he could now do something he couldn't before. If he concentrated, he felt like he could figure out what it was. There were more pressing matters at hand, though, so he left the thought alone for now. Currently there was a meal waiting for him.

Upon entering the kitchen, Ezekiel announced that the chicken salad was done. Damien walked over to the table to examine the meal, and couldn't help but notice that it was rather... plain. Nothing but a bunch of chopped vegetables with a sprinkle of meat. It could hardly even be considered a meal to Damien. "This is it?" Damien asked as he stared at the bowl, then sighed a second later and disappointedly said, "Oh well, guess it's better than nothing." Damien took his seat and took a bite, using his tongue to find any sort of decent flavor in the food. Of course, there was hardly any flavor at all to be found. He was disappointed, but he kept eating anyway.
My god, @Belwicket, the lengths of those posts...

Not saying there's anything, well, wrong with it, but, um...

Yeah....
Name: Nova Supplier
Level: 4
Attribute: LIGHT
Monster Type(s): Fairy
Effect: If this card is Summoned, you can add one "Nova" or "Parshath" Spell/Trap card from your deck to your hand, except "Stellarnova" cards. If "The Sanctuary in the Sky" is on the field, this card can be treated as a Tuner monster for the Synchro Summon of a Fairy-type monster.
ATK/DEF: 1500/1000


Reposting in case it got lost in the sea of posts.
Well. Getting a 4th magic user. Even if you do have melee skills to go with that, well...

Might be best to pick a different skill set.
@Jangel13 yes
Name: Nova Supplier
Level: 4
Attribute: LIGHT
Monster Type(s): Fairy
Effect: If this card is Summoned, you can add one "Nova" or "Parshath" Spell/Trap card from your deck to your hand, except "Satellarnova" cards. If "The Sanctuary in the Sky" is on the field, this card can be treated as a Tuner monster for the Synchro Summon of a Fairy-type monster.
ATK/DEF: 1500/1000

OK, this is almost definitely the last Nova/Parshath card I'll make. At least, the ones for the main deck. And certainly the last I'll make for a while.
@Ammokkx, is my card accepted now?
@Eviledd1984 Main issue: You have three thaumaturgy abilities (those are your raven spells) and one gift. That's not allowed. You can only have 3 thaumaturgy abilities or 3 martial arts or 1 gift. So, either remove the spells, or remove the gift.

Other issues:
1: Your third spell might be a bit too powerful. Disregard this issue if you plan to remove your spells.
2: Your character concept should only have 1 sentence. I recommend at least changing that "however" into a "but" (Me being a Grammar Nazi).
3: Your backstory is a little short. It could definitely be extended a bit, at least by one line, and by line, I don't mean sentence; I mean typing enough so that your words begin moving downward. Also, remove the words "Tell us about yourself. What did you do in your Earthly life? How do you feel about your death? What are your plans for the future?" from there. You don't need that there and you should have removed it.
4: Put some spaces between your sentences, man, and try not to make typos with the commas. Proofreading is very important. I can understand if you have issues with your keyboard or if English is not your first language or something, in which case you are free to ask other people for help and take their advice (me included).
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