Shin Ghost Note

Black Fall: Academy 003 [CANCELLED]

@LostButterfly92 Accepted.

Black Fall: Academy 003 [CANCELLED]

@LostButterfly92 I like some of the changes you made but I still have a vague idea of what her chlorokinesis can do. Maybe provide some more examples of what she can do with it practically?

cancelled

I'm gonna drop the RP, I was working on a sheet and ended up having to change his role twice and just lost interest I guess.

Black Fall: Academy 003 [CANCELLED]

@LostButterfly92 She seems okay for the most part, I kinda thought her backstory was a little barebone but it's okay for the most part. My first thing is that you can maybe expand a bit upon how she responded to getting her powers and stuff (if that makes sense). My other thing is that a Delta-crystal can *not* give you chromatic powers, you would have to be exposed to two different forms of energy. Not that it matters because she's more or less a Red anyhow, I don't really want people to be Chromatic unless they absolutely have to.

Now, about her powers, I kinda feel like you didn't paint the full picture of what exactly she can do. Like the way you described it it's like you already assume people know how the ability works. I want clarity on character's abilities and how they work, so we don't have any issues down the line (Look at some of the accepted characters so you see what I mean). You also vaguely mention that she can create minions and that feels like it deserves a section of it'sown. Maybe provide some more examples how she can practically use her ability.

Onto the plant sense; while plants do have a sensory ability they probably wouldn't be able to give her any useful or decipherable information. Now, what if instead, she can sense the aura of plants and anything that touches them? And it's still red, don't ask questions. Her weaknesses are kinda weak, too, not being able to regenerate is just... being human. Her power requiring concentration is more of a limit imo. Again, I don't really have a clear idea of how strong she is. Still a better power than death manipulation. lol

Again, she's not rejected I just want her power section reworked. She seems cool so far.

Sci Fi Mutants in Space

Interested.

Black Fall: Academy 003 [CANCELLED]

@Daydreamz Accepted.

Recollections: The Coven [COMPLETED]

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Miami Merchandise Mall Parking Lot.

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The very second that Mariah opened her mouth, pretty everything she said went in one year and out the other. Johnny heard bits and pieces but it was really irrelevant to the guy. Except for one part, one tinsy little thing.

"Muderfucker-- we thouh' Kimberly was legit and she wasn'-"

Mariah

"... That's because you dumb asses fell for the oldest trick in the book," Johnny didn't even face Mariah and it seemed like, even though he was directly responding to her, he was speaking to the entire Coven at once. "You let a little white girl with a smile play you all. Simple as that. But it's okay: I for one believe in honor among thieves. It's obvious none of ya'll are upstanding citizens, and I could tell that without watching that video of ya'll beating the brakes off those hillbillies."

Then his eyes drifted over to the DENS before he commented, "... But ya'll really need to learn what omertà is."

He shrugged for a second before he glanced at Mariah for just a second before he focused on the rest of the Coven. "Though, something don't seem right about that whole thing with Kimberly..." He trailed off for a second as the cards in his hand slid down into his sleeve, and then he rubbed his chin. "... How can ya'll lead her to the club if she already knows where it is...?" He started chuckling.

"But, that's not importa-"

"Oh, but it is,"

Madison chimed in as she crossed her arms and faced down Johnny. While Mariah was currently on her own planet (as always), Madison couldn't help but agree with her. Johnny was probably shadier than she was, but he agreed with Madison's own sentiments - just that he was being vague on purpose and playing games and she was about to break her foot off in his ass.

"Alright, Johnny, start talkin' and no bullshit," Madison spoke and there was a demonic element added to her speech when the Jaws activated and began growling. "What does Kim have to do with Dollhouse?"

"Oh? She didn't tell ya...?" Johnny chuckled, "Well..."

He cracked a grin.

"... She was one of our biggest suppliers, in fact. "

Madison raised an eyebrow as Johnny dropped that bomb. "... Biggest supplier of what?"

"Oh my lord," Johnny rolled his eyes. "Did that bitch tell you nothinhg? And you took at face value just because? No wonder you got played so hard. Ha!" He started laughing.

"Look here, stop this bullshit and get to the point!" Emily shouted at Johnny as she dropped the tethers as she said. "All she told us was that Dollhouse sold cures for curses!"

"... That's not all of what Dollhouse does," The grin on Johnny's face disappeared as he spoke dead seriously. "The best way to explain Dollhouse is that they're a human traffickin' group! Except... for whatever reason, they've been kidnapping people kicking out their souls and putting their Apparitions in 'im. Every people in there except for me, Luis, and Cowboy-bitch was an Abscised... and I know for a fact ya'll know what that is. They may sell cures, but that's not what they do."

Johnny leaned up against the same lamp post that Sharon was on top of. "So, while Kim didn't lie - she sure as fuck didn't tell ya'll the whole truth!"

"I..." Madison trailed off for a moment as she realized that it was her that got the Coven into this. It was Herik's idea but was she really free from blame? She sighed as she decided to hold her tongue yet again and let this blowhard keep talking... and while she hated to say it; she kinda believed him.

"And if you're wondering what her part in this is; well, she supplied Dollhouse with bodies. See, that bitch was runnin' one helluva hustle! A ghost or whatever possesses a chick in her show and she can't find the right soul?" Johnny shrugged, "She sold them to us in exchange for a cure... hell, even Sharon's body here was gotten by Kim!" Johnny pointed up at Sharon.

"... Hi, Penny." She awkwardly waved at Penny.

"However, I guess the bitch had a change of heart... she wanted the bodies back from Dollhouse and as you may have guessed; they didn't want to lose their brand new bodies. So..." Johnny bared his teeth as he looked down for a second. "... Me and Kim devised a plan to take out the head of Dollhouse, and right when we were about to enact it: the retard thought that it'd be more beneficial to take out some of the grunts instead of taking out the big three when we had 'im right where we wanted 'im."

Johnny shook his head.

"If it wasn't for her boy toy, Natalie would have killed her." Johnny shrugged as he looked at Isla. "As for why you should trust me; well, I'll be blunt here; you don't. But you guys clearly have no problem trusting any dollface that comes your way, but let me tell you something..."

He raised his hand as he raised a finger and wagged it with a coy smile on his face and he spoke in a very condescending tone, "... Luis isn't going to let this go. Natalie isn't going to let this go. The Mannequin isn't going to let this go. They're going to come for you all, and trust me; it's gonna be ugly. They don't give a shit about whatever the hell is going on up there, it's about perception, sweetheart. And letting some bitches cross you like that is bad for appearance."

He sighed.

"Now, as for what I can do for you, it's simple: Dollhouse still has the potions you want. One of their little bitches named Faust can make these potions and she keeps a bunch in her workshop. I can lead you there, but I want the big three out of the picture. And trust me..."

He chuckled again.

"... You want them gone, too."

I'm new, let's have some fun

hai

Black Fall: Academy 003 (Discord Hosted Superhuman School!)

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Mass Effect: Caelestis

@The Ghost Note Bearing in mind I'm not the GM so take this as more of a friendly observation, Maya's 34 and would have been born in 2150CE; humanity wouldn't begin colonizing other planets until 2152CE, where it would be Demeter, Eden Prime, or Terra Nova as potential birthplaces. Not a huge discrepancy or anything, but Maya would realistically have to be a couple years younger and it might make a bit more sense to her run in with pirates/ slavers being on a ship rather than a colony at this juncture.

@Dervish

oops

I have been tryna catch up with the ME lore and will correct.

EDIT: Done.