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Another great post! I really love Red's attraction to Cece, and how it plays out quite innocently - him just dropping everything to help her when she probably doesn't need it. It's a very disarming trait. Just stuff like this....

staring at Gabi whilst she was running on the treadmill, and somehow time would pass and he'd hear a gurgling underneath him as Kevin was having trouble putting the bar back up, 

So telling of him as a character, I love it. Matches what you'd put in his CS and I appreciate that playback to the detail in your intro post. I really like your writing, you keep a nice pace and it's just enjoyable to read as is your character. 

What I'm digging so far about all of these posts, and I think I'm just reiterating on a point I already made but I like how every post is so different from the entry prompt, basically. I really like seeing all of the characters fleshing out :)  

Speaking of different, @Natty, I enjoy that you have gone for teasing the conflict with Cece and Gabi -- so far, everyone has been amicable about each other but you haven't been shy to write Gabi's hesitations which is really awesome as a roleplayer that you're doing that. Sometimes it's easier to just write your character getting along *cough* me *cough* but you've kept true to Gabi's personality. I also really liked the colourful imagery around her upbringing and how she related the blackout to Guatemala. 

Then there's posts that are just so creative, @Roman. Loved Vincent's intro! :D The description of the round room and how it annoys Vincent is just *chefs kiss* of characterisation and is (I am repeating this so often, lol) but just telling of his character in a really clever way. It's easy to picture that whole scene and it gets me into his head a little bit and makes me understand him that tiny bit more, which I love. Really love your writing, and the humour in it. I think in your sheet that you said you've written Vincent as a way to practice just letting go a bit (or something along those lines) and I think you've done an awesome job at that, I am seriously looking forward to another post of Vincent. Also, did he really exit the fridge? Another one of those "oh my glob hawhaw" moments. 

@Tackytaff good bean supreme Selene <3 love her. It's so sweet that's she leaning into family comforts in her new home at the penthouse. I really like her unpacking things carefully and contemplating things, it gives a really sincere insight into her - she seems very sentimental and I love that. Also, I laughed when she blew out the power with it hahahaha. Lovely stuff, looking forward to more <3 

Oh lord, best believe I screamed at @psych0pomp's last few lines. Look, every roleplay needs a character like Hana - who has no filter, who just says what she's thinking and says it proud. I love that about Hana and I love that about you for just writing it and being 110% true to her wild personality. Even the way that you describe penguin waddles and barely giving Jesus room just feels so much like Hana, you've injected her into the prose of your posts even and it's so bold and standout. 

Seriously, oh my god I need more posts, these have all been fantastic so far.

(also hoping this isn't obnoxious of me, I just have a habit of digesting posts in OOC haha)
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