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@Teyao I would recommend making Water Barrage have a cooldown instead of just not being able to generate water from your body anymore, you DO have a Hydro vision after all, the source of the water is the vision's elemental power.


Kay kay dude, will modify then, are there any other issues you can see?
Oh good, you decided to drop gills, or Ambrose's changes would have been really redundant.

Huzzah! Posted. Sorry about that. I'm traveling AGAIN this week. This one was sudden and unexpected.


good luck in your travel dude!
Hey @Sho Minazuki I added a new technique and expanded the backstory a little so I wanted to check with you first


@Teyao if you go with the wings, gliding but not true flight for now would be acceptable.

Cat’s eyes with nightvision would be perfectly fine as is if you chose those features.

I have no idea what clay hands would entail besides being kinda moldable.

Gills would be fine if you chose that route.

Hooves instead of feet is mostly cosmetic, barring some floor based hazards so that’s also fine.

Wild crazy wriggling hair is whacky and cool.

If you meant to say all of them at once, I’d say bring it down to one or two you think fit him best for any sort of function, with my preference being to not take anything else if you went with the wings; cosmetic to flavor, if your concept is that he’s a wildcard chimera at heart.


I think I will take out the eyes and the gills but keep the hands, hair and hooves as cosmetic flavor with the wings the only true useful trait, that good?
@Teyao Run it by me. I don’t mind minor useful things, but any ‘passive functionalities’ should largely wait for the timeskip. Right now y’all are getting toes wet and are in tutorial mode.


Small wings, cat eyes, clay hands, gills under the arms and hooves instead of feet, that plus hair moving erratically but thats purely cosmetic
I dig this all. This is pretty much exactly what I was going for.

If everyone would please add these descriptions to their character sheets under a Hider labeled ‘Yo’Bikur Form’ that’d be awesomesauce.

Muahahaha, my plan to make my players roleplay out their character sheets is going swimmingly; this has set the vibe way better for this style of RP than just asking this kind of stuff up front.


Hey dude, the changes I came up with for William are all kind of usefull, should I make them only cosmetic or can I make them work as intended, I am fine with it either way


"Ugh I hate it when people are not at fault, Valhiem is it? Yeah count me in, I want to know what the hell is happening"

He gave the downed man a nod and then rose to his feet once more, at least they were told some info even if it wasn't some of the more glaring questions about the whole situation and that was without addressing the fact that apparently, they all had died before arriving here (Which was depressing) and suddenly were part of some empowering system.

Still, things could be worse, like the poor schmuck who decided that arriving fashionably late was too cliche and instead arriving an hour later was all the new rage these days. God he was too tired to come up with funny comparations.

"Miss, how bout we see that we get ourselves ready fer a long journey. And uh... I reckon somebody better help the poor individual who just fell from the heavens."

"Yeah yeah you are right, I will go look if they are injured"

Letting out a sigh he started walking towards the new coffin, it had quite the awkward fall but if it was like his then the person inside should have felt a thing but why risk it when he had magic at hand?

Almost as if on cue the moment that thought crossed his mind a sharp noise filled the air before the lid of the coffin fell all the way to the floor to reveal its sole occupant, a white-haired(?) girl.

"Hah...Can someone help? P-Please?"

Shit she seemed worse than everyone else when they arrived, changing his walk to a light jog he took note of the staff on the floor before helping her out of the coffin.

"Hey you okay?, here let me help you out of there" Once she was fully outside of it he began to Observe her briefly before coming to the conclusion that she didn't have any physical wounds so it was likely the panic that was making her act like this and if Zell little comment was true then she was likely in a bad position before this.

Switching to a gentler tone of voice (And carefully relaxing his scowl) he tried to talk to her "Calm down, you are safe, everything will be okay, do you need anything?" focusing again on the group he called "Do any of you guys have water?"

Welcome to this clusterfuck of a situation Wizard girl, hope you like surprises
Just read your last post @Dark Cloud and this seemed relevant once more


Seriously that's some great characterization for your character, the way he acknowledges it and accepts it but doesn't linger on it is fabulous.
Basically my post


"Good to see you're not dead, now where the fuck is my sword?"

"Yeah dude same"

He was sure he wasn't meant to hear the second part but Zell hadn't walked far away enough for him to miss it, drawing a snort from him before looking back where the head honcho was now talking with Adam and MacKenzie plus the other two people who went to help with the evacuation.

Perhaps it was the post-battle exhaustion or maybe the feeling of the blessing of Undaya fading but for some reason James didn't feel like saying anything while the rest of the weirdos with crystals on their hands (Fellow abductees?) interacted with the downed Chief cop, instead what came to his mind was the soreness, the hit he took earlier and the strain of dragging Zell's unconscious body was being registered by his mind now that the adrenaline was subsiding.

Rolling his shoulder a few times to get ease his muscles he refocused on the ongoing conversation.

"1000 silver pieces... It's all yours... just please... take that cube - that thing - to the city of Valhiem. North of here... two days travel if you head off the road and into the wild. I trust in your ability to defend it, should the Witch Queen's forces give chase. But you must be swift. You must leave now. There is no time to spare. Our mages and scientists must see that cube. It must reach Capitol City."

That... was a lot to take in, Witch Queen? Valheim? Capitol city? as the others gave their opinions and agreements his mind furiously processed the information, there was likely an open conflict between two(?) factions(?) and the leader of an army of monsters was a woman(?) referred to as the Witch Queen, did they inadvertently choose a side the moment they chose to help defend the town? if so were they in the wrong by doing so? the army seemed pretty evil but then again from a logistic standpoint, it seemed reasonable to send an expendable force to destroy/capture a settlement in order to deny the enemy resources, that and this place seemed medieval so no geneva convention against war crimes, still those were half-assed speculations without taking into account what was likely a more nuanced situation.

He needed more information

"Oi, do you mind telling me what the hell is going on? Who was commanding those monsters? And why were they attacking you guys?"

"Well that is convenient"

James watched as the Asian-looking man approached the guard boss, damn the guy was intimidating (A small part of him told him to take notes) and he could see how the guards tensed even so slightly in his presence. He thought that the guy was asking him and the others but he wasn't sure if he was just asking anyone in general, still, this was something he could use. Crouching to be at eye level with the big enchilada he was tempted to give a smile but knowing himself it would come off as a grimace so he settled on his least angry scowl.

"Hey, my name is James and I am with Sicko Sword over there, I would like to help but the last thing I recall I was" dead "doing something else and then suddenly I found myself in a stone coffin in a very different place, so I would love if you could offer an explanation for what the fuck is going on"

His breath was slightly heavy by the end but he didn't allow his temperament to lash just yet, he really wanted some answers preferably before the next bullshit situation happened.
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