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‘Ghost Town’, The Ferris Inn

Darkness overwhelmed the room, dim light only just about breaking in through the gap in the curtains. Examining his surroundings for what must’ve been the fifth time, he couldn’t help but note that it was a damn shame that the place had been left to rot. Ever since they’d ditched it years ago in the wake of that accident all those years ago, the hotel -which at one point held a five-star rating- had been picked clean by looters and turned into a closet full of skeletons for the local kids. Even the city squatters gave the place a wide berth, giving it an eery sense of isolation.

Quentin was left waiting another few minutes before he heard a noise coming from the hallway. He leaned forward and listened carefully, slipping a hand beneath his jacket and resting a gloved hand on the M92FS in his shoulder holster. Footsteps. One guy, from the sound of it. Seems like the client was only just running late. Heading up to the door, he slowly gripped the frame and opened it, peering out into the hallway.

“Oh,” He heard the figure in the darkness, clad in a hoodie and jeans and wearing a backpack. “Where do you want to-” The figure started, only for Quentin to interrupt him and gesture to the room. “In here.” The two entered and Quentin gestured to the bed settled at the far end of the room. “Take the money out and place it on there.” Whilst the client quietly obliged, he took a seat in the corner of the room and watched the man set about his business.

“You got the-” The client had begun to inquire, only for Quentin to respond by clicking his fingers together. A light flickered, if only for a brief moment, before becoming a constant flame like the result of flicking on a Zippo lighter. This seemed enough to satisfy the client’s question and once he’d done stacking the bills Quentin headed over and began counting them, one by one. As expected, they all added up - yet he wanted to be careful and quickly removed what appeared to be a torch from his pocket and flicked it on, holding the UV light over the bills, checking to make sure that they were unmarked.

Once that was done, he pulled an empty dufflebag out from beneath the bedframe and started loading the bills inside. Finally, Quentin turned to the client and gestured for him to sit. “Give me your hand and stay still. Might come as a shock.” The client hesitated, if but for a moment, before outstretching a palm for him to grasp. Quentin reached out and firmly squeezed the man’s hand. The latter of the two seemed to gasp with shock, as one would if they had an especially sharp needle stuck into their arm. Then, finally, it was over.

The client looked back up to Quentin after spending what must’ve been half an eternity staring at his own hand, as if expecting it to burst into flame. Eventually, he balked up the courage to inquire “How do I, y’know...” Quentin raised a hand and clicked his fingers. “Like that.” He answered, nodding to the client who subsequently did the same and found a spark of a flame hanging between his thumb and index finger. Quentin headed back over towards the dufflebag resting on the bed and slung it over his shoulder, nodding to the man. “We’re done here. Good luck.” He finally noted, before heading off into the night.

Knightdale Rows
Next Morning.

Quentin was stirred from his morning routine by a buzz at the intercom panel. Abandoning the news station currently displayed on the TV, he headed over towards the panel and opted to open the line up, awaiting a response. “It’s me.” A familiar voice spoke. Quentin froze for a moment, contemplating cutting off the call, before hitting the button to page him in. A few minutes and a change of clothes later and he heard the knock at the door, prompting him to answer it. Opening up, he was met with a man of similar appearance to himself, albeit a little younger and wearing a shirt and jeans with a utility belt, complete with sidearm and badge.

“Reed. It’s been a while.” Quentin finally broke the silence. He gestured to the hallway, motioning for his younger brother to enter. Heading into the kitchen, he pulled out a seat for Reed and leant back against the counter. ”How’s things? He inquired, to which Reed answered ”Alright, I guess. Nothing special.” Quentin idly nodded, before continuing ”Heard you got promoted. Congratulations, I guess.” Reed glanced up, before nodding and asking ”Uncle Cass tell you that?”

Quentin affirmed Reed’s question with a solid nod. ”Yeah. Haven’t seen him for a while, though. How’s the old man doing?” He glanced towards a picture frame mounted on the wall, depicting a relatively young man in a fresh VPD uniform laughing with a slightly younger woman, a strong resemblance between the two. ”He’s fine. Y’know how Cass is, old man wouldn’t retire if they stuck him in a body bag. I wager he’d turn up in the office the next morning, freezer burn and all.” The two smiled at the notion, if only for a brief moment. Knowing Uncle Cass, it wouldn’t be too far from the truth.

Heading over to the fridge, Quentin glanced back towards Reed and raised an eyebrow, “You want anything whilst I’m here?” Reed shook his head, finally speaking up and getting to the whole point of his visit “No. Look, we both know this isn’t a social call, so I’ll just cut to it. You’ve seen the news lately, right?” Quentin nodded, ”It’s hard not to.” “Right,” Reed continued, ”Had all sorts of people crawling all over this stuff. VPD, FBI, NEST - the works. Still not enough leads, and people are dead over this shit-” Quentin cut him off, ”So where do I come into this? Think I’m associated with the likes of the Fiends? Fuck, Reed, you know better than that.

”Maybe so, but I know security’s just a day job for you and I doubt Uncle Cass buys that shit story either. Look, I’m not gonna tell you what to do in your spare time, couldn’t even if I wanted to, but you still owe it to us for helping you keep your little secret out of the hands of those suits. People have died, for fuck’s sake. Anything, any lead we can get - it’d be appreciated.” For emphasis, Reed kept his gaze fixated on his elder brother’s face. ”Look, Quentin finally began after what must’ve been an eternity’s worth of silence, ”If I knew anything I’d tell you, honest. But I don’t. I don’t deal with the Fiends, or anyone like them. Too much trouble... and as a principle.”

Silence hung over the two for a couple of moments, before the younger brother finally answered, ”Alright. Sure. Just... give me a call if anything does pop up. You know where to call, right?” Quentin nodded, ”Right.” The two made their farewells, and Reed let himself out.
Got a scene in my head that I've just gotta get written down.

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Well, I don't see any problem with someone consenting to have their powers removed. Though, you should still cut the power nullification.


Alright, look it over now and tell me what you think.
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If he can remove powers, then I'll have to decline. Because if he can nullify powers, that means that plenty of characters will have a hard time stopping him, and taking powers away outright will cause things to get messy.


Alright, fair enough. I wouldn't want to come across as an overpowered motherfucker who can best everyone with ease. What about if I alter it so that he can remove powers but only if it's a willing process such as those who don't want to live as metahumans? Or would you rather I alter it so he can't remove powers whatsoever.
@Zombiedude101 I think he should just have the transferring, the other abilities are powerful enough on their own. And does the transferring completely strip someone of their power?


Without finesse, it'd outright strip them of their powers. However, with a little practice it'd be possible for him to simply just replicate said powers through contact - though it might not be as effective to use as one that's been fully stripped. Imagine it like a document, if you have the original copy it's generally of better quality and easier to read whereas if you were to photocopy it then it's more likely to be a little hazy and difficult to read. I also edited the application accordingly.
Here's a WIP.



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It is possible to conceal a power. It ultimately depends on the kind of power you have (It will be hard to disguise shooting lasers). Though, you'll get in trouble with NEST if they find out you were intentionally hiding your power.


Essence-based powers, for instance. Something that you wouldn't notice unless you gave them a medical exam or took a DNA sample.
Just wondering, would it be possible to conceal one's powers? Is everyone automatically registered by NEST? I'm asking as I'm writing out an app for a character in their early-mid thirties, so wanted to make sure I've got the right info accordingly.
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