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Finally posted, thanks for being patient!
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Middle district concept art and the under construction Hunter's Guild so you can expand your horizons a bit.

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Hey guys, been gone for a bit. Really busy with my day job and working on the site. Currently trying to make the animated background be less blurry XD


So yeah been gone. Doesn't seem like many people have posted though. Might end up just having to restart this at a later date when I have more time to dedicate to it. Not going to call it dead yet so hopefully people come and join.
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My apologies. >_< Things have been damn near psychotic at my house, so I haven't been able to concentrate too well. I have all the basics, but the backstory.
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My apologies. >_< Things have been damn near psychotic at my house, so I haven't been able to concentrate too well. I have all the basics, but the backstory.


Sounds good. Also here's a cool little graphic explaining the "broke ass" system as I like to call it which lets you build a character over time. And the basic creation process as well.

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Some music to enjoy as a theme to one of our characters...

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This looks pretty interesting. I'm toying with the idea of an amnesiac. Could I do something like that?
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This looks pretty interesting. I'm toying with the idea of an amnesiac. Could I do something like that?


Don't see why not
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I'll try to get a character sheet up soon, but I'll be a bit busy today so it may not be for a while.
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Here we are. Tell me if there's anything wrong with it..

Character Type: Friend (probably)

Location: Urbi Lupi

Name: Snow

Gender: Male

Age: Looks to be around 7 years old, he doesn’t know his own age

Race: Lycan

Appearance: Snow is a small, white haired child. His hair is curly-ish but sticks to his head and is rather short. He has big brown eyes and his skin is pale, like snow. Has wolf ears because he doesn’t know he can hide them and sees no reason to do so.

Height: 110 cm

Weight: 25 kg

Hair: White

Eye Color: Brown

Skin Color: Skin colour is very white, fur is also white.

Typical Clothing: Snow wears a non-descript fur coat made for winter and some basic winter boots. A thick undershirt for winter and some wool pants for more warmth.

Skills:
- Ice spear
Makes an ice spear and throws it at foes. High damage, high cost
- Blizzard
Makes a blizzard appear that lasts for a little and then dissipates. Takes large amounts of mana, continuous damage to all enemies
- Flash freeze
Encases the target in ice, moderate mana cost
- Unfreeze
Removes frozen effect, unfreezes objects/people. Low mana cost. Does nothing if targeting a target that isn't frozen.

Characteristics:
-Amnesia
-Is fluffy
-Is gifted with ice magic but also has an affinity with cold. Doesn’t feel cold, susceptible to warm weather.
-Inquisitive
-Likes warmth, just not warm weather.

Traits: Amnesia, his lycan form is a small white wolf.

Short Back Story: There isn’t much of a backstory. One day, Snow woke up somewhere in the snow. He had no idea where he was or who he was, or what anything was. All he knew was his name, Snow. Snow knew how to breathe and how to walk. He knew a language, but he didn’t know what it was. When he woke up, he was in a ruined building which was barricaded by snow. Broken glass containers lined the walls and strange metal boxes were next to them. Snow didn’t know what they were, but they felt nostalgic. He looked and saw a snow pile, seemingly originating from the wall. Snow walked to it and touched it. I want to leave. He thought. The snow gave way, revealing the scant sunlight the snow had hidden. Snow looked out and saw a white landscape, lined with strangely uniform rocks. Some had rectangular holes in them, but Snow had no idea what for. He looked back at the place he had woken up into. Compared to the sunlight, the area behind him looked dangerous and forboding, broken glass like jaws of an unknown beast. Snow had no reason to stay, but he didn’t know how he knew that. Snow turned back around and walked on, without looking back. Where was he going? He didn’t know. Away from here, definitely. He didn’t need to be there. He didn’t really need to be anywhere, but he wanted to know who he was. He was looking for clues to who he was. The only thing he really knew was that he didn’t need to be in the place with the broken glass, and he wanted to leave. Snow walked on, searching for his identity.

His magic: He's naturally gifted with ice magic, but he hardly knows any ice magic. He has instinctive knowledge of the basics of ice magic such as gathering and shaping ice, but without further training, he can't do too much. As he is, he has a certain amount of ice manipulation, but he uses far too much magic to do so. The reason is, he doesn't do it the same as every other mage. In terms of ice magic, Snow thinks of what he wants to happen and it happens. This consumes an inordinate amount of magic and tires him out fairly quickly so he mostly does small things. He can't do or make things too big or complicated and will pass out if he tries.
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Looks good for the most part, couple comments though before accepting...

-"Has dog ears because he doesn't know he can and sees no reason to do so." it seems like part of the sentence is missing because that doesn't make sense as is. What does he not know he can do?

-"his lycan form is a small white dog." it would be okay if it seems like a small white dog because he's a young boy, but he can't change to a different type of animal than everyone else because they're all based on the same breed of wolf DNA.

-"Is gifted with ice magic but also has an affinity with cold. Doesn't feel cold, susceptible to warm weather. Has control over ice." I would like more details regarding his magi as it could easily become an issue. Magic is just one of those things that's needs its boundaries otherwise you could destroy everything XD

After that's taken care of I'll accept him.

Also for everyone else here's a map of Novus Anima (we're focused on the northern regions for now, the southern regions are barbaric and will likely be a similar setup to the Norse vikings of the past)

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Looks good for the most part, couple comments though before accepting...-"Has dog ears because he doesn't know he can and sees no reason to do so." it seems like part of the sentence is missing because that doesn't make sense as is. What does he not know he can do?-"his lycan form is a small white dog." it would be okay if it seems like a small white dog because he's a young boy, but he can't change to a different type of animal than everyone else because they're all based on the same breed of wolf DNA. -"Is gifted with ice magic but also has an affinity with cold. Doesn't feel cold, susceptible to warm weather. Has control over ice." I would like more details regarding his magi as it could easily become an issue. Magic is just one of those things that's needs its boundaries otherwise you could destroy everything XDAfter that's taken care of I'll accept him.Also for everyone else here's a map of Novus Anima (we're focused on the northern regions for now, the southern regions are barbaric and will likely be a similar setup to the Norse vikings of the past)


I just wanted to mention it because you mentioned them, but the Norse had an anarchistic society for about 300 years. They basically were ruled like the city for my character, which is what I based the city on. You could sell a claim to a crime against you, and if the criminal didn't pay you back for the crime against you within a few months, they were outlaws. It was then Tortuous (could be sued for it) to defend the outlaw, and it wasn't tortuous to kill them and take their stuff.
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I just wanted to mention it because you mentioned them, but the Norse had an anarchistic society for about 300 years. They basically were ruled , which is what I based the city on. You could sell a claim to a crime against you, and if the criminal didn't pay you back for the crime against you within a few months, they were outlaws. It was then Tortuous (could be sued for it) to defend the outlaw, and it wasn't tortuous to kill them and take their stuff.


nice, kind of confusing but cool
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Alright, edited my CS. Hope it'll do, but I feel like I could've explained it better.
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I'm also thinking of putting up a character, but I need to know something first

How high is the tech level here, because I want to be a faction captain juggernaut with dual repeating crossbows that interlock into a shield
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Character Type: Advanced or Friend

Location: Urbi Lupi

Name: Kassandra Keigwan

Gender: Female

Age: 19

Race: Lycan

Appearance: Kassy is about 5'9'', with cool dark skin. She is heavyset and curvaceous, weighing around 200 pounds. Her hair is frost white, thick, and kept cut to her chin. Her eyes are a brilliant amber, wide and usually gentle. Her clothing is typical for a feminine human woman in Urbi Lupi, but Kassy adds to it a scarf to cover her hair as well as a pair of darkened glasses to attempt to shade her eye color. While she is a big woman, she carries herself with a definite timidity, as if she is afraid to exist.

Height: 5'9''

Weight: 200 pounds

Hair: White

Eye Color: Amber

Skin Color: Dark brown/ White fur with silver tones

Typical Clothing:
Casual- A simple shirt, a skirt to the ankles, short leather boots and a small, round medallion that is imprinted with the phases of the moon. (The different phases have different depths in the metal.)

Fighting- Tunic, shorter skirt with thick leggings, calf boots. Medallion tucked inside a plain shirt, no sleeves. Heavy wooden staff a foot taller than she.

Characteristics:
- Soft spoken
- Maternal
- Fearful of others
- Wise beyond her years
- Intelligent
- Defensive of those being bullied

Skills:
1. Staff fighting
2. Silent movement

Traits: (Non combat related skills/talents)
1. Interacting with children
2. Understanding of people's motives (Psychology)
3. Earning trust from people
4. Herbal medicine

Short Back Story:
Up until the age of 8, Kassandra had a happy, quiet life. She and her parents lived in a small cottage, where her mother was a medicine woman/healer and her father a scribe for the nearby town. Her lycan mother was working very hard on a medicinal cure for mange, as so far there had only been temporary relief that did not work for severe cases. While it was a goal with a personal gain, as she was suffering from the disease) she had a dream of being able to cure her lycan cousins from suffering the painful fate. Unfortunately, despite many treatments that prolonged her life, Kassy's mother was killed by mange before ever discovering a viable cure. Kassy's father was stricken with deep grief. He stopped working, stopped eating, and was unable to care for his daughter. He dropped her off at the hope of his sister in law. Kassy has not seen him since.

Christine always hated her older sister; even though Kaia had been born a lycan (a freak, to her), she still garnered more attention from their parents for her brilliant mind and determined will. When Kassy was suddenly dropped at her home, the old hatred returned. Christine shamed, bullied, and abused the child for being a 'wolf-blooded freak' like her mother, and over the years crushed the girl's spirit.

Kassy took what little she owned as soon as she was old enough, and fled the house. She makes a meager living as her mother did, making medicines for others. Secretly, she also tries to realize her mother's dream of curing mange.
I am now realizing that there are like 2 white wolves already. I can give Kassy a different shade, or some darker trim to make her unique.
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Alright, edited my CS. Hope it'll do, but I feel like I could've explained it better.


Accepted :D

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I'm also thinking of putting up a character, but I need to know something firstHow high is the tech level here, because I want to be a faction captain juggernaut with dual repeating crossbows that interlock into a shield


Not too high tech but The White Cross have been venturing into old world tech so I would accept the idea you have there 1) Because of what I just said, 2) Because faction captains are supposed to be badass

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Character Type: Advanced or Friend Location: Urbi Lupi Name: Kassandra KeigwanGender: FemaleAge: 19Race: LycanAppearance: Kassy is about 5'9'', with cool dark skin. She is heavyset and curvaceous, weighing around 200 pounds. Her hair is frost white, thick, and kept cut to her chin. Her eyes are a brilliant amber, wide and usually gentle. Her clothing is typical for a feminine human woman in Urbi Lupi, but Kassy adds to it a scarf to cover her hair as well as a pair of darkened glasses to attempt to shade her eye color. While she is a big woman, she carries herself with a definite timidity, as if she is afraid to exist.Height: 5'9''Weight: 200 poundsHair: WhiteEye Color: AmberSkin Color: Dark brown/ White fur with silver tonesTypical Clothing: Casual- A simple shirt, a skirt to the ankles, short leather boots and a small, round medallion that is imprinted with the phases of the moon. (The different phases have different depths in the metal.)Fighting- Tunic, shorter skirt with thick leggings, calf boots. Medallion tucked inside a plain shirt, no sleeves. Heavy wooden staff a foot taller than she.Characteristics:- Soft spoken- Maternal- Fearful of others- Wise beyond her years- Intelligent- Defensive of those being bulliedSkills: 1. Staff fighting 2. Silent movementTraits: (Non combat related skills/talents)1. Interacting with children 2. Understanding of people's motives (Psychology)3. Earning trust from people4. Herbal medicineShort Back Story:Up until the age of 8, Kassandra had a happy, quiet life. She and her parents lived in a small cottage, where her mother was a medicine woman/healer and her father a scribe for the nearby town. Her lycan mother was working very hard on a medicinal cure for mange, as so far there had only been temporary relief that did not work for severe cases. While it was a goal with a personal gain, as she was suffering from the disease) she had a dream of being able to cure her lycan cousins from suffering the painful fate. Unfortunately, despite many treatments that prolonged her life, Kassy's mother was killed by mange before ever discovering a viable cure. Kassy's father was stricken with deep grief. He stopped working, stopped eating, and was unable to care for his daughter. He dropped her off at the hope of his sister in law. Kassy has not seen him since.Christine always hated her older sister; even though Kaia had been born a lycan (a freak, to her), she still garnered more attention from their parents for her brilliant mind and determined will. When Kassy was suddenly dropped at her home, the old hatred returned. Christine shamed, bullied, and abused the child for being a 'wolf-blooded freak' like her mother, and over the years crushed the girl's spirit.Kassy took what little she owned as soon as she was old enough, and fled the house. She makes a meager living as her mother did, making medicines for others. Secretly, she also tries to realize her mother's dream of curing mange.I am now realizing that there are like 2 white wolves already. I can give Kassy a different shade, or some darker trim to make her unique.


I like the character, accepted :D
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Yay!

How do I start?
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Yay!

How do I start?
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I don't think I'll be using the crossbow guy now, because I can't come up with a good story for it but still, I got some other characters instead.


Kreiss would probably give quests to do with defending a place, or some kind of army stuff, you know how army guys are.

The Old Guy would probably give quests investigating nearby ruins and also maybe bandit loot caches and stuff like that.
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