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I personally don't believe that, but there's something that could be inspirational, from your archnemesis or whatever you think me as.
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I personally don't believe that, but there's something that could be inspirational, from your archnemesis or whatever you think me as.


Doesn't help much, but it helps a bit.

Also this is clearly the best choice of avatar I have ever made.
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Wait are we IC?
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Wait are we IC?


Yeah, believe we can post now if we so desire.
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Doesn't help much, but it helps a bit.

Also this is clearly the best choice of avatar I have ever made.


It suits your name.
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Slightly rushing my post, but I should have one up in a bit.
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The first draft of my CS is done. It's not my best work yet, but it'd do. I'm just no good at grand sci-fi stuff like this haha.

@duck55223 I don't know what happened to you, but just remember that things are not as bad as they seemed.

I was severely late for an exam (one of my last exams before graduation, I might add!) two days ago, and whatever I managed to squeeze into my answer book (in the hour and 5 minutes that I have) may not even be graded because the rules state that I can be no later than 30 minutes.

I'm still smiling, still standing and still writing. Because there's always a solution to every problem.

The worse that could happen is that I get retained for one more semester. It's not even a year, and I'd have 6 days in a week to go to work; nothing has changed even in the worse case scenario. Can't get my dream job without my degree? Fine, then I'll work in some other place that I'd always wanted; I'm lucky I live in a country with endless employment prospects.

Then there're those stories of even worse mistakes... Such as one girl who put to sleep the wrong dog while working as a technician in a vet's, or people dropping out of university. Or even people who are way into their career ending up in court over $50 million dollars because their church might have spent it wrongly. Or just a student who decided to stab a professor over a fit of rage - you can forget about even getting retained if that happens.
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@Darkraven I realize this, however being a teenager I am still pretty moody atm.

And behold my post in all of it's glory.
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@duck55223 Yeah well, give it days and weeks, and you'll see your troubles evaporating. It happens all the time. All the time. It's only a matter of time. In the meantime, watch a movie, hang out with your friends or play games. Have a vacation. The older you grow, the easier it gets. Most people would venture you say that everything gets tougher the older you are. They're mostly right, but when it comes to certain things like crisis management, they're wrong.
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The best part is that their sci-fi is currently 90% generic alien invasions. I can just imagine first contact.

"NO! WE'LL GIVE YOU OUR WATER! WE'LL BE YKUR SLAVES! JUST DON'T EAT US!"
"Oops this one had people on it."
"DON'T TURN US INTO LIVING BATTERIES TO SERVE YOUR ROBOT OVERLORDS! PLEASE!"
"Dude, calm down. We didn't know you were here."
"EAT RICHARD FIRST! NOBODY LIKE RICHARD!"



As for posts, you'll hopefully be meeting Commander Fuckdisciplineillcookbreakfastformycrewwheneveriwant tomorrow.


@Darkraven That would make for one hell of a alien movie

Trooper: Command, we have made contact with the alien vessel
Command: What do you se-
T: AAAAHHHH They're everywhere! AAAAHHHHH
C: Come in Jenkins! Come in! Whose there?!
T: Aliens! They're all around!
C: What do they look like?
T: I don't f*cking know! There all in pods!
C: ...Jenkins... you're a moron...


lol. I have some interesting things lined up. I'm not so sure if things will go down peacefully though; anything could go wrong :) especially considering the nature of the sabotages and the alien communication barrier and everything...
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I'll have a nation sheet made soon I hope, I'm jumping between concepts right now trying to find one instead of recycling the same old Collective or Ghaj again lol
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I will post my final idea into the character tab. Since i haven't decided if i want to play the bugs in this campaign.

Since i got another idea.

You may decide which one you'd rather see. Bugs, or the ancient.



The plan was to be a mysterious entity of space, whom (with difficulty) could become a powerful ally in a war.

The ancient idea enables me to actually interact with other civilizations, and move with a purpose.
This and the bugs are horrendously under-powered compared to the other races.
I mean no spaceships, the hives while efficient at taking over eco-systems have little to bring in a larger conflict with an organised military.
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I will post my final idea into the character tab. Since i haven't decided if i want to play the bugs in this campaign.

Since i got another idea.

You may decide which one you'd rather see. Bugs, or the ancient.



The plan was to be a mysterious entity of space, whom (with difficulty) could become a powerful ally in a war.

The ancient idea enables me to actually interact with other civilizations, and move with a purpose.
This and the bugs are horrendously under-powered compared to the other races.
I mean no spaceships, the hives while efficient at taking over eco-systems have little to bring in a larger conflict with an organised military.


I like both, but the ancients add more to the overall universe if you ask me.
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I like both, but the ancients add more to the overall universe if you ask me.


What do you think about Religious Nuts who hate technology (Especially robots)? I'm kinda do a cross between Stargate Wraith and Star Wars Yuuzhan Vong with a lot of Sep thrown in there too.
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What do you think about Religious Nuts who hate technology (Especially robots)? I'm kinda do a cross between Stargate Wraith and Star Wars Yuuzhan Vong with a lot of Sep thrown in there too.


Aww yes, Yuuzhan Vong!
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Aww yes, Yuuzhan Vong!


Religion, Organic Tech and hating things!

What's more fun?!

Just throwing in the extra stuff for some uniqueness and to make them more fun for me.
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W.I.P.

Done the species and some overviews, how does it look so far? so I know if anything needs changed before I continue.

Name of Nation: Trak'Yull
Species: Same as Nation Name

Description of government: Religious Matriarchy
Description of military: Their military, in terms of ground forces composes of several ground beasts augmented with biological implants, as well as large forces of Raknor which are ape like creatures that reside on their planet. Semi-sentient biological implants allow them to be used essentially as drones via a telepathic link making them the commonly seen cannon fodder in conflicts between hives on the surface of the planet. Specialized forces do posses the Trak'Yull themselves as soldiers rather than leaders however due to their acrobatic prowess these rolls are highly specialized, and some are even given implants to help make them stronger.

Naval forces consist of fleets each with a flagship that is ran by a Queen. There are roughly 25 fleets however more are being grown. Each fleet when given an objective is responsible for ensuring that it's own vessels follow the orders of the correct queen and that they don't interfere with operations ran by another. The fact that there is a hive link gives them uncanny precision and tactics for working together as they all essentially become one unit together however if that link is suddenly lost they would devolve into chaos.
Technological Overview:
Their technology is all bioligical. They have no real "Technology" and think such things are an abhorrence of nature. They use various organic methods even for space travel.

=Nuk'ral=

Nuk'ral are small sea faring crustaceans that are the basis off all the Trak'Yulls armour for both their ships and their soldiers. One of the few creatures that can be influenced with telepathy without any implants they are planted and grown in vast fields within their home planets oceans, and then when ready whoever (should) be using the product is used to bring them together into a coherent shape. Armour is the simplest and takes very few due to the hard shell the Nuk'Ral naturally have, and their ability to bond together to share nutrients. Ships take several different creatures to bond to them.

A beast of burden near the end of it's life is used as the brain, and center of the ship. Typically one with a large enough head as what happens next is quite different. The scalp is removed without damaging the brain/killing the beast and the brain is connected to the Nuk'ral essentially making them an extension of itself. Then as more and more Nuk'ral join on it becomes a more complex organism joining everything together. Complex creatures are used for weapon systems, doors, and engines. Though it is all based upon the Nuk'rals ability to act as both armour plating and as a nervous system for the ship.

=Nuk'trath=

Nuk'trath are essentially spitters, that when fed material such as rock they can heat up the rock with an acid substance that essentially make them into balls of plasma. Powerful weapons they can come in varying sizes, however they of course require regular feeding and are fire and forget systems. If they build up for several seconds when firing however the projectile launches at greater speed and is more deadly.

=Tra'lok=

Tra'lok is the engine unit of spaceships, and other aerial craft. Nobody really knows where these particular beats come from, if they originate naturally or were manufactured however they can essentially distort gravity. The bigger the Tra'lok the more gravity they can distort. Ships use these in lieu of technological engines to push/pull the ship through space, and if given time to charge and a point in space to focus on they can pull the ship into a region of subspace (Which requires several jumps just to move to the next solar system over). However while they cannot do a full jump and require to do a jump even to the next solar system in intervals they also need to give both the Tra'lok time to recover and the ships hull, which appears to weaken from a strange radiation found in subspace.

=Th'n=

Th'n are strange little creatures, when squeezed they produce an electrical charge and don't actually "Eat" but instead die if you remove them from salt water for even a second, and need the water to be clean. They are used in weapon systems and to help provide the central brain on ships with enough power to give commands to their entire bodies. Used in the melee weapons used by the infantry to electrify they can also be fired at an enemy, or an enemy ship, as even while dead they have a residual charge that can be quite effective against targets.

=Ichn=

Ichn are small organisms that are born in twins, that are linked. Upon "bonding" with a Trak'yull they are capable of relaying communication between them, they do this as their partner mimics the face of the two people having the conversation and then via a mental link they actually create speech. Other than their ability to communicate with one another they have no real ability to do anything else.

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Cultural Overview:
=Hives=

After the events of the Angel Moon that nearly destroyed the planet and their very civilization all hives banded together under one Queen. This Queen is the strongest, and the most powerful and influential of all those below her. She still has control of her own private hive however which she can use as she sees fit however most Queens chose to use this hive as a personal reserve force as their is a large degree of personal manuevering within the five hives.

=Religion=

There are five hives on Traks Paradise (Trak'lii in their native tounge), each representing a God. The most auspicious, and powerful being Trak'Phon - Traks Chosen. They are believed to be from the first evolutionary family that spawned the entire species. They are also generally the most powerful when it comes to the mental link, and have always ruled the planet since the Hives united.

They are the hive of Trak. The god who spawned the entire universe from severing off his own right hand, as such it is a common ritual for many high ranking people within this sect to cut off their right hands and have it replaced with an organic replacement from some other form of creature (Depending on what role they perform in society). There is also a high degree of attempts to keep the blood line pure within this hive, and any offspring that are not perfect are killed.

Tra'Phon are the chosen of Tra. Tra is the god of space and time, and as such this hive has largely pursued ways of space travel, and feel that being in space will bring them closer to the god of their name sake. As such most of the space faring Trak'yull are from this hive.
History:
Other:
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W.I.P.

Done the species and some overviews, how does it look so far? so I know if anything needs changed before I continue.

Name of Nation: Trak'Yull
Species: Same as Nation Name

Description of government: Religious Matriarchy
Description of military: Their military, in terms of ground forces composes of several ground beasts augmented with biological implants, as well as large forces of Raknor which are ape like creatures that reside on their planet. Semi-sentient biological implants allow them to be used essentially as drones via a telepathic link making them the commonly seen cannon fodder in conflicts between hives on the surface of the planet. Specialized forces do posses the Trak'Yull themselves as soldiers rather than leaders however due to their acrobatic prowess these rolls are highly specialized, and some are even given implants to help make them stronger.

Naval forces consist of fleets each with a flagship that is ran by a Queen. There are roughly 25 fleets however more are being grown. Each fleet when given an objective is responsible for ensuring that it's own vessels follow the orders of the correct queen and that they don't interfere with operations ran by another. The fact that there is a hive link gives them uncanny precision and tactics for working together as they all essentially become one unit together however if that link is suddenly lost they would devolve into chaos.
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Cultural Overview:
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I don't know why, but I keep thinking of the Zerg when I read this XD
Still, looking good tho
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I don't know why, but I keep thinking of the Zerg when I read this XD
Still, looking good tho


"Evolution complete."
"Metamorphosis complete."
"YOUR DRONES ARE UNDER ATTACK!"
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I shall then strive to make my ancient as interesting as possible, so i can play it within the campaign.
Do note that i will not be playing in the same way as the others, which i did plan on beforehand. Just so people aren't confused about how my faction/race works.

Also, i will write the info hidden. So that if you want to as a player, can not know how my race works so it's more of a mystery.
I think it would be more fun that way :)



Please tell me what you think Keyguyperson. If the race lives up to your expectations, and if there is anything that should be tweaked.
I will also Pm you a question.
When/if the race is approved, i will add it to the approved races and try to figure out my introduction.

Also, is there an official update time on this? Like every day, or once a week or something. Just so i know so i don't post too much/too little?
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