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Philosophical differences between characters, I bet you understand--Also, I'll make sure to do as you suggested. I forgot to adjust the age when rewriting the sheet, my bad xD Kinsakwi believes that the dark side of the force only exists as long as its users exist, kind of like a deviation from the "balance", which is the Light side.

Also, I meant on Tatooine.
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that makes more sense, Frettzo.

and we figured on the Tattooine bit... it was just too chuckleworthy not to mention.
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Hehe :p It's fine, though I can't find the part of her CS where I wrote that now o.o

Also, are you sure you're fine with her views upon the Dark Side of the Force, Ellri? I can change it to mix better with the mainstream philosophy if you think it's for the best.

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Its in the skills section, first Para.

Kinsa's belief isn't really problematic. Unless we go out on a deep tangent away from plausible canon, it is not as if the theory will actually be possible to test.

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Just throwing this out here, but I'm creating a padawan who obviously gets captured, and if there's anyone who has a master character without a padawan, then I think we could work something out. If not, then I'll just create a NPC master who gets fried during the Sacking. Let me know.
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Just throwing this out here, but I'm creating a padawan who obviously gets a captured, and if there's anyone who has a master character without a padawan, then I think we could work something out. If not, then I'll just create a NPC master who gets fried during the Sacking. Let me know.


I got one, but I am unsure if @Vietmyke is still planning to be my Padawan.
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Actually, I think I'm going to bow out of the RP. I was going for a fast moving, knife fighter style of character but since most of the characters who are being accepted seem to be over-the-top Force users I don't think Dede would fit in very well.

Best of luck with the story.


I really disagree(in the politest of ways.) If you get basic Tutaminis, you can negate the threat of the Force owning her in combat situations. Not to mention, most of this RP is going to be about exploring the opposite sides of the Force and what it can take to get pulled to the other side. While combat will happen, it won't be a main focus.

I think your idea can still work with two normal Lightsabers, but Sep is the resident expert on that. He can help you with figuring all that jazz out.
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<Snipped quote by Genni>

I really disagree(in the politest of ways.) If you get basic Tutaminis, you can negate the threat of the Force owning her in combat situations. Not to mention, most of this RP is going to be about exploring the opposite sides of the Force and what it can take to get pulled to the other side. While combat will happen, it won't be a main focus.

I think your idea can still work with two normal Lightsabers, but Sep is the resident expert on that. He can help you with figuring all that jazz out.


Truedat.

Come back to us Genni. EXPLORE THE MYSTERIES OF THE FORCE WITH US.

IS THERE A LIGHT SIDE? IS THERE A DARK SIDE?

ONLY YOU CAN HELP US FIND OUT @GENNI
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Mostly done, please see the bottom of the CS for two questions!
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Alright @Rtron, we have reviewed your characters.

Sish and Nazca are fine, and accepted by all three GMs.
Zanna, however, needs a little bit of nerfing on the power front. Here is a revised power list for her.

Zanna’s powers:
Force Deflection OR Tutaminis(adv)
Force slow
Force fear
Force Lightning
Drain Knowledge
Sith Alchemy

We would suggest her simply knowing a lot of languages instead of Comprehend Speech.

With that out of the way, Zanna will be in acceptable state.

I do remind you to fulfill the Additional Requirement for all Characters.
Even Veterans such as yourself must do it in case of major catastrophe… which we really hope doesn’t occur.


Fixed!

I'll write those up tonight.
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*grabs shove and pick axe*

If I don't come back... Sent Xid to Nyiss' bedroom, let Shiri take Navi, and murder Jayda in an epic way. I'm going in!!!
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Hope I'm not late to the party! Love the idea by the way.


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It's ready!!!:)

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So, what do you guys think? What do I need to change?

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Working on reviewing, seriously heavily, the CSes folks. With a machete and battle axe wielding dragon...

One thing I feel I should mention while I'm at it, namely for combative focused PCs which I've spotted a few, this rp mainly focuses less on physical combat or struggle compared to most Jedi rps. There will be likely little chance you'll be using them much, if at all, in the rp which means you're piling your PC with abilities that essential are pointless. I request you please take in consideration when you build a PC what their personality, bio, and more would make sense for them to have.

More abilities, combative styles or experience doesn't mean greater strength. It just means more that gets in the way while you're fighting as well more likely hood your PC will meet an early grave. It also means less chance to cooperate with others to escape your captors or outwit the other Sith, points which are critical for this rp. If your PC can stand alone in a fight against an army of Empire Troopers, or a few Sith, without breaking a sweat then I highly doubt the PC would be suitable for this rp. I value PC flavor over power which was the foundation for this rp back in the first round.
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@ Frettzo With the changes talked about in the Chat, I give my approval, and unless Echo or Ellri has any reasons, it should be CS tab able.
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@Sep Sorry Sep, I don't think I'm going to have time atm. Nor can I come up with a character that I like. Trashy paddy-ones are trashy.
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I'm home now, will have my CS up in a bit. (After Game of Thrones, hehe). I think I'm gonna roll with a human Sith, I came up with a character that should fit right into this RP.
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Time for criticism of your sheet, @Feisty-pants.
Your character is ridiculously overpowered.
It takes a lifetime to master a single lightsaber form. Nobody, no matter how prodigious, masters three in a fifth of that time.

We ran a quick Mary Sue test on your character, and it failed. Miserably.
105 points, to be precise. That is more than twice what you need to be in the extremely high chance range.

Your “flaws” only make your character work better, not weakening it. When something is normal for Jedi, then it is not a flaw for a Jedi.
The one thing that might have been almost a flaw, you reversed to an advantage. You do know that flaws detract from a character’s function, not add to it, right?

As mentioned above. Even mastery of a single lightsaber form at the young age of 23 is beyond improbable. Mastery of three forms doesn’t happen.

Your other skills have no explanation for how she gained them beyond them being extremely convenient to have.

Telepathy is highly unreliable in star wars. Its not used to read minds. For most, it can send vague concepts, a few can send words.

Most humans become padawans around the age of twelve to fourteen, or in wartime or if they’ve been raised from infancy as Jedi it might be a few years earlier. Becoming one at the age of seven isn’t “at last”. It is very, very early. Initiate training takes much more than four years.

You give no details about how she’s of any use in anything other than combat. Nothing to explain other skills.

Not even a prodigy can easily defeat someone with many years of experience in actual combat. Sith who aren’t mere apprentices (which is the great majority) are extremely powerful. If they’re not masters of combat, they are highly skilled with the Force. For someone to rise to the rank of Sith Lord, they will have fought their way up for decades, been on the watch against their peers the whole time. Even Jedi masters can be in trouble when faced with a trained Sith Lord who has mastered either combat or especially the Force.

Again, rising to the rank of Jedi master takes decades, not just a few years.

The final secret has no reasoning or logic behind it. The citizens of the Empire are raised to hate the republic and all it stands for. The Sith even more so. One of them would hardly abandon that cause when they are finally getting their revenge, let alone for a life in poverty.

To sum it all up:
Your character has no flaws of note, has skills for someone ten times her age, has no depth to speak of and is lacking in logic.

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