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@Mugin Make sure to tell us when you've finished editing!
Hidden 9 yrs ago Post by Akashi Mayhiro
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It's fifty fifty really bro.

Get money, don't fuck bitches.

Pay bills instead.
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Partisan Vuurvos / Dion

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@Akashi Mayhiro I don't do any of the things like that.
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@Partisan

Well la de fucking da XD

But that's good :)
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@Savato ok I am done with my CS sorry it took so long.
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Took Partisan's style here. Anyway, review is red.
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@Savato ok I added in the edits.
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@Mugin Seems legit. The Heterosexual thing was a joke to mock stupid SJW's, he can be hetero. I approve, post him in the char bin with a cool title and send me your skype by PM if you wanna join the chat!
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I'd love the opportunity to join this RP if you'll all have me. Still reading the front page, forgive me if this kind of post in un-allowed.
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@Write You may join yes yes c:
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Great I'll have my CS up as soon as possible.
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EDIT: Sorry for the double post, that was an oversight. Also the CS is in a different format, something I'm more akin to. Hopefully it still has all of the requirements, I believe it does.
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@Write Alright bro, let me just give you a few pointers before either a colleague or myself reviews you:

-You're being that ONE GUY with the different CS. That alone isn't a BIG issue, however it does bring one problem: We have it organized in a specific manner to make it easier for us to check on certain information. Yoshua's CS' are cool and all but they mostly fit his RP's. The biggest problem I have is the Canon Just not being sorted by Rank. Plus it literally only takes five minutes to transfer information from this CS to the other. The special traits can be put in fighting style (chakra levels aren't too relevant in this RP for many reasons).

-Personality is short. Doesn't have to be massive, but it is shorter than many of your custom jutsu, like c'mon.
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Yosh's CS?

That skeleton is from NewGen. If anything it's Fieryfly's CS. Just gonna be a dick and point that out.
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The NewGen style of CS's has seen so many changes, like every GM in that RP has contributed to it.
Hidden 9 yrs ago 9 yrs ago Post by Write
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Clearly the other CS left a poor taste in everyone's mouth. I apologize for that and offer you the correct Cs. I apologize for any ill will that may have come attached to said CS.



EDIT: I believe that is all of the requested changes. If I missed something please let me know, I did delete Coercion by the way. Can't come up with a replacement just this second so it'll have to do how it is, my second character is coming up (if we're allowed multiple I don't believe there was anything against it in the rules and most people in the RP seem to have more than one character.
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@Write Not so much a poor taste. I was one of the creators of that CS you used, taking inspiration from a fellow Naruto RPer called Yoshua. After that, everyone just added a bit and it became what you posted.

There's even an updated version somewhere with like, banners, pictures and stuff instead of 'Personal details' it'd say 'Personal details' in a banner or so. But that one never caught on.

It's not a poor taste IMO, but it just doesnt fit the RP as well as the one I've created for this RP. For example: position.

We don't have anything that remotely resembles a position, because you already have a rank. That is, more or less, your position.

I'll grade the CS now.
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My comments will be in read within the CS.

Clearly the other CS left a poor taste in everyone's mouth. I apologize for that and offer you the correct Cs. I apologize for any ill will that may have come attached to said CS.



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I'll make the necessary changes and replace the Jutsu that have been denied. Thanks for your time!
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