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I ask again...

Okay, this looks interesting. Ya'll wouldn't mind someone else applying would you? �

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They're still accepting you know; just sent in my character to have it reviewed just in case I need to remove anything that is unrequired or change it so it fits better with the setting. Mastery over gravity and force is chief among his earliest pursuits. He started off in humility, but his ambition was limitless. Who could have divined the prophetic import of something as unremarkable as a switch in the force of a mere man?

Thar, Otaku.
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Alright, so, opinions, reviews, decisions, etc. Whatever I can do to make the man who held up the heavens right, just say so gms and or people looking over my app, I am not so adverse to change as I once was xP

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@Savo

Did KoL get back to you on revisions?
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@Savo

Did KoL get back to you on revisions?


Nope, nein, not at all, decided to post it here; I feel a bit guilty and crap, but I felt it would of been better if all the gms looked it over instead to see if they can find anything to pick it apart rather than one (even though KoL is the main gm). Might find things the others missed.

Edit: Also, the Jester originally came from the older iterations of this rp, huh? Welp, guess I know what his tome can do now!~
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@Savo

Ah. I asked because we've already given our verdict to an extent as a whole. Thought KoL would have told you.

Edit: Also, the Jester originally came from the older iterations of this rp, huh? Welp, guess I know what his tome can do now!~


You're wrong.
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@Savo

Ah. I asked because we've already given our verdict to an extent as a whole. Thought KoL would have told you.

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You're wrong.


SSSSSHHHH, LET ME LIVE IN MY IGNORANCE DAMNIT.

Also, nope; I wouldn't mind if you told me the verdict now and what not. That way I could improve my character and what needs to be changed.
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I mostly said that you can cut down or cut out most of his equipment since it's really not necessary, though you can keep the explanation for his gas mask. Furthermore, I noticed you used a Pi measurement to describe the radius of his gravity. Maybe you could use something a little easier to understand to describe the distance of his field of attack.

Anything to add @McFazzer?
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I mostly said that you can cut down or cut out most of his equipment since it's really not necessary, though you can keep the explanation for his gas mask. Furthermore, I noticed you used a Pi measurement to describe the radius of his gravity. Maybe you could use something a little easier to understand to describe the distance of his field of attack.

Anything to add @McFazzer?


Alright, I took care of the pi stuff - blame my math abilities since I'm meh when it comes to that stuff as I couldn't remember wtf I was supposed to use pi for; area along with the radius or just area xP

I can understand this - cutting down dress shoes and the contact lens for now, unless you meant the hoodie. I can see what you mean, as kicking someone square in the jaw with those things is over kill already and completely unnecessary with his weapons and fists... that or I was comically missing the point. Eh, whatever, he is dangerous enough as is; don't need to make his whole body a weapon xP
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Not much to add really. I think using the word "radius" would be a simple substitute for Pi. Like Windel said, some of the extra descriptions of equipment were a bit unnecessary.

That said I liked the inclusion of the combat style, it was a nice touch. But yeah, I basically have nothing to add :P
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I mostly said that you can cut down or cut out most of his equipment since it's really not necessary, though you can keep the explanation for his gas mask. Furthermore, I noticed you used a Pi measurement to describe the radius of his gravity. Maybe you could use something a little easier to understand to describe the distance of his field of attack.

Anything to add @McFazzer?


@TheWindel@Savo

Not much to add really. I think using the word "radius" would be a simple substitute for Pi. Like Windel said, some of the extra descriptions of equipment were a bit unnecessary.

That said I liked the inclusion of the combat style, it was a nice touch. But yeah, I basically have nothing to add :P


At any rate, removed the contact lens from equipment, removed some unnecessary explanations/toned it down, and changed the footwear to make it rather weak on protection. Don't expect it to protect him from any attacks that slice, smash, or pierce... unless the weapon is really horrible, like a dull knife.

Fixed some errors that were minor, and the things you mentioned. I did not make any changes to the hoodie, with the exception of summarizing why he improved it. If you wish for this to be changed, just say the word.
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Hey Savo, did you actually manage to find my old character :D?
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Hey Savo, did you actually manage to find my old character :D?


You mean this one?



The older rps had some... strange characters. Also, you can blame me for Rune dropping out of the previous iteration.
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@Savo

Should be fine for now. Wait for KoL's final verdict.
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Should be fine for now. Wait for KoL's final verdict.


Glad to hear! Now, time to prep a post for this rp by reading things! Like the ooc, despite it not having anything relevant to the story at hand :D
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You mean this one?



The older rps had some... strange characters. Also, you can blame me for Rune dropping out of the previous iteration.


Well, it's the Crimson Sky. Of course it's going to be strange~
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The older rps had some... strange characters. Also, you can blame me for Rune dropping out of the previous iteration.


wait no.

I read that wrong.

Ignore me.

Blame tacos for my shenanigans.

I dunno what I'd blame you for though. I dropped out because of some...uhm, RL issues I do believe. I think it had something to do with college. I dunno, my memory doesn't work that far.
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Well, it's the Crimson Sky. Of course it's going to be strange~


You had androids, yoikai that looked like fish and tiger melded together, along with a god that could basically be the rendition of an eldritch abomination... Then again, that might be the norm here, especially with 100+ year old charries having a possible thing for 15 year old lolis, tsunderes, a girl/boy making poor decisions with their life... ignore the last two, those actually happen a lot in anime. Beg my forgiveness if the 100+ person infatuated with lolis stuff is common as I still need to get back into da mix of animu.~
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@Savo

To be fair, all of that randomness was a factor to why that RP declined.
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@Savo

To be fair, all of that randomness was a factor to why that RP declined.


I'm sorry if I came off as bit condescending, but I was merely attempting to poke fun at some of the characters here and there... but if that's the case, then I understand why the way things are now. Still must of been a bit entertaining for the while!
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