I ask again...
Okay, this looks interesting. Ya'll wouldn't mind someone else applying would you? �
Okay, this looks interesting. Ya'll wouldn't mind someone else applying would you? �
They're still accepting you know; just sent in my character to have it reviewed just in case I need to remove anything that is unrequired or change it so it fits better with the setting. Mastery over gravity and force is chief among his earliest pursuits. He started off in humility, but his ambition was limitless. Who could have divined the prophetic import of something as unremarkable as a switch in the force of a mere man?
@Savo
Did KoL get back to you on revisions?
Edit: Also, the Jester originally came from the older iterations of this rp, huh? Welp, guess I know what his tome can do now!~
@Savo
Ah. I asked because we've already given our verdict to an extent as a whole. Thought KoL would have told you.
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You're wrong.
I mostly said that you can cut down or cut out most of his equipment since it's really not necessary, though you can keep the explanation for his gas mask. Furthermore, I noticed you used a Pi measurement to describe the radius of his gravity. Maybe you could use something a little easier to understand to describe the distance of his field of attack.
Anything to add @McFazzer?
I mostly said that you can cut down or cut out most of his equipment since it's really not necessary, though you can keep the explanation for his gas mask. Furthermore, I noticed you used a Pi measurement to describe the radius of his gravity. Maybe you could use something a little easier to understand to describe the distance of his field of attack.
Anything to add @McFazzer?
@TheWindel@Savo
Not much to add really. I think using the word "radius" would be a simple substitute for Pi. Like Windel said, some of the extra descriptions of equipment were a bit unnecessary.
That said I liked the inclusion of the combat style, it was a nice touch. But yeah, I basically have nothing to add :P
Hey Savo, did you actually manage to find my old character :D?
@Savo
Should be fine for now. Wait for KoL's final verdict.
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You mean this one?Suki"You wish to fight me? What might be the reason for it? Pride? Fame? Very well, I'll accept your challenge. Hm? There's no need to make such a scary expression, I promise to be gentle."
Name: Suki Enkou
Age: Appears to be 18
Gender: Female
Race: Youkai/Ex-Human/Vessel
Height: 5’2”
Weight: 47kg Most of her weight is situated at her chest
Blood Type: AB
Affiliation: Lawful Neutral
Aliases/Titles: Princess of the Crimson World/Sky, Scarlet Princess, Fragment(of the Crimson Sky)
Appearance: Seemingly wears an odd, almost ceremonial like clothing, that makes one think of a brilliant yet elegant flame. With light red thigh highs matching her dress and detached sleeves, it isn't hard to imagine her as a fire priestess.
Although at the time when she's serious or angry, it seems her clothes and hair darkens, as though dipped in blood, while her eyes take on a more yellowish glow. Even her usually cheerful gaze drastically changes to a more sharper, cold gaze, as if she was deducing how many different ways she could tear through your flesh from where she stands.
Personality: Despite how dangerous everyone makes Suki out to be, they couldn't be farther from the truth. Despite having that much power, she generally does not require it that often. Whenever fights occur within the Crimson Sky, she can be found floating in a seated position nearby, merely observing, only to repair any damages caused to the landscape when the battle concludes.
For those who have met and spoke with the girl, they would tell you that, while she still has her innocence befitting of her age, with happiness and naivety on a normal basis, underneath lies a very observant and ponderous individual. Granted, that is very hard to see, as she usually acts quite playful around others.
For someone whole is nigh on immortal. Rei is suprisingly level-headed. She never picks a fight unless she has too, and even then goes easy on her opponents unless directed otherwise. Provoking does nearly nothing, however one could just simply ask her to duel.
However, if you manage to actually anger her too much (good luck trying), you are going to be harassed constantly by the environment itself. Even a trip to the relieve yourself will become messy, figuratively and literally.
Background: Suki was born as a normal human, and led a pretty mundane sort of life, before she accidentally stumbled her way into the Crimson Sky. While wandering about, she had managed to stumble her way into the distortion known as the Deeper Shadows. However, by utter chance, she ended up acquiring a piece of Chikage's powers, which to this day Rei still doesn't know how that had occurred. It could be compared to being struck by lightning out of everyone around, as how she compared it.
Through that event that changed her life, Suki has spent most of her existence watching over the Crimson Sky, making sure no one goes overboard and caused a large scale calamity.
Powers: Having a piece of Chikage’s powers within her, so long as she is within that world, she can alter/change the world, whether through appearance, physics, or even transporting others from here and there. It could be said that she is nigh on invincible in there, although others argue that high-power exorcism can temporarily drive her back.
However, that is merely rumors. While she can affect the physical aspects of the Crimson Sky, that is it. Basically, it’s like collapsing or piecing together buildings, roads, the surroundings for the more easily noticeable, to the increase and decrease of gravity’s forces, and even portals from one area to another. What is the most important part of her powers, is that she keeps the Deeper Shadows from spreading. Repairing the distortions that seem to creep farther and farther, else maybe the entire world is consumed.
While it sounds powerful, most if not all her attacks via the world are merely nuisances. collapsing buildings can be easily blasted from, sudden prison of steel springing up can be crushed, and the changes in gravity are nonlethal, only annoying. Even her ‘immortality’ is just simply Chikage's powers sustaining her.
What is interesting is that, while seemingly invincible in the Crimson, in the normal world, Suki becomes as vulnerable as a normal human. Her abilities in the normal world are reduced to simply opening portals in existing shadows, and being unable to age.
Skills:
-The ins and outs of the Crimson Sky
-Physica control over the Crimson Sky
-Creating portals
-Basic use of spears
-Bringing unsuspecting people into the Crimson Sky/Real World
Weapons: Ceremonial Spear
Equipment: Her clothes?
Other: There sometimes can be small Yokai that trail after her, almost as if they were taking shelter from more powerful Yokai by hiding within her shadow. Whatever the reason, if you stay too long beside Suki, you mighty have small Yokai using you as a playground.
She is the 'fragment' of the 'embodiment' of the Crimson Sky
She is surprisingly easily flustered.
The older rps had some... strange characters. Also, you can blame me for Rune dropping out of the previous iteration.
The older rps had some... strange characters. Also, you can blame me for Rune dropping out of the previous iteration.
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Well, it's the Crimson Sky. Of course it's going to be strange~
@Savo
To be fair, all of that randomness was a factor to why that RP declined.