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@Fat Boy Kyle OKey this has been written so far. Picture and desctiption will be added tomorrow hwne I get home.


At the risk of sounding like a hypocrite, your grammar could use a little bit of tidying up here and there. TBF I only saw mild mistakes, I just like criticising thing. As you said, you still need to do the appearance section. The only thing I'd really like to see is a little more on the vampire aspect; simply because there's so many different kinds of vampirism in the Elder Scrolls Universe. But overall I like the character and unless anyone else has a problem I'm happy to accept her.
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I am going to not put sexuality on my sheet. I don't see it's relevance.


That's completely fair and I'm happy for anyone to leave it. The CS should be used as a guide/template, but players are free to edit it as they see fit. I only put it there for a couple of reasons: a) because it can be argued that people shouldn't be assumed to be heterosexual (but I'm not going to get into gender/sexuality politics haha); and b) just so people had the choice to state it if they wanted to.
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Sexuality is more fluid than appearance and personality. I'll just let the game happen, don't see any point in labelling my character
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y'all need to stop being so progressive, you're making me look bad haha
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y'all need to stop being so progressive, you're making me look bad haha


It's not that, you'll be lucky to see me touch romance with a ten foot pole. So I'm not going to bother including it.
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At the risk of sounding like a hypocrite, your grammar could use a little bit of tidying up here and there. TBF I only saw mild mistakes, I just like criticising thing. As you said, you still need to do the appearance section. The only thing I'd really like to see is a little more on the vampire aspect; simply because there's so many different kinds of vampirism in the Elder Scrolls Universe. But overall I like the character and unless anyone else has a problem I'm happy to accept her.


I know this isn't my RP, but I've run a few with a good friend and we always made it a point to make sure the players who played vampires were well aware that it is a very crippling curse and that if not hidden well, they will be killed for being a disgusting abomination. Same thing goes for werewolf characters. It's why we only ever had one vampire character in our years long experience GMing both independently and together.
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I know this isn't my RP, but I've run a few with a good friend and we always made it a point to make sure the players who played vampires were well aware that it is a very crippling curse and that if not hidden well, they will be killed for being a disgusting abomination. Same thing goes for werewolf characters. It's why we only ever had one vampire character in our years long experience GMing both independently and together.


No, it is a fair point. I think it ties into the rule about trying to keep your player balanced. The complication you get with the Elder Scrolls is that there are different types of Vamparism, and there's a ton of law in general. That said, assuming that she's the kind of Vampire found in Oblivion or Skyrim (not including Lords) then certainly she's going to have to play quite the balancing act. Does she feed regularly to appear mortal and withstand sunlight, at the risk of being caught? Or does she starve herself, causing her to move onto a more severe stage of vampirism where she get's stronger but obviously more monstrous? It's one of the reasons I asked for more info about her affliction.






Can't really see any issues. Could expand on the skills slightly, but tbf using the lvl system does give a fairly clear picture of the extent of her abilities. Once again, I'll let others have their say before accepting.




Just a note: Everyone that has either submitted a CS or spoken to me in PMs about a character has so far said their character is from or is currently in Skyrim. There's no issue with that, but I should make it clear that this RP isn't restricted to Skyrim. The Arc surrounding the war will for example be fought along the southern borders of Cyrodiil (at least to start with). The reason I mention Skyrim so often in the first OOC post is because of the importance of the events that transpired there given how recent it was.

P.S. Sorry for my long-ass replies. I tend to rabble a lot :P
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I spent all goddamned day on this.
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@Leidenschaft There is an Edit button on your post, just FYI.
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I've hidden the second post because I assume it was an accident. The server has occasional hiccups that can cause this.

Carry on.
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I've hidden the second post because I assume it was an accident. The server has occasional hiccups that can cause this.

Carry on.


I am really behind on the times apparently, or so looking at the Staff list has told me :L
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@Fat Boy Kyle can I haz shadow magic?
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@Leidenschaft you didn't use hiders. You are banned not only from this RP, but the entire Guild. Please wrap up any existing RPs you are involved with and leave.

But no seriously, apart from the lack of hiders, I don't really have any major issues. Personally I'd tweak the appearance section because it's a little vague (He looks like a Breton but has an Altmer face and body? What colour are the cold eyes?), but I know that some players like to leave the imagery to either the imagination or to IC description.

@Fat Boy Kyle can I haz shadow magic?


Uhhh. Hmmm. I don't know. Didn't even know what it was so I searched it on the wiki, and admittedly was a little hesitant when I read "Shadow Magic rivals even the power of the Elder Scrolls themselves, having the power to potentially change the past, present, and future through the manipulation of shadow." I suppose it really depends on where you want to go with it. Having been a part of your RPs I'm fairly confident you wouldn't make a character too OP, so I'm interested to see what you have in mind.
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Uhhh. Hmmm. I don't know. Didn't even know what it was so I searched it on the wiki, and admittedly was a little hesitant when I read "Shadow Magic rivals even the power of the Elder Scrolls themselves, having the power to potentially change the past, present, and future through the manipulation of shadow." I suppose it really depends on where you want to go with it. Having been a part of your RPs I'm fairly confident you wouldn't make a character too OP, so I'm interested to see what you have in mind.


Not going to go that OP. I just want to play with Shadows and freak people out and be evil.
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@Sep Make a CS
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@Sep Make a CS


Make me.




Yeah I will, after work.
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@Leidenschaft you didn't use hiders. You are banned not only from this RP, but the entire Guild. Please wrap up any existing RPs you are involved with and leave.

But no seriously, apart from the lack of hiders, I don't really have any major issues. Personally I'd tweak the appearance section because it's a little vague (He looks like a Breton but has an Altmer face and body? What colour are the cold eyes?), but I know that some players like to leave the imagery to either the imagination or to IC description.

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Uhhh. Hmmm. I don't know. Didn't even know what it was so I searched it on the wiki, and admittedly was a little hesitant when I read "Shadow Magic rivals even the power of the Elder Scrolls themselves, having the power to potentially change the past, present, and future through the manipulation of shadow." I suppose it really depends on where you want to go with it. Having been a part of your RPs I'm fairly confident you wouldn't make a character too OP, so I'm interested to see what you have in mind.


I tried eighteen times to make the hiders work and they did not. So I said fuck it and went to sleep. I'll try again today. It was like 12:30 by the time I posted, so I definitely wasn't on my A-game.

Also, I see now that my appearance pic wasn't working.

Edit: I don't know how I did it, but I fixed it.
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I tried eighteen times to make the hiders work and they did not. So I said fuck it and went to sleep. I'll try again today.


It's because you only have one centre tag, which is confusing it. Your image is also broken, a handy tip is when working on a post hit "Preview" and it will tell you if there are any errors.
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