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@Unlucky0013

About your character, even though I don't make a point of reviewing WIPs, here are my opinions about her abilities.

1 - This one is ok. I actually like it very much.

2 - Too strong as it stands. Limit that to any ability used within the previous Round and in said range, that she has means of using (can't use melee strikes with ranged weapons, or mage spells with occupied hands, abilities that require an avatar feature she doesn't have, etc...), for a more balanced skill. Also, fix that cooldown to 01 Round, since that's what 02 Actions are.

3 - The one that's uncrossed is a huge no. It's beyond OP (you can't end the RP with 09 Abilities while everyone else has 06; loss of feats doesn't compensate the gain of abilities under any circumstances). The crossed one is ok, though.

@Lucius Cypher & @TheWindel need to take a look at it as well. I'll be waiting for their replies.
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I think that third ability is whenever she's supposed to get a feat, she gets an ability instead but gets an ability instead and when she's supposed to get an ability at that level she gets a feat instead.

So like, at level 4, 6 and 8 she gains an ability but at level 5, 7 and 9 when you're supposed to get one she gets a feat instead
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I think that third ability is whenever she's supposed to get a feat, she gets an ability instead but gets an ability instead and when she's supposed to get an ability at that level she gets a feat instead.

So like, at level 4, 6 and 8 she gains an ability but at level 5, 7 and 9 when you're supposed to get one she gets a feat instead


Count again, Rofls, you get a feat at every level from 03 and beyond (not just 04, 06 and 08), this means that she would get and ability at Levels 04, 05, 06, 07, 08 and 09 and feats on levels 05, 07 and 09.

Do you see my point now?
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One of Lucius's characters hires Broker to destroy and discredit another of his characters in totality...well, a tall order but it should be interesting.
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Things get more complicated. Depending how Broker responds, Retsu might actually be able to help her.
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I actually have a plan for how to discredit Arms Slave and leave the Sweepers ripe for Retsu to sweep in and consolidate power, though it will depend on whether she can give Broker the information she needs and maybe some assistance getting where she needs to go.

Oh yes, assuming the plan works and Retsu is capable enough to spin the story, then Arms Slave will find himself with very few people wanting to even be seen with such a monumental failure. Nyahahahaha!
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leave the Sweepers ripe for Retsu to sweep in


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Would you believe me if I said that pun was unintentional?
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Well, we'll see how this pans out. The balls in yo court luv.
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I'll get on it right away then
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@Unlucky0013

About your character, even though I don't make a point of reviewing WIPs, here are my opinions about her abilities.

1 - This one is ok. I actually like it very much.

2 - Too strong as it stands. Limit that to any ability used within the previous Round and in said range, that she has means of using (can't use melee strikes with ranged weapons, or mage spells with occupied hands, abilities that require an avatar feature she doesn't have, etc...), for a more balanced skill. Also, fix that cooldown to 01 Round, since that's what 02 Actions are.

3 - The one that's uncrossed is a huge no. It's beyond OP (you can't end the RP with 09 Abilities while everyone else has 06; loss of feats doesn't compensate the gain of abilities under any circumstances). The crossed one is ok, though.

@Lucius Cypher & @TheWindel need to take a look at it as well. I'll be waiting for their replies.


@Unlucky0013

Pretty much agree with this. For her second ability, she can't use any Ability because she's still a Rouge. She can only use Abilities Rouges are able to use. As for her third Ability, I also agree. It's too OP and she can't learn another Class' Ability because again, she is a Rouge Class. She can't learn Abilities inherently special to Mages or Healers. Use the crossed out Level 3 Ability.
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Will use the crossed out third ability, but if youre saying I can't use a mimic ability as my second except against mirror matches than i might as well get my own.
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Sorry that I disappeared. I started an MTG RP. I'll have a post up soon, probably. I'm expecting Luci to bug the shit out of me until I do.
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How does this math make sense?
Level 1 – Default level
Level 2 – 10,000 EXP
Level 3 – 20,000 EXP
Level 4 – 40,000 EXP
Level 5 – 80,000 EXP
Level 6 – 200,000 EXP
Level 7 – 500,000 EXP
Level 8 – 750,000 EXP
Level 9 – 1,000,000 EXP
Total: 27,000,000 EXP spent on leveling up alone.

@KoL

Just checking this, but I think you added a zero and something else, because my total came to 2.6 Million EXP for the total.
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Just checking this, but I think you added a zero and something else, because my total came to 2.6 Million EXP for the total.


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*TheWindel snickers*
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Just checking this, but I think you added a zero and something else, because my total came to 2.6 Million EXP for the total.


*Hides evidence* "You're seeing too much, sir."
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My oh my, did KoL make a mathematical error? And you never double checked your math or corrected the very page from which all new players extract their information? My word!
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*TheWindel snickers more*
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Mind if Rufus comes in after your next post? I figure the merry few in the red guild should stick together, unless you'd like a friendly face to provide reason for Aaron and Emma to bail before the situation blows up in their faces. I'm flexible :3
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