[OOC] Deep Ground Online (Hiatus)

[KoL]

@Unlucky0013

About your character, even though I don't make a point of reviewing WIPs, here are my opinions about her abilities.

1 - This one is ok. I actually like it very much.

2 - Too strong as it stands. Limit that to any ability used within the previous Round and in said range, that she has means of using (can't use melee strikes with ranged weapons, or mage spells with occupied hands, abilities that require an avatar feature she doesn't have, etc...), for a more balanced skill. Also, fix that cooldown to 01 Round, since that's what 02 Actions are.

3 - The one that's uncrossed is a huge no. It's beyond OP (you can't end the RP with 09 Abilities while everyone else has 06; loss of feats doesn't compensate the gain of abilities under any circumstances). The crossed one is ok, though.

@Lucius Cypher & @TheWindel need to take a look at it as well. I'll be waiting for their replies.

[RoflsMazoy]

@KoL
I think that third ability is whenever she's supposed to get a feat, she gets an ability instead but gets an ability instead and when she's supposed to get an ability at that level she gets a feat instead.

So like, at level 4, 6 and 8 she gains an ability but at level 5, 7 and 9 when you're supposed to get one she gets a feat instead

[KoL]

@KoL
I think that third ability is whenever she's supposed to get a feat, she gets an ability instead but gets an ability instead and when she's supposed to get an ability at that level she gets a feat instead.

So like, at level 4, 6 and 8 she gains an ability but at level 5, 7 and 9 when you're supposed to get one she gets a feat instead

@RoflsMazoy

Count again, Rofls, you get a feat at every level from 03 and beyond (not just 04, 06 and 08), this means that she would get and ability at Levels 04, 05, 06, 07, 08 and 09 and feats on levels 05, 07 and 09.

Do you see my point now?

[Lonewolf685]

One of Lucius's characters hires Broker to destroy and discredit another of his characters in totality...well, a tall order but it should be interesting.

[Lucius Cypher]

Things get more complicated. Depending how Broker responds, Retsu might actually be able to help her.

[Lonewolf685]

@Lucius Cypher
I actually have a plan for how to discredit Arms Slave and leave the Sweepers ripe for Retsu to sweep in and consolidate power, though it will depend on whether she can give Broker the information she needs and maybe some assistance getting where she needs to go.

Oh yes, assuming the plan works and Retsu is capable enough to spin the story, then Arms Slave will find himself with very few people wanting to even be seen with such a monumental failure. Nyahahahaha!

[KoL]

@Lucius Cypher
leave the Sweepers ripe for Retsu to sweep in

@Lonewolf685

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[Lonewolf685]

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@KoL

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Would you believe me if I said that pun was unintentional?

[Lucius Cypher]

@Lonewolf685

Well, we'll see how this pans out. The balls in yo court luv.

[Lonewolf685]

I'll get on it right away then

[TheWendil]

@Unlucky0013

About your character, even though I don't make a point of reviewing WIPs, here are my opinions about her abilities.

1 - This one is ok. I actually like it very much.

2 - Too strong as it stands. Limit that to any ability used within the previous Round and in said range, that she has means of using (can't use melee strikes with ranged weapons, or mage spells with occupied hands, abilities that require an avatar feature she doesn't have, etc...), for a more balanced skill. Also, fix that cooldown to 01 Round, since that's what 02 Actions are.

3 - The one that's uncrossed is a huge no. It's beyond OP (you can't end the RP with 09 Abilities while everyone else has 06; loss of feats doesn't compensate the gain of abilities under any circumstances). The crossed one is ok, though.

@Lucius Cypher & @TheWindel need to take a look at it as well. I'll be waiting for their replies.

@KoL

@Unlucky0013

Pretty much agree with this. For her second ability, she can't use any Ability because she's still a Rouge. She can only use Abilities Rouges are able to use. As for her third Ability, I also agree. It's too OP and she can't learn another Class' Ability because again, she is a Rouge Class. She can't learn Abilities inherently special to Mages or Healers. Use the crossed out Level 3 Ability.

[Unlucky0013]

Will use the crossed out third ability, but if youre saying I can't use a mimic ability as my second except against mirror matches than i might as well get my own.

[VarionusNW]

Sorry that I disappeared. I started an MTG RP. I'll have a post up soon, probably. I'm expecting Luci to bug the shit out of me until I do.

[Lonewolf685]

How does this math make sense?
Level 1 – Default level
Level 2 – 10,000 EXP
Level 3 – 20,000 EXP
Level 4 – 40,000 EXP
Level 5 – 80,000 EXP
Level 6 – 200,000 EXP
Level 7 – 500,000 EXP
Level 8 – 750,000 EXP
Level 9 – 1,000,000 EXP
Total: 27,000,000 EXP spent on leveling up alone.

@KoL

Just checking this, but I think you added a zero and something else, because my total came to 2.6 Million EXP for the total.

[TheWendil]

Just checking this, but I think you added a zero and something else, because my total came to 2.6 Million EXP for the total.

@Lonewolf685

@KoL

*TheWindel snickers*

[Unlucky0013]

Brook Himura

Appearance:

Height: 175 cm

Weight: 53 kg

Hair Color: Black

Eye Color: Hazel

Name: Brook Himura

Age: 17

History:

Not much to say for the thirteen years she spent living at home. Family was average, school was average, life was average. Despite the average, however, Brook learned a lot as to real world responsibilities and how to properly take car of herself. This was all in preparation for her eventual acceptance into Purple Crown Academy, her parents leaving her with financial means to get by and one piece of advice: "It is the journey you travel and the people you acquaint that matters, not what comes when the last page of the book is turned." She wasn't really sure what her parents were trying to say, but she had plans not to disappoint them for getting her this far, taking stead in one of Purple Crown's dormitory as she finished her education.

Four years later, and her parent's advice made more sense. She made lots of friends and knew a great deal of people. Always acting friendly made her well known, if not actually popular. She lead a very sociable life, relaxing in her down time in the world of DGO. She leveled up where she could, but ultimately just spent time studying and practicing real-world skills that would help her once school was out for good.

Personality:

Brook has a weak heart, able to break down from the smallest of personal conflict, but is always able to perk back up again if given space. She won't forgive the wrongdoings sent her way, but she can at least make her publicly presentable as she plots from the darker corners from her mind. Personal feelings aside, her in game char is more friendly; not letting any of the 'fake' problems get to her as she relaxes in the virtual world. She's really up for anything, feeling that DGO is really more of an inconsequential playground for kids to get out all their young energy and urges than an actual program to dictate their future.

♖

Avatar Class: Rogue / Ranger

Avatar Profession: Infiltrator

Avatar Title: ♖

Avatar Level: 3 / EXP: 20,000

Avatar Guild: The Cobalt Bruisers of the Blue King (open to suggestions)

Avatar Abilities:
Lvl 1-Class Sampler: Can choose other class's feats instead of a Rogue's at level up if it's level requirement is same or lower than current level.

Lvl 2- Wild Cards: Can one-time cast any activated Skill that has been used in the last two rounds within 50 ft with instant use. Must have an appropriate means of use, (ie. free hand to cast spell, legal terms and conditions to activate) Cooldown: 1 round.

Lvl 3- Item Sanctuary: Equipped and stored weapons and armor cannot be under the effects of any buffs or hexes, and cannot be the target of feats or abilities.

Avatar Feats:
Lvl 3- Resurrection: Magic skill that lets you revive a dead ally after a five-second casting time. Has a ten-minute cooldown.

Other: Despite being a member of the Blue Guild, she does offer her talents to those who needs them without charge if she finds justice in her doing so.

[KoL]

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@KoL

Just checking this, but I think you added a zero and something else, because my total came to 2.6 Million EXP for the total.

@Lonewolf685

*Hides evidence* "You're seeing too much, sir."

[Lonewolf685]

@KoL

My oh my, did KoL make a mathematical error? And you never double checked your math or corrected the very page from which all new players extract their information? My word!

[TheWendil]

@KoL

*TheWindel snickers more*

[Lonewolf685]

@Mega Birb
Mind if Rufus comes in after your next post? I figure the merry few in the red guild should stick together, unless you'd like a friendly face to provide reason for Aaron and Emma to bail before the situation blows up in their faces. I'm flexible :3