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Hidden 8 yrs ago 8 yrs ago Post by Kimchi
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Looks like Aintitfun is poof so...
@ASplashofMusic you got next dibs you want the spot?
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The Psion


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The Psion


Several issues with her. Fix it, and she should be alright:

  • I don't quite understand how Shapeshifting is a psychic ability. It rather seems quite out of nowhere, so perhaps you could remove it?
  • Some of her abilities are OP. More specifically, the telekinesis. While you mentioned that ability is 'strong', it's never specified how strong. Perhaps you could give her a weight limit? Also, would her mind reading be just secluded to surface thoughts, or will she be able to pick up memories as well? Wouldn't she feel mentally exhausted?
  • Her backstory has an additional detail I'd like to question. How would she have survived the telekinetic explosion? I feel like she'd at least suffer a bit more physical damage.

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@Fubsy
1. I was hoping to keep shapeshifting, it's something I've yet to do. But I've no problem in removing it if it's that much of an issue.

2. I don't know exact weights here, so bear with me, but I was thinking along the lines of being able to toss small cars (at first. I imagine we would all get stronger as we train and stuff in the rp.).

2b. The Telepathy picks up surface thoughts at a basic level, but if she explicitly targets, and is able to beat their willpower/telepathic resistance then she would be able to get access to memories of up to the past 48 hours.

2c. Both abilities leave her mentally exaughsted if she uses them for a sustained amount of time/does big things with them.

3. I can edit in a few broken limbs, but I'm unwilling to have her have any permanent injuries at the get go. Since it was a year ago she'd be recovered at the time of the rp starting.

Should there be any more questions/changes needed to be made, please let me know. I'll edit these changes in once you say yay or nay to them.
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I'd rather you remove the shapeshifting and nerf the abilities a bit more.
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@Fubsy Keep in mind that her physical prowess is shit tier. She's not particularly fast, or strong.

I'll remove the shape-shifting, and I'm willing to nerf telekinesis to where she can lift and drop small cars. (I.e. A Fiat).

Other than that, I'd like to know what kind of nerfs you had in mind.

I would like to request I keep the shapeshifting, but limit it only to the appearances I previously stated in the CS. No more, no less.

If you're still bent on me removing it despite the only benefit it providing is getting away from pursuers easier, then I'll look for something else to replace it.
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If there's room, I'd like to join.

If there isn't, waiting list pls.
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It's best if you remove the shapeshifting in its entirety. While she is a Psion, she's also still human, so that ability feels completely out of left feild as its more physical rather than mental. No need to look for a replacement. Simply removing it would do.

As for the nerfs, perhaps you can shorten the distance limit on some of your abilities as well?
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@Fubsy Gonna need to know how far. Because a max range of 60 feet as her farthest reaching ability doesn't seem that bad to me, honestly. So I'm gonna need an idea what you're looking for.
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Finally just about finished this. Sorry for the delay.
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If there's room, I'd like to join.

If there isn't, waiting list pls.


I'm pretty sure there is space now, since everyone on the waiting list hasn't replied.
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Finally just about finished this. Sorry for the delay.


He can't copy powers doe right? If so accepted.
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He can't copy powers doe right? If so accepted.


He cannot copy powers.
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Ay Archibaldie, get yo ass in the game.
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So here we go:


Name: Subject #3761478
Age: Agefluid
Gender: Genderfluid (They/Them pronouns by default or animal, He/She depending on humanoid form assumed)
Species: Skinwalker
Abilities/Powers:
  • Shapeshifting - Bread and butter of skinwalker power is the ability to assume the form of any pelt they don, be that the skin of human or animal. Transformation includes perfect mimicry of appearance, voice, etc. This includes biologically-based powers as well as weaknesses i.e. strength of a werewolf and weakness to silver. Transformation does not make the skinwalker exempt from skinwalker-inherent weaknesses or skilled at using stolen powers. Partial transformation can be achieved, but combining forms cannot. Wounds sustained while transformed are transferred to other forms in roughly analogous locations. Eyes are considered unusual regardless of form.
    • Enhanced Speed - Capable of movement equal to the max speed of a traditional car. Only available in transformed form. Furthermore, as a result of this power, the gait of the assumed form is a flawed form of the assumed form's normal gait. Individuals with specific familiarity to the assumed form can identify this ruse as a result.
  • Calcifying Spit - The source of the skinwalker ability to 'spit human bones'. If the skinwalker's spit hits a target, that area quickly calcifies and becomes bone-like.
  • No Internal Organs - Because the US government has them. Grants whatever bonuses you'd get from not needing internal organs. For some reason still needs to drink and eat and sleep, even if critical hits don't really do anything.
  • Basic Mind Reading - If eye contact is maintained, the skinwalker can read immediate surface thoughts. Not particularly useful unless the skinwalker can make the target think about what they need them to.
Weakness/Control:
  • Primary control is white ash, irritating in small doses and fatal in large ones. Planted within the subject's body are devices designed to disperse ash into the body. Quantity of dispersed ash can be scaled up or down.
  • Secondary control is juniper berry injections, which suppress the subject's power and renders them vulnerable. Conduit is a dispenser located in the abdomen.
  • Tertiary control is the destruction of the subject's externally-located internal organs, which will lead to death as if they were connected to the body. These are in possession of the US government.
  • Traditional control is the identification and purposeful intonation of the skinwalker's true name, which quickly leads to death as the subject is subjected to every sin he has committed. The government is not in possession of the subject's true name, but a list of suspects have been narrowed down.
  • Emotional control is the individual known as [REDACTED] whose current status is [REDACTED]
Personality: Like Fanon!Reaper from Overwatch, I guess.
History: The history of the nameless skinwalker is one shrouded in darkness and tragedy. Even before humanity took over and subjugated the moonlit world, life has proven itself to have been twisted and unfair to the young being. Born as a regular human to a loving family, #3761478 once lived a carefree, happy life. They had friends, family, and fulfillment. They even had love, a love that was quickly corrupted and ultimately led to ruin and eternal torture for their lamenting soul.

At first their love was true, was of the greatest dedication, trust, and sanctity. That is, until their lover was indoctrinated by a dark cult of witches. #3761478 joined the cult at the behest of their love, but this was not a wise decision. The cult made him into a kinslaying monster. They were forced to slaughter their family one by one in pursuit of power. They tore out his organs and buried them with their kin. At the end of it all, they became a monster. Literally and metaphorically.

#3761478 was used as a weapon, killing the enemies of the cult that had taken him in. Ultimately, they was unable to live with their guilt and turned against their oppressors with the violence they had taught them. But fate has a way of turning even a fortune to misfortune. They were forced to kill their light, their love, for their zealous devotion was ultimately the undoing of their relationship*.

After the slaughter, #3761478 went on the run, drifting from place to place for the majority of their life. They were resigned to desolation, but hope soon came to them. They met with a werewolf in Wyoming and quickly became friends and, eventually, lovers. Here #3761478 found peace and safety. #3761478 lived among a tribe of werewolves, and was accepted as one despite being a skinwalker. However, that was when the humans took over and began imprisoning the supernaturals. #3761478 wanted to sacrifice themself for the pack's sake, but it was ultimately their love that took that fall for everyone. Though they made it out alive, they were quickly picked off one by one, and imprisoned. Deciding that they had lived in fear long enough, #3761478 entered the camps in order to free their lover. When their flawed plan failed, the offer of the government became the next best choice. #3761478 joined the hit squad, not for their own freedom, but for their pack's. For they were innocent, and #3761478 knows they are a monster who deserves everything that's coming to them.

And at the end of it all, what is one tortured life in exchange for an act of pure good?
Relationships/Opinions:

*Don't stick your dick in crazy, kids.

EDIT: I don't appreciate that laugh, Bombardier. I spent a lot of time researching skinwalkers for you to write it off as a joke. =.=
EDIT: Not you too, Fubsy >.<
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Hidden 8 yrs ago Post by Kimchi
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Wuut no way. Black Slendyman can copy our powerss
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this is a very serious character sheet people

also dw Kimchi they have to make a fine skin suit out of you before they can take your powers. they won't teamkill they're a good guy just misunderstood. they push people away because they care or smth

they just want love and happiness ;w;

Okay on a more serious note, I'm probably supposed to be having talks with Vari and Nyte, and a less edgy sounding backstory is in order. Granted, it'd be the same backstory just written less like, y'know, that. Or I might have to change the sheet entirely to avoid stepping on toes, but what do
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Aight, just had a chat with Nyte. Anyway, here's something slightly less shitposty and also less stepping-on-Vari's-toes-y.

Name: Jack Green
Age: Old
Gender: Man
Species: Green Man
Abilities/Powers:
  • Body Modification - Ability to change shape. Any forms taken are still obviously made of plants, and provide no benefit other than shape. Allows for reducing size by abandoning body parts. However, if plant life is not directly attached, it is not part of the body and thus not under the Green Man's control.
  • Botanic Assimilation - Ability to alter body mass by taking in plant matter. Increases the amount of resources required to sustain existence.
  • Botanic Physiology - Body of a plant. On one hand, hard to kill without complete destruction. On the other hand, rather squishy and very ugly. His source is located in his head, so in the case of decapitation or dismemberment, the section containing the head is considered to be the body for the sake of his powers.
  • PhD in Botanical Science - Encyclopedic knowledge about, and the ability to rapidly comprehend, the nature of plants. Does not actually have a PhD, but has expressed interest in taking a correspondence course. (Nobody's going to give him a correspondence course.)
  • Mr. Green's Organic Growth Hormone - Ability to rapidly grow independent plants by expending bodily plant matter and an appropriate number of plant-related resources i.e. water and shit. Allows for the quick creation of plant life ranging from poisonous flowers to hallucinogenic mushrooms to dank kush. Cannot be used without exposure to light.
Weakness/Control:
  • Primary control is a herbicide dispenser placed within the subject's core. At minimum exposure, it can be used to significantly weaken the subject, but quickly becomes highly fatal as the quantity of chemicals released increases.
  • Secondary control is an array of incendiaries planted throughout the subject's form. Controlled detonation can be used to get rid of significant amounts of body mass without complete incineration, assuming the fire is put out in time.
  • Tertiary control is helmet with a collar that decapitates the subject. While not directly leading to death, it neutralizes the subject until further notice.
  • Traditional control is exposure to herbivorous creatures, dehydration, suffocation, and extended lack of sunlight.
Personality: A hip but very crotchety old dude who probably supports the legalization of weed and eco-friendly government policy.
History: Jack Green, a name which he had only recently taken up, has a very long history that's fortunately a very uneventful one as well. Since his creation, he has faithfully guarded a certain forest located in the Pacific Northwest. However with the dawn of widespread industrialization, his patch of earth was being threatened to a far greater degree than it had ever been before. In the face of such opposition, his reactions became far more aggressive, and as a result of his more obvious methods, he became something of a local legend passed along from generation to generation. Unfortunately, many years down the line, it was his small degree of fame that attracted the attention of the US government, who systematically tracked down and imprisoned the poor hermit in one of their camps. It was there that he received his current name.

That isn't to say his experience with the modern age was completely negative though. Frightened campers would often leave behind ways - books, computers, eavesdropped conversations, so on - that he could keep up to date with current events and learn more about the world at large. Granted, internment camp actually sucked, but it sucked for everyone. When offered a spot on the squad, Jack agreed. He is a protector after all, even if humanity isn't really under his purview.
Relationships/Opinions: He has no friends. He's a plant.

TL;DR: Actually the weed man
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@Grey

Bro, that's lit.
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no. not lit. lit will kill him.

Also, @Nytem4re anything I need to change or
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