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Guys, I'm sorry, I'm gonna have to pass as I'm (again) finding my hands full with stuff IRL


Alright hun. However, if you ever find yourself having time than let us know and you can reapply any time.
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@Fallenreaper@Ellri

Sorry ya'll, I'm still interested I've just been a bit busy. I'll go rescuer since that's the lowest.
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Still interested, guys! I had a small idea for a Sith but they're full so I was thinking some sort of Jedi Padawan?

Also would the time period allow for a Hapan character?
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Still interested, guys! I had a small idea for a Sith but they're full so I was thinking some sort of Jedi Padawan?

Also would the time period allow for a Hapan character?


From what I see of the Wiki yes but not culturally like the Hapan in the Wiki. The male population was devastated by the Jedi to make that culture. That didn't come about till 500 some odd years after this.

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Assuming one had a char from the Hapan cluster in this time period, they wouldn't be any different from any other human. The Hapani are largely a New Republic era thing, while we are set in the Old Republic.
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Hey, so, problem. My mac is super old and can't open the map software because its a piece of junk. Is there any other method of viewing the map?
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Hey, so, problem. My mac is a piece of junk. Is there any other method of viewing the map?


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Hey, so, problem. My mac is super old and can't open the map software because its a piece of junk. Is there any other method of viewing the map?


Ellri made the map so we'll have to wait until he gets on, however I can try to take a snap shot to give you something. Just give me a bit to load it up and such into imgur.
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So, having a bit of trouble myself and going to talk with Ellri over getting some screen shots for important areas within the compound. The map, at this point, isn't that important until we start IC so I wouldn't worry too much about it and focus on creating your PC first. Can you access the docs alright?
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@Fallenreaper Yeah, I can access the docs. I hate to do this to you, I can tell how much work you've put into this.
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Fa is accepted. A character superbly suited for the use of Juyo - I was quite impressed. She will be a very interesting opponent for Darth Nyiss... You can go ahead and post her on the CS tab.

As for everyone else, we are continuing to work on reviews. The pace will quicken, and everyone will be reviewed in due time.
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@Fallenreaper Yeah, I can access the docs. I hate to do this to you, I can tell how much work you've put into this.


Hun, don't worry about it. As GMs, it's our job to make sure of a few things:

1. Our Players can use the materials we've given them and answer any questions they might have, so they are confident in their understanding of what we want in the rp. We want people to feel comfortable with the stuff and links we provided, not struggle with them.

2. IF players are having trouble, or any sort of issue, using something we provide then it's our job to either find alternate sources or ways for them to view the material content. It's pointless to have the stuff up there if you're having trouble using, which isn't why we decided to use it.

3. The GMs won't know of an issue unless a Player makes it knows and so we can't fix it. I'm so happy you've actually brought this to our attention as it is something we can adapt and try to fix, and so knowing this allows us that chance. If you hadn't spoken up, than likely others might've not and then we would never had known. So if you ever have an issue or problem, let us know.
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Name: Cerria Kinall
Species: Human
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Faction: Jedi Order
Rank: Padawan
Master: Jaa Iblik
Former master(s): None
Time/location of capture: The Jedi temple on Coruscant, during the Sacking
Concerning You

As a prisoner, your wardrobe is limited. When you were captured, how do you look and what clothes do you have on now?



You got captured. Did you make any mistakes that led to this, or were others at fault?

I would blame myself for getting myself captured. Shiri did tell me to run and I knew I should have listened, but I couldn't bring myself to obey, so I didn't run away.
The Force is your ally. How do you use it?

Mind tricks-She will only use it when bluffing doesn’t work
Force Healing -This is her strongest force power
Telekinesis`She is weak in this force power, but she can be very creative with this skill.
Force Sense (basic)
Tutaminis (basic)-She was in the process of learning this skill
Having the Force did not keep you safe. What other skills can help you escape?

She is very familiar with the wild, so she knows the basics of surviving in the wild, if need be.
She can cook but her cooking skill is just barely above average
What was your life like before you got captured? Which major events shaped your life?

‘My life before I was captured? Well I can remember much, not even my mom. I heard before I left that she died giving birth to me and that my grandmother took me in until she also died, the age I cannot seem to remember, maybe I was three when she died. I remember wandering around my place with no food or water, I think I would have died as well if it weren’t for a town doctor that found me lying motionless on the ground, black edging my vision, I think. I remember being picked up and then… darkness. I remembered waking up feeling warm and not as weak, the doctor was standing beside me holding my tiny hand in his large, strong hand. I don’t recall what he said to me, but I know after that I began to live with him and became a little helper.

Some would think a slave right? But I wasn’t a slave, He didn't force me to help, I just chose to help. I would help get people settled in if he was too busy with another to do so. You could say that living with the doctor, I learned some things. I learned what needles did and why they were used, though the doctor didn’t allow me to touch at all and made sure they were in a high enough place where I couldn’t get my hands on them. It was around the age of four when I witnessed what death was, at the age of three I didn’t truly understand the concept. I remember that night. The doctor usually came in and sang a lullaby for me, but that night he didn’t like he usually did, so I got out of the bed and went to find him. I saw movement in one of the rooms used for the people and I slowly opened the door. The guy was laying on the bed, red soaking him everywhere from what I could see, a sight that would give me the shivers to think about. The doctor was just standing there, an odd look in his eyes as I later would learn was guilt. I watched as the guy slowly stopped moving and breathing, just like my grandmother. I was caught spying by the doctor, but instead of yelling like he usually did when he would caught me that look deeper on his aging face. I recall asking ‘Why isn't that man moving?’ and I recalled tons of tears coming down his face like a river as he pulled me close, his tears soaking my shoulder. He explained to me, ‘The man is dead sweetie, Death came and took him away.’ From those simple words, I figured out death, even at my age.

I was never really the same, some of my innocence lost because of that night, but I was like any normal kid who always wanted to play or eat things that they weren’t suppose to. I remember always getting scolded for sneaking into the cookie jar before dinner was done or running away when it was time for a bath. But unlike most kinds, I learned simple quicker in a way, I didn’t know how and neither could the doctor, so he pegged me for maybe a prodigy. I remembered accepting the answer until I hit the age of 6 when the Jedi found me.

It was a couple weeks after my 6th birthday, I was roaming around like usual in the meadow areas that were surrounding the town when I saw smoke rising in the distance not far from my location. Curious, I began to walk towards it when I arrived at what looked like a crash site. I ran towards it and saw a male inside the ship, looking like he was badly injured. Since I learned to carry some medical stuff that was used for basic injuries, I tried to get the door open.It took me a while to find a way to open it, but my eyes got on the emergency release latch and I pulled it making the door open. I took my bandages out and began to work on the minor injuries.

I recall it took a couple hours and by the time I was done, my bandages were done. I couldn’t move him nor could I risk leaving him to go get the doctor, so I decided to stay with him until morning came. It was a very long night and it was very lonely as the man was still out cold. I felt an emotion hit me when morning came, which I learned was relief, and I knew that the doctor would come looking for me. I got outside and looked on the outside of the ship wondering if it was still smoking. It was, but not as strongly as it was before, but it was enough it seemed. Not even an hour after dawn, I saw the doctor and some of the towns people coming towards us. I ran to the doctor and hugged him as the town people ran towards the ship.

The man was soon taken to my home and I didn’t see the guy for several hours. I was sitting in my room just playing with my toys when the doctor came in with a smile on his aging lips. I was told that the male woke up and wanted to see the one who found him. I placed all all my toys back where they belonged before following the doctor to the room where I watched the male being taken.

It turned out that the male was a Jedi and I knew what a Jedi was. I was a bit shy at first meeting him, I could feel something pulling at me, but it wasn't a bad feeling. It felt like an urging feeling and I felt it every time I went into the Jedi’s room to keep him company.

After like a month he healed up quite a bit and it was like one of the days he was better when he walked up to me and he told me that I had something called “The Force” and also said he could teach me some of the things I could do with. I agreed and he began to teach me. Given his issue at the time, he couldn’t teach me much at the time like he could at the Temple. He began to teach me some of the basics he could teach me. At first I didn’t understand what he meant by “The Force” until a month later when I was practicing and I somehow managed to lift up small rock without touching it. I was surprised to say the least and when I was able to move it a little bit away before dropping, I began to understand a little. The jedi man seemed to look at me with approval and we went back to the doctor’s home.

The next day, a month after he was healed up, a ship came to our planet and two other guys came out. I figured they were looking for him when they walked up to the doctor’s home. They looked at me when they saw me and there was something in their eyes for a second before it vanished. I watched as the doctor took them to the jedi’s room and I didn’t see them for hours. Later that night the jedi and the two men walked up to me after dinner and I was told when they left tomorrow, I would have to go with them so I could learn more about “The Force.” The saw the doctor in the background, he had a sad look on his aging face, but he also had that looked in his eye, a knowing look that I needed to go. I don’t remember much of that night but I remember it was a tearful one. He had given me some of his things to remember him by like the flute that always helped me sleep when I first started to live with him and a medical kit that was a right of passage from him. I thanked him for everything he did for me and the gifts.The next day after breakfast, we went to the ship and with one last goodbye to the doctor.I left my home planet...never to go back.

I remember my heart was pumping as I got aboard that ship, but I didn’t look back either. At a young age I was fascinated about space and the stars. I could feel the excitement that I was actually going out into space, I would be up close with the stars. I sat on the ship near a window and waved goodbye to the doctor that was still standing outside my former home. Before I knew it though, I was looking at my home planet from the outside. “Wow” I remembered saying and the three jedi were watching with me some amusement.

I don’t know how long I was on that ship when we arrived at H'Ratth. It was definitely what they described it as a jungle area that had cities and farms. It was not much different than my home, but my home planet didn’t have such big jungles. I clenched the gifts the doctor gave me in my excitement. I remembered being asked a lot of questions upon my arrival, but I won’t go into detail about the questions.

My training began instantly the second I got there. I was placed in basic medical classes where I excelled at, but I didn’t mind this of course because I always loved learning the things I knew. A perfect way to remember it better. I started off doing everything at once from medical training all the way to the basic subjects like reading, writing, Galactic basic, and math. Don’t get me started with math. I remember there was quite a few times I had to be tracked down and dragged to class during my hour of math. Don’t get me wrong I excelled in it, didn’t mean I love it. It's my most abhorred subjects ever. The other thing I didn’t really mind, but didn’t like all that well was my combat training. I had a bit of a struggle with this one since I was never much a fighter in the first place. Luckily it was light and taught me that if I needed to hurt someone, to do it as little as I possibly could.

My most favorite thing I loved learning was meditation and I often went to my teacher, he was really good at teaching it, to get more pointers and how I could do it on my own. After that I started to go out on my own and began to love my quiet times too, when I was finally done for the day, I would go out into the jungle and practice my meditation. I would find the nearest waterfall and sit under it for at least a couple hours so I could tune myself to my “Force” powers. I acted like the waterfall was a distraction going on around me, literally, and each time I did it, I got better at it. When I always came back though, my peers would look at me if they saw me and question why I was soaked, but I didn’t care. While I was probably cold and shivering on the outside, on the inside, I could feel my pride boasting and warming me about how I was able to achieve something out of my meditation for those couple hours outside my lessons.

Another thing I was being taught when I wasn’t do that was the Jedi fricken Code. At first I didn’t mind learning it over and over again, but when it gets to the point where every time I close my eyes to sleep at night and I see the code flashing behind my eyelids or me dreaming of the code being repeated over and over again, I think it's safe to say I will remember the code.

At the age of 14, I became a padawan and met my master, Iblik and his other padawan, Shiri. I guess normally, masters and padawan would immediately go out on missions that didn’t have so much death, but my very first mission I ever had was the Sith and Jedi War. I was in the apart the first aid team, so I stuck mostly to the healing areas. I lost count of how many times I was moved from place to place.

That was the one mission I hated the most. Now I don't mind fighting, heck you have to fight just to stay alive day in and day out, but war is different. Being at war left me almost little time to train as a padawan, but it allowed me to get even better at healing. I healed a lot of people, but I had my fair share of failures.

It was hard seeing all the light vanish from the Jedis’ eyes, but in some moments I would hear a voice in the back of my mind, “They aren't suffering anymore. Think of death as freedom.” I may not remember who said that to me, but I kept those words close to me. That's what kept me moving, striving to try harder than I ever had before. That what became my motivation. Sure I would fail, but failure is the key of getting better.

There was times I even had to heal the enemy Sith that were captured during the war, but other than that, I never saw any Sith in actually battle. Sometimes I even had to give them food and some water so they wouldn't starve or dehydrate to death, one though, can't remember his name, but he would always watch me in a way a predator watched its prey before striking. It was creepy and I did my best to stay away. I dreaded going to serve him his meal, but I never let him know what I was thinking or feeling as I did. The strangest thing though, he never said anything to me at all.

After about 8 months, my master pulled me and Shiri from war, so I could start my training and Shiri I guess could finish hers.

The next year and 4 months were rather fast. At first I didn’t know how to feel about missions, so I barely tried to do anything, especially combat missions, but the escorting missions and political missions, I learned to do on my own with a little nudging from my master. I went on so many missions I barely remember the details and some I probably don’t even remember at all.

There was one mission I do remember and the annoyance was. It was a simple escort mission. We were escorting a senator to the neutral worlds so they could negotiations on something, what I don't know. At first it was great and uneventful, until we were half way back to the Senator’s home. Out of nowhere, we were attacked. I was able to spot the person before the attack and I was able to deflect the attack using my light saber. It got rather chaotic quickly as I was told to stay and keep the senator safe while Master and Shiri went after the escaping culprit. The senator was thanking me again and again for saving him as we sat there in hiding waiting for the two to come back.

I lost track of time of how long they were gone, but we were attacked again, by the same person. I don't know how the person evaded a Jedi master and more trained padawan, but they did. I rushed out of the hiding place and fought him myself. I think I even got injured, but with so much going on, I couldn't remember, but I was finally able to disarm him and knock him out.

He was still out when Master and Shiri returned and the look on their faces was priceless. Shiri was shocked, and so was Master, but after a minute, he gave me a proud look for the first time. I was proud too. Not only was I able to stop two assassination attempts, but I was able to fight and capture him too.

I got closer to Shiri as the each mission happened and we found time to mess around, no not in the dirty way, between missions. I don’t know wether master was amused or annoyed at our antics, but I had fun. I was a bit saddened when Shiri left and became a Jedi Knight, but I got to see her every once and a great while so that made me smile, and what made me happy the most I was able to contact her through the Holonet and tell her everything about the mission I was just on or just to catch up in each other’s lives.

During my time at the Temple, I was able to find more time to focus on myself and I basically taught myself Makashi on my own with some pointers from a jedi master, which I am quite proud of and when my master found out about Makashi, he taught me another technique called Soresu, so I had a way of defending myself better on the dreaded combat missions. I thought I would only have to use it on combat missions, but that wasn’t meant to be.

Everything was going so well up at the Temple until the sacking. That day was truly the worse day I could ever go through, seeing everyone getting attacked, captured. I was told to run by Shiri, but I refused and ran back into the chaos going on in the temple and I had arrived to see my master getting killed. Before I knew it, I was captured.

How do you keep yourself calm in captivity? How do you keep your will to escape strong?

I mainly meditate when I can to keep myself calm in dire situations such as this. It's not just my will I keep strong, I do my best to keep the will of the other jedis strong as well as we go through this imprisonment.
How well do you hold up under pressure? Do you have a high pain threshold?

I have a somewhat high pain tolerance due to me sitting under a freezing waterfall for hours on end, but pressure is something I don’t know if I can hold up.
Lightsabers. Though you lost yours, it would be good to know what style(s) you use.

Makashi
Soresu
If I get into a fight, I intend to disarm them as quickly and as painlessly as I possibly can.
Have you encountered other prisoners or Sith in the past?

Shiri-A padawan of the same master and often times went on missions with Shiri and her master.
Talon- She met Talon at Coruscant when they went to the temple before the sacking
Out of Character

How powerful is she in the Force?

She is average in the Force, not particularly strong and not particularly weak.
Has your character encountered members of the Strike Team / Rescuers before?

No
Nobody with any sort of wisdom wants to speak of their flaws. Especially not to their enemies, so what are your character’s flaws?

She doesn’t ask for help
She tends to hide her emotions behind a calm mask
She fears failure
She doesn’t take betrayal from close friends very well
Is your character any good at holding out against torture?

Yes because she is able to hide all emotions she feels on the inside with a calm exterior as a barrier to protect herself. She still suffers on the inside, but she will be damned if she shows it in her eyes.
What is your character’s personality like? What motivates him/her?

What motivates her is that she wants to help anyone in any way she can and this drives her to make sure she doesn’t fail. She doesn’t like to hurt anyone and does anything she can to make sure there is very limited injury to anyone.

She is a person who is a very calm extrovertly, but she is very emotional introvertly.

Do you have any limits as to what is “ok” to happen to your character?

I don’t want to see or read about anyone’s including my character limbs being chopped off or anyone being gutted like a pig.
I am alright with her dying, but as long as it is discussed and planned.
I am not looking for romance for this particular character, but if anyone is interested in having a slight love interest, do message me and we can talk about how it would work in the rp.
Do you want your character to escape?

Yes, doesn’t mean she will.
how easily do you wish to be captured?

She will fight for her life before getting captured
What do you think your character is doing in a few IC months?

I want her to be able to open up more but in a more slow fashion than she would have been taught if her master was still alive and she was still training. I will have her make sure others are safe and secure before attempting to escape, if she does managed to.
Does your character have any secrets useful for the GMs’ plots?

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Name: Varlo Jissard
Species: Nautolan
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Faction: Jedi Rescuer
Rank: Knight
Specialization: Jedi Healer
Master: N/A
Former master(s): Rana Trehug, Rik Horne
Concerning you

You are on a mission. How did you dress for it? What else can you say about your looks?


I've dressed in simple yet effective Jedi robes. There is nothing to get in the way should I need to move quickly and it allows me to access the things I need. The robes are sleeveless (similar to that in the photo). Down the back is cloak like, but the front is open so that I can move freely when I need to and not worry about getting caught in the folds. I wear beige trousers with all terrain boots held up by a simple brown belt. There are several medical pockets and pouches I have in several places along my outfit to store things like bandages and drugs.

The gold bands around my head-tresses signify my passing of the Knight Trials and my status as a Jedi Knight. It provides minimal protection as its made of a lightweight metal that's able to rest comfortably around my tresses. It may stop a vibro-blade aiming for my head but that's about it.



As for my looks, my skin is aqua-green and my eyes black, like all of my species. My physique is slim and toned and despite my smaller physique I'm reasonably strong, having had to carry more than one person out of the heat of battle. I also keep in shape with endurance training and practicing my lightsaber forms in case I need to protect a patient. Even though I'm not combat oriented, I've seen my share of battles. I have two scars from the weapon of a deranged killer over my left eye and several scars along my arms and legs of varying sizes due to a whole number of reasons.

In order to confront the Sith, you need to be strong. Name one weakness or flaw you have identified but not neutralized.


Attachment. I can become very attached to people, any person I care about I will do irrational things, things that may jeopardize a mission or put others or myself in danger. I often combat with it and can overpower it if there are more people at risk if I do something but its still a struggle and a fear of mine every time a battle begins and as a healer in this time of war, I've seen my fair share so far.

I'm very merciful, to a fault as some of my peers would say. I simply can't finish off an opponent, its not in my nature. At the worst I'll severely injure them and then knock them out but I won't kill them. I've seen enough of that from the Sith. That being said my mercy has backfired in the past and it resulted in the death of my first master, which I regret to this day.

Fighting Sith is not easy. How do you plan to use the Force for this?


I train in the base force abilities daily, such as modifying attributes of my body or manipulating objects or even sending waves of pure energy out to repel attackers. I usually use the force to stun and repel attackers but facing off against foot soldiers 99% the time has convinced me to train in blaster deflection and disabling moves. I use the force to heal people, preferably my allies but I will tend to my enemies as well, not without proper precautions of course. I can revitalize my fellow Jedi and republic soldiers, though this is an exhausting process.

Sure, you can use the Force… but what else can you do?


I'm trained in advanced medicine and studying every day. I'm an expert at Shii-Cho, as I've not needed any other form. I've been in numerous battles, so I've some notion of strategy and leading men, even if it is just a small area for a medical camp. Medical camps are often targets in battles so I've often had a hand in organizing a defense against the Sith and even have taken down a couple of apprentices. Plus the stress and fear of racing into a firefight to pull out wounded men has made me cool under pressure. I'm also trained in survival techniques should disaster strike and I'm stranded. I can fly fighters alright but anything bigger than that would be best for others.

Something got you to join this mission. What was it? What events shaped your life?


I was born in 3675. I don't know if I was born on Glee Anselm or not, because I was left on the doorstep of a Jedi Academy when I was 3 years old. They said I was laughing and levitating a Nautolan toy. So the Jedi took me in and began to teach and train me. I thrived in the environment, I was patient, compassionate, and had a love of learning. Sometimes a little too sensitive, I let my emotions take over when I was younger. I made friends and life was good. I had difficulty practicing with the lightsaber and much of the physical aspect, even though I was tall for my age, I was surprisingly weak. Its actually kind of embarrassing to think back on that now.

Despite all that, I managed to break through the barrier (and actually gain a little muscle in the process). My Initiate Trials of Wisdom and Insight went by smoothly but it was my trial of skill that showed me actual adversity for the first time in my life. We initiates were tasked to go into a canyon to find our crystals. Alone. The prospect terrified me at the time and I think I was by far the most nervous. But we went in and diverged in the path to find our crystals. I was walking along the edge of a drop, there was a sort of warmth nearby and the canyon was dreadfully cold, with howling wind and the like. Then I saw the crystal, wedged into a rather narrow slice of rock just below a ledge. I figured if I just peeked over and snatched it I would be good to go. The wind had other plans.

I was blown off the edge and fell into the gorge, I righted myself and scrabbled desperately at the wall until I came to an abrupt stop. I was danging my just a sliver of rock protruding from the rock wall, my finger tips were bloody and the crystal was 10 feet above me. And, of all things, I started to cry, hanging there, above certain death. Pretty stupid right? After a minute or so I calmed myself down and thought. The crystal was my number one priority and so I thought about getting the crystal that was in the rock just ten feet above me. Ten measly feet. And all of a sudden, the green crystal was floating down to me and was in front of my face. Now what, right? Well, I got this feeling, like, I should just trust the force. And so I did and I let go. Then a powerful gust of wind came from the gorge and I landed softly (not really gracefully) inside a small cavern dug into the side of the rock wall with my crystal. There was a steep climb that looked like it would lead back to the top.

I must have climbed for 40 minutes before I got there, but I made it and I wasn't even the last one. I successfully constructed my lightsaber and was delighted to see the green blade. Jedi Healer Rana Trehug chose me as her padawan and she was the main inspiration for my interest in healing others. She also died at the young age of 28. She was a Duros, who rarely become Jedi. I was 11 years old when I became her Padawan and she was 25. For the first few years, we went of a variety of missions. Peacekeeping, Sentient Aid, Medical Facilities. The only combat I saw in those years was watching a battle from inside a ship. My master taught me the ways of healing, most likely without the consent of the council and I found I took to it with interest and enthusiasm. She was a kind person with a heart of gold. She felt like the mother I never had. And its my own compassion that got her killed.

It was the first battle I was directly involved, I was 14. My master and I had been assigned to a planet wide patrol on Cyrillia, it was important for the republic to make sure that relations were friendly with the Cyrillians so we could keep making use of their droids. It was my master, myself, and about a dozen republic troopers in a small ship. We had been there for a week and this was just a routine patrol, no one expected a fight. The Sith ship came out of nowhere, how it had gotten past the other security I have no idea. It opened fire, sending everyone sprawling from the impact. By the time I had gotten to my feet, they were boarding. The fight was brief and intense. Sith troopers breached the door and blaster bolts filled the air. It was all I could do not to get blown away by one and then I felt it. The hate, the passion, the ambition. It was an Apprentice. And he made a beeline for the two Jedi on the ship.

It was fear like I never felt, our sabers clashing, every swing even closer to death than the last. Then I missed a swing and he used that opportunity to slam me in the gut with the force, sending me flying directly upwards, bashing into the ceiling and coming down with a hard crash. I was extremely dizzy and pretty sure I was bleeding, but when my vision focused I saw the Sith pressing down on my master, slashing at her with such ferocity. Then she crumpled and the air smelled of singed flesh. And I was on my feet, lightsaber ignited and sliding. I don't know what surprised him more. The fact I was conscious or the fact I had just sliced his hamstrings open. It was hate and anger and fear like I had never known and the pure shock (to both of us) propelled me into blasting him out the window with the force and sent him tumbling to the planet below.

This all had happened within the span of a few minutes. We had fended off the attackers, but there were only four of us left. We rode back in silence and all I could do was go over what had just happened in my head. Over. And over. And over again. I was taken back to Coruscant after that and I became withdrawn. They informed me that I had passed the requirements for the combat aspect of The Trial of Skill but I didn't really care. I just studied and practiced, going through the motions. I barely ate, had trouble sleeping. There were nightmares every night. It was a few months before I was deemed fit for duty and even then, I was never the same and the council knew it. I was assigned to a Jedi Investigator, Rik Horne. He was older than Rana when she died, around 31. He was outgoing and cheerful, as I had been and I suppose the council thought he would mend my spirit. And he did, but I was never the same again. I vowed to continue studying medicine on my own in honor of Rana's memory and was determined to become a healer just as she was.

I went on all kinds of missions with Rik, battles, peacekeeping missions, and even criminal cases. And one such criminal case I earned the scars over my left eye. I was 16, two years after Rana died. We were on a remote colony I can't remember the name of. The people requested an investigator for a serial killer case, a dozen found dead with only one survivor. I had taken up studying psychology on my own (something the council was acutely aware of, as well as my continued study of all forms of medicine) coupled with my constantly growing knowledge of medicine and an experienced Jedi Investigator we were the perfect duo for the job.

I inspected the bodies when we arrived, all gruesome, all in fatal spots of the body. While humans were the majority race of this colony, there were a few aliens living with them and there one or two aliens among the victims. In this case, it seemed the killer slashed wherever they thought would be fatal with obvious comparison to the human form. We then went on to interview the survivor after I shared what I found out with Rik, which besides the obvious lack of knowledge in Alien Biology, the killer also used what was likely a custom made weapon, with two razor sharp blades. The survivor was terrified, she was maimed and constantly in pain and clearly suffering from the beginning stages of PTSD and I knew it was only going to get worse.

Rik managed to get the location of where she was attacked and we headed there. It was an abandoned warehouse (of course it was) and there was blood everywhere. I had the feeling there were a pair of eyes on me, but I couldn't see anyone around. I should have known better and I'm lucky my master did otherwise I'd probably be dead. We spit balled a few theories on our way back but they were long shots. I suggested we go back and interview the victim to see if she has any connection to the warehouse or anyone who worked there. Rik beamed at me and agreed. Once there, we finally got some results. A business operated out of there 20 years ago and it was run by her father. It got foreclosed because his employees, his 12 employees banned against him for unfair wages. He disappeared some years later and left her all alone.

I remember I was dozing in her room, I promised I would keep watch through the night but the evening's events had left me drained. Then I felt a sudden rush of anger and betrayal and I woke in an instant. He had followed us, just as my master predicted but he was much faster than I imagined and he slashed me in an uppercut with gauntlets with two razor sharp blades bolted on, like claws. It hurt. A lot. But the adrenaline kept me clear headed and I ignited my saber, all the while the girl was screaming and sliced his head open. He fell in a lifeless thump and I collapsed backwards in my chair as I saw my master rush towards me. That earned me my Trial of Flesh.

Another year and a half would go by before I attempted the other trials. It was...incredibly difficult. I confronted my guilt of the death of my first master and managed to forgive myself for failing her. I completed the Trial of Courage by pulling two wounded troopers out of a suicide mission, where death was assured. And finally, I completed the trial of insight when I resisted the lies of a woman who turned out to be a thief. This all took several months and I was finally able to remove my padawan braid. But I felt I needed something to truly show I was a knight, so I visited a Jedi Artisan, Koren Omi-Ren and asked him to make me protective gold bands for my head-tresses. Only when I put those on did I feel like a Jedi knight.

After I was knighted, I kept on studying medicine in hopes of becoming a healer for the order like my first master. I traveled to study with master healers on planets far and wide. It was some of the most advanced stuff I had ever seen. I kept sending in my reports to the council of my progress and of the status of each planet (they had requested on my travels for knowledge I monitor the many planets and report any and everything I find.) Finally, two years after I became a knight I was called back to Coruscant to take the Healer's Exam. I had qualified to take the advanced exam. It was the hardest test I had ever taken. It was 3 hours long and finally I finished it. A few days later I was called back and given the specialization of Healer. It had been 6 years since Rana died and I was at long last, following in her footsteps.

I began going anywhere and everywhere that needed a healer. I went through countless battles, one where I clashed with another Apprentice and his war-band attacking a medical camp. I defeated him and tried to spare his life, but he used an electric shock to kill the commanding officer of the battle and I was forced to slay him. Again, my mercy got another killed and again I felt all of it. More time passed and more people needed my help. It was rare I was sent to a peaceful place, but I enjoyed doing it, to make up for my past mistakes.

But The Sacking of Coruscant, the only thing that will heal that wound is taking back whats ours and taking the Sith that took our people down.

What are you like, and what keeps you motivated?


Before the death of Rana I was cheerful, outgoing, goofy. Now I suppose I'd be considered serious, solemn, and a little sarcastic at times. I care greatly for people of all kinds and backgrounds and I can't bring myself to harm my enemies unless I'm absolutely forced to. I have the utmost respect for all Jedi and many other noble causes in the galaxy. I'm motivated by my dedication to the order and my mission to make up for my past mistakes by healing as many people as I can.

How do you fight with lightsabers?


I'm an expert in Shii-Cho, though that's a small feat compared to some instructors complete and total mastery of the form. When I fight, I aim to disarm and disable my opponent. Fighting on the defensive is a waste of energy, at least against another lightsaber wielder. They most certainly want to kill you so you have to push back just as hard. I like to use my environment to my advantage and while Shii-Cho doesn't typically incorporate acrobatic moves, I've added a few of my own flair. Against opponent wielding blasters I stay defensive, usually able to take them out with the force and simply deflecting their own bolts back at them. If I do storm them, like in an assault, I'll try to get behind them and break up their ranks.

How do you relate to the other characters?


Koren Omi-Ren: The Jedi who made the protective bands for my head-tresses. I don't get to talk to him much, but I find him a pleasant person. @Sep

Rana Trehug: My first master and the woman who sparked my interest in healing. I know that you are resting peacefully with the force.

Rik Horne: My second and final master and wise cracking Jedi Investigator. I'm sure you're out there busting a criminal and commenting on his poor hygiene as well.

Out of Character

How powerful is he in the Force?


Varlo is a reasonably skilled Jedi Knight, who has trained to better himself in both combative and passive force abilities. Obviously he's more adept at passive than combative, but if he hadn't striven for Healer, he might have had a future as a Jedi Sage.

Powers: All Basic Powers befitting of a Studious Jedi Knight, that is to say, a little more proficient than your average Jedi Knight.

- Force Healing (Advanced)
- Droid Disable (Intermediate) [AKA Stun/Short Out Temporarily]
- Force Deflection (Intermediate)
- Revitalize (Novice)
- Force Stun (Novice)

Has your character encountered members of the other factions before?


He knows Koren Omi-Ren of the Jedi Prisoners.

Your character can’t know his/her every weakness or flaw. Which ones were missing above?


While Varlo likes to think himself a skilled combatant (and compared to other healers, he could be considered one) he is still no match against any Sith Apprentice without the force. Factoring in strength, agility, and pure skill, if it were a one one one duel without the force he would almost certainly be killed. This poses a problem if the Sith he's dueling is more powerful in the force than he is.

He's also woefully unpracticed in martial combat and if he's unarmed, he will rely entirely on the force.

The Dark Side. How well does your character resist it?


In the past, Varlo has managed to resist it with success. He has a very strong connection with the light side of the force. He doesn't question his morals because he knows he's doing the right thing. Even if he was forced to do something drastic and horrible, I doubt he would fall to the dark side immediately. However, a powerful Sith could likely manipulate his thoughts when he's at a vulnerable and cause him to do something desperate.

What is your character’s personality like? What motivates him/her?


As stated above. Varlo knows himself fairly well and has good intentions.

Do you have any limits as to what is “ok” to happen to your character?


I'd prefer Varlo not die, other than that do what you like to him.

Do the ends justify the means?


As long as its not too ghastly, Varlo can hardly stand war as it is with a quick kill.

Captivity. Do you want him/her to potentially be captured?


If it makes sense, but Varlo is very intelligent, not to mention agile.

What do you think your character is doing in a few IC months?


If the mission is a success, he'll most likely be somewhere providing aid. Other than that, still working on rescuing the prisoners.

Does your character have any secrets useful for the GMs’ plots?
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