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@The Dow Dragon Might wanna retag them buddy, @mentions put in via an edit don't throw notifications.
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We are aware now. Thanks for letting us know. We'll get to the review ASAP, but this RP does have a lot of sheets to review, so you will have to be patient.

We have a few reviews almost ready to go for a few CSes. Expect them soon.
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First round of reviews.

These are for @Rtron and @Heat firstly, but others can also use them to get extra ideas of what we look for in sheets.




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If anyone wants another set of eyes on a sheet, I'm willing to offer my aid.
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More reviews, this time for @SushiJaguar and @The Dow Dragon. Good CSes, minimal problems.



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@The Dow Dragon could always have the Gold bands be infused with Corotis Ore.
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*Cortosis

Its possible, though still largely impractical.
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@Sundered Echo Heh I always felt that "Corotis" sounded right. Obviously not.
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or at least primarily decorative. Perhaps the principle of such bands is cultural?

If you really want to protect the head like that, use armor.
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I got the idea from warriors of the dark ages, where they would wear rings over their armor to avoid their fingers getting chopped off in battle. I'll keep looking, but if I can't find anything, I'll settle on it as being a cultural thing.
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Nice to know the source at least. Its probably more effective against traditional blades (probably only limited use even against vibroblades)
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I made the requested edits to my character sheet. Hopefully they're to your liking!
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@Sundered Echo@Ellri

I changed it so the bands on his tresses are sentimental and symbolic. They might protect his tentacles but its not likely. I also changed the bio so Varlo studied heavily in medicine while with Rik and traveled the galaxy learning from multiple institutions and experts of medicine for two years after he was knighted before he earned his specialization.
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@The Dow Dragon I actually had an idea (While in the shower no less) perhaps his master (More likely his first) wore some kind of Gold Bands, and then this is his way of honouring them?

Also gives Sith a possible sore spot.
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@Sep I don't how she would, considering she had big, blue, bald head. Maybe on her arms? I think its just his own way of accepting his responsibilities as Jedi Knight.
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Aside from the one small error below from your character bio, @SushiJaguar, everything in your sheet is good to go:
The Lord could not keep his focus with both of his hands missing, and the Apprentice was long-fled by the time Rinko-Rinko cunningly employed a Trakáta strike to remove the Sith's remaining hand.

This seems to imply that the sith lord was three-handed or that time was knotted up. But as its such a minor thing and easily fixed, it is not worthy of a full new review process. If you fix that, your sheet is approved.

No such things spotted on your sheet, @The Dow Dragon.

Therefore, both of your sheets are to be considered approved and can be posted in hiders in the CS tab.

Note that you can change things on your sheet in the future too, so long as they’re not locked by anything in the IC. However, we would appreciate being notified of such changes, unless they’re obvious (like a character being… disarmed… by a wookiee in the IC)

In general, both of your sheets were very nice creations even before the first reviews, and they have only improved.
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Yeah, sorry about that. It was a little jumbled, but I was rushing a little bit too much. I'll edit that a little and then post it up in the characters tab. Thanks very much for the compliment, too.
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Could you please put your sheet in a hider in the CS tab?
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Sure
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