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I posted for the Jacks and the Wards :)

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If anyone in the rooftop scene with Sonika leaving needs a savior from fall damage, tag me here before you post. If you've got a way for Furnace, Celia, and anyone else prevalent there that you may be controlling, to not take major damage or die from the fall, then I can make Outsider's intro be his swooping in and saving whomever.

Otherwise, he's probably going to briefly pop in, make sure everyone's alright, and then tail Sonika, since he's the only one who can fly independently (yes the Ebony Fly can, well, fly, but its riders aren't doing so without assistance and are thus more limited than Outsider who only has to worry about running into shit xD
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Dropped a post, will wait for everyone else in a cycle before I post again.
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@yoshua171 I didn't notice this post. Feel free to save G4M3R.
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Was unsure about the convoy's response and general configuration so I left the last part kind of vague and open-ended so you can write in details without feeling like you're overriding anything I put. :<
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So, should I be waiting for the next post for independents because something will potentially happen or should I assume I might have found an empty room somewhere for a new base of operations and carry on with my next plan of action?

Heh, and should I consider somehow involving myself, thinking about what was discussed before about minutemen and such... I mean, I don't know what they're intending past the current situation or what they want and how that might even happen with Wisp being as distrustful as she is. Suppose I could suspend that somewhat to fit a situation, but... does that even appeal to anyone but me? Yeah, um. I'd like to hear people's words on this.
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I think it's a good interaction, though I'm not sure how to set up it to occur naturally. Perhaps speed-trigger ends up getting them involved? In terms of updates for you you're all good from me to find a new base of operations without much trouble and go from there.
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... Oh, that's an idea...



Edit: Hey, Minutemen. Do you mind if I have someone call you sometime in the near future? It can wait a bit if you prefer to be more ready and not in the midst of whatever you're in the midst of. Hahaha.
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... Oh, that's an idea...



Edit: Hey, Minutemen. Do you mind if I have someone call you sometime in the near future? It can wait a bit if you prefer to be more ready and not in the midst of whatever you're in the midst of. Hahaha.


I am impartial to this. I'm not the leader of the Minutemen though so I don't have the final say.

Also, what about the Independent posts for the others? OL mainly as I have a general idea for the Twins.
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@PlatinumSkink G4M3R would be totally fine with saving a young lass from the hive of scum and villainy that is the Community.
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Small announcement for the Wards. Let's try not to let this meeting last too long. I would like to timeskip the team to the next day so they're on the same timeframe as the Jacks and get them to their next mission (which will actually be a training exercise).
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@Banana Hm I thought the twins were fine where they were for a bit, what do you have in mind for them? Any other independents that want an update feel free to nudge me. Oh and I could've sworn I put up a post for Ruben but it basically just said he got the parts he wanted within an hour or so, feel free to continue posting with him.
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Well since they're trying to end human trafficking, it'd kind of make sense for them to attempt to find Cassidy in attempts to get some info out of her. Peacefully of course.

OL is probably going to attempt to make robots in the next post I drop for him, but feel free to intervene with therapy.
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What time is it currently in the Sonika/Furnace/Minutemen/Others encounter?

Edit: So Jake/Outsider was planning for overtime when he saw the encounter. That would place the encounter at 17-19? Unless he works irregular hours. Um. I don't know. Anyways.

Disclaimer. Viola's an NPC that I'm simply manipulating right now for my own benefit, due to having created her as my character's sister to give Sheila a reason to exist. GMs/CO-GMs are free to take control of her from me at any time and change her any way they feel like. Unless anything else is said, though, I'll write her lines whenever someone answers.

Anyways, yes. Viola will call the Minutemen at an unspecified late hour an unspecified day. Meaning, you can all get done with your current scene if you wish before responding, you can even say that Viola and Sheila's thing happened a different day (unless the GMs says that's not the case) to make things not happen one-after-another, and yupp. Simply make me aware when you do take the call. This also allows Wisp to make some headway before things happen, which I'd appreciate. Yell at me if there's any problems with this arrangement or someone disagrees.

Yupp. That's all.
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Mantis

Name: Judah Raines
Alias: Mantis
Age: 27
Alignment: Anti-hero
Loyalty: Independent (for now)

Appearance: 6ft tall. Italian-Irish American. Dark brown hair cut very short. Five o clock shadow. Athletic build. Broad shoulders. A very focused look on his face. Wears black Nike shoes with a black expensive sport jacket and brown khaki pants casually. He wears a dark blue t-shirt underneath. His "super" outfit is his FBI body armor with the FBI conveniently covered over. He also wears a dark blue baclava with a white mantis's two arms crossed like swords on the front and a Mantis face above them resembling a jolly Roger.

History: As a young man, Judah Raines, had a passion for defending his younger siblings from bullies. This passion carried on with him for the rest of his life. It drove him to join the Police at age of nineteen. After the designated two years on the force with an impeccable record, Judah applied for SWAT in the Denver CO area. Being one of the top students he was initiated into their ranks. He proved himself an able member and became proficient in a range of firearms as well as breaching techniques. After three years of excellent service, he was transferred to the counter terrorism unit in Denver. It was then he applied to the FBI to become a counter terrorism specialist. It was his dream after all.

In one of his first assignments a man had allegedly rigged a building to explode and had multiple hostages within it. Judah volunteered to take point in the mission, the most dangerous position. His teammates threw a flashbang through the window and he kicked the door in. There was no one immediately there. After clearing the room they went on to the next one down the hall. Knocking that door open revealed a man holding a woman as hostage with a detonator in his hand. "Don't move or this whole place goes sky high!" Judah responded as calmly as he could lowering his weapon,"What do you want?" He yelled,"I want to make an impact!" "That's a very millennial thing to want to do," Judah replied,"Why don't we talk by putting our weapons down first?" Judah laid his weapon down. The man looked confused for a second. He's never seen anyone respond to his crazy demands like that.They talked for about twenty minutes, Judah listening intently as if the man, who he knew now as Sam, had been a dear friend. Sam slowly loosened his grip on the weapon and the woman who had been trembling earlier. Now though, she seemed almost interested in the conversation. Near the end Sam asked Judah to visit him in prison. Judah agreed. Afterward he gave the detonator and the woman up. He was quickly cuffed and led away. The cops were very impressed. It turned out to only be a false alarm, that the man was crying out for attention. Judah was still true to his word though.

The FBI saw Judah as a great asset and quickly interviewed him. He was brought into their ranks at the age of 25 and sent overseas to work with their Israeli allies. It was there he learned Krav Maga. It was also there after 6 momths that he witnessed his first suicide bombing in an airport. He lost some good friends on that mission. Without his team he felt lonely and isolated from the rest of the country. Though they were allies they were not family and Judah missed his. It was during the next year and a half that Judah fell into depression. He longed for human contact and intimacy, but could not reach out for help.

He continued his unforgiving work schedule in order to distract himself from the pain. He took to alcohol as well. One night at his lowest point he seriously contemplated suicide. That's when they got a call of man who was suicidal. He went to the scene and his words were not good enough to break through the man's self-harming thoughts. Before the man pulled the trigger on his gun, Judah willed in his mind, thinking"Life is worth living!!" At the guy. The sheer pain and hopelessness in that situation awoke in Judah the ability to impart thoughts in others as well as feel others moods and emotions. The man stopped suddenly and dropped his arm holding the gun. He then raised it slowly and fired at the team. Mantis then shot him through the chest with his Mp5k submachine gun. He had no idea what happened at the time, though he would never be the same.

A few weeks later he transferred back to co Denver. There he rejoined with the FBI there. He taught a krav maga class to the men he served with. Something was different now though. He didn't just stop drinking and feeling depressed, he felt empowered and emboldened in his roll as a leader among men. With his newfound abilities, the possibilities were vast. Some thought later, Judah wished to stop crime not only on missions as FBI, But in the mind where crimes are concieved. Sure, it may be unethical to manipulate others into doing the right thing; but someone has to show them the way. Judah took his uniform and a baclava he had custom made. He tweeked his look to resemble his flowing style. He would now call himself, Mantis, giver of wisdom.

Motivations: He wishes to end blatant crime by first, diplomacy. If that doesn't work, mind powers. Finally, physical confrontation. One of his primary motivations is to transform former criminals into law-abiding citizens. Afterward, to have them join his faction, and repeat.

Sexuality: Straight
Likes:

Order/Peace, discipline, comraderie, good conversation.
Martial arts, firearms, sports cars, motorcycles, adrenaline.
Chinese food, private property, alcohol, dogs.

Dislikes:

Chaos, laziness, psychopaths, corruption.
fast food, boredom, rats.
weakness.

Derangement: Due to his newfound ability, Judah has a hard time trusting people deeply. On the surface he does well but on the inside he rarely shows himself. In fact, many times he finds himself influencing others subconciously to agree with him. The need to be in control is a direct manifestation of the power of thought implantation. Being in need of control has affected Judah into resisting heirarchies and authority over himself. He finds it very difficult to follow orders from others.

Parahumanism

Skills:

Martial artist: spending years training in Israel gave Judah the skills necessary to be an expert at the art of Krav Maga. The speed in which he can disable or kill an opponent is exceptional and he learns more constantly. He currently teaches classes in Denver on his time off.

Negotiator: Years spent in hostage negotiations have left Judah with the skills to prevent conflict.

Firearms: He is very proficient in a wide variety of firearms and specializes in submachine guns.

Charismatic: Was born with a certain charm about him. It's hard to dislike this guy!

Reflexes: His years of training in martial arts as well as counter-terrorism measures have given Judah an almost inhuman reaction time. Before he knows what he's doing he can act.

Crowd control: Spending time in SWAT has trained Judah to be able to deal with unruly crowds non lethally.

Interrogation: Is able to extract information fairly easily using mind powers and diplomatic tactics.

Tactics: Skilled in the art of combat manuevers, strategy, squad tactics, etc.

Classification: Master, Thinker

Details: Judah is able to implant thoughts and/or feelings into other living beings. He is able to discern what someone is feeling as well. His thought and feeling implants are not limited to general ideas and feelings. The more Mantis concentrates on a target the more specific the thoughts and feelings can be up to literal words and phrases.
He can also influence a wide range of people, however, the thoughts and feelings are general in specificity at that scope.
He is also not limited to humans only. He can influence animals and creatures using emotional manipulation. Thought manipulation is much more difficult for that. Perceiving animal feelings is simple enough.
His feeling sensors are subconciously active. He can choose to set them aside if they are too distracting as well. He can detect fear, anger, sadness, joy, and other basic emotions within his one block vicinity. If he concentrates he can almost see the emotions and their location. Though it leaks like a gas and cannot be pinpointed more accurately than a fifteen foot radius at longer distances. At closer ranges he can specifically see the emotions eminating from exact people.

Limitations: Manton Effect. His mind abilities are limited to one block in all directions. The further away, the less influence and reads. If someone is extremely practiced in mind durability and defense, it is extremely hard for Mantis to influence as strongly.

Equipment: Mp5 submachine gun with extended mags, military grade combat knife, gas mask, filters, FBI body armor and uniform, helmet, 1911 side arm with mags. He wears the FBI issued uniform with FBI covered up in addition to a blue baclava with a white Mantis head and crossed arms like a jolly Roger. Black combat boots, flashbang grenades, tear gas cannisters, smoke grenades, and his two deadliest weapons of all his bare hands
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I believe you want your format to look something more like this? I've give it a look over in a moment.

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Hmm. I think the 'perfect solder' part is played up a bit here, not necessarily bad eh. Your parahumanism seems to be two unrelated powers, mental manipulation as well as physical enhancement. Parahumanism generally falls under 1 direct theme or ability, for you two have both of those you'd have to a have a more valid explanation for why that is the case. A one-mile radius is also a big area, just how strong is his ability to manipulate people? Are we talking forcing a normal functioning person being driven to suicide in a few moments, or causing them so feel unsure and doubt themselves, making mistakes and feeling depressed? His derangement is also I personally feel not very impactful. It's more of a result of his powers rather than a cause. If you'll look at other cs's their power has directly changed the way their mind works, where as yours is simply a result of acquiring his powers, if that makes sense.
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Fair points. I have updated his powers to be master and thinker in a one block radius. The power he has over people is not overwhelming though it does have a potential to seriously trip people up in combat and or manipulate people outside of combat. Mantis has no ability to control, only influence. The perfect soldier aspect is to offset his rather limited powers. If ever he would come against any type of superhuman head on he would be crushed. He is more of a diplomatic, manipulating soldier.
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Power is much better, thanky. The only other real thing I would suggest is, your character doesn't feel like he has much in the way of flaws. He has a lot of skills but you seem to likely have the intent for him to be rather balanced thematically. His only real flaw is that he can't genuinely trust people. Perhaps another flaw or two would round him out more as a character, not a ultimatium, simply a suggestion.
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@Kafka Komedy ... Maybe I should have asked, but is it still alright if it's The Rockers that she needs saving from and not The Community? Maybe not as threatening, but still... XD
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