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Announcement

Now that I've gotten the worst parts out of the way (for moving), tomorrow we will go over sheets and ideally get back to you as soon as possible. Sunday will be my day to take it easy. I deserve it lol. As I said many times before, thank you for your patience and we can't wait to get the show on the road.

Plex, over and out.
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@lovely complex Glad to hear the hardest part is through!
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@Jacobite Romeo: Accepted.

@Malchivo Patrick: Accepted. Please put a space between the paragraph before “COMBAT” for formatting’s sake. Thanks!

@Viciousmarrow Wyn: Accepted.

@Starwinter Abigail: Accepted. Please remove the words ‘age’, ‘nationality’, and ‘gender’ from that section.

@Fabricant451 Samaira: Not accepted.




@dabombjk Kyle: Not accepted. Did you read the rules? Your character sheet is missing something. What is Kyle’s legal name? How does he only go by Conduit, has he legally changed it? Please proofread your character sheet, there are a few instances of spelling/grammatical errors and missing punctuation. You stated that his powers manifested when he was 14, which is too long ago for our timeline. All Enhanced have only had their powers for around 4 years, some have had them for even less time. Why did Kyle get removed from the home of the dojo owner as a child? Generally CPS does not get involved with a foster situation unless the family is reported by someone. Can we get more information on his energy shielding ability? How does energy become a physical shield, exactly, and what does that look like? What has Kyle’s brother done to be considered a criminal mastermind?

@GingerBoi123 Jason: Not accepted. Please fix the spacing in your CS, the [ hr] breaks should be directly under the subheadings, there should not be any space in between. We would also like to know where Jason got his super suit from (if you don’t have an idea, this could be designed by Austin). How could he have deflected a bullet in the bank robbery? This doesn’t make sense to us based on super speed alone. Also, did this bank robbery happen before or after The Coalition formed? Please give your character sheet a little more detail and apply again.

@QueenOfTheBee Alec: Not accepted. Please proofread your character sheet, there are a few instances of spelling/grammatical errors and missing punctuation. What is Alec’s top speed? The width of an avenue isn’t that far of a jump, don’t be afraid to up Alec’s powers. The members of the Coalition are described as being like gods, it is expected for our characters to be a little OP. Who designed the chest rig in his super suit? How can someone be both ambitious and lazy? Those are opposing traits. Please expand upon them to be more situationally specific, or remove one of the two.
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For those who have been accepted, feel free to pm people to talk about relationships prior to the IC starting :]
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For the people what are part of the Coalition, this is sort of a reference for what Spectra looks like now.



It's not 1:1 but it's close enough to get the idea. Just figured ya'll should have a visual in case my description was ass.
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Thank you for the pointers, making the changes now and hope Jason can be accepted after
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Hope this is better now, please let me know if there's still improvements to be made
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@Starwinter Abigail: Accepted. Please remove the words ‘age’, ‘nationality’, and ‘gender’ from that section.


Done, done and done. Moving over the character tab as we speak, thanks!
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For the record anyone wanting to develop a friendship with Patrick is now than welcome to message me!
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Oh right yeah relationships can be discussed wherever I guess it's fine
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Waiting for my buddies to come home so we can look through sheets again :)

(We like doing these things together lol)
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@reiko@Sodomite@GingerBoi123 - Welcome to the squad, we look forward to writing with you soon.
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Woohoo! Thanks guys! I'll move Jason over now.

For everyone else, I'm open to discussions about relationships too. Shoot me a PM if you want, aha.
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I'll get to pming people soonish... for relations... I'm awfully lazy. >.>
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@GingerBoi123Happy to have you. :)

I'll PM folks eventually, I want to get an idea in my head for all of it before I do so.
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