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@AtomicNut looking it over I have a few points that give me pause. Nothing to big just a few little comments that would either need explanation or a small change.

-first the elves themselves were more based off the Warhammer wood elves, defenders of the wilderness and a bit brutal in their efforts. Now I could see some being tricksters but as a whole brutal murderers (if you enter their forest)

-second I don't really see much room for growth in the character. You already have a wide array of skills and magic that I don't know where else you would grow (granted you have probably trained longer than Jing has been alive)

-third being a current member of the irregulars could be difficult as the battle has already started, this could be remedied with saying Jing had sent you ahead and you were to meet back up with the group at our current regroup point.

And finally you forgot one bit. (Check the rules)
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Now with that all done who wants Star Wars Spoilers
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@AtomicNut looking it over I have a few points that give me pause. Nothing to big just a few little comments that would either need explanation or a small change.

-first the elves themselves were more based off the Warhammer wood elves, defenders of the wilderness and a bit brutal in their efforts. Now I could see some being tricksters but as a whole brutal murderers (if you enter their forest)

-second I don't really see much room for growth in the character. You already have a wide array of skills and magic that I don't know where else you would grow (granted you have probably trained longer than Jing has been alive)

-third being a current member of the irregulars could be difficult as the battle has already started, this could be remedied with saying Jing had sent you ahead and you were to meet back up with the group at our current regroup point.

And finally you forgot one bit. (Check the rules)


1-Alright. I wasn't sure about the kind of elves you had in mind. I will change it accordingly.

2-Okay, I will scale down and remove abilities

3-Can always be a bystander

4-It was my first day. I had forgotten about that, I will put it in, honest.
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Alright, take two.


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@AtomicNut wow I wasn't expecting you to start from scratch and you hit all my notes from earlier so I'll thank you and accept the character.
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So how did everyone's weekend go?
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So how did everyone's weekend go?


*internal wails of the damned*
Fine. 0^0
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So how did everyone's weekend go?


Weekend? What's that..?
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@Dark Light right? I'm currently on 11 days strait would be 16 if I hadn't passed out the one day and still have till at least Friday
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Good. Today is the last day of college before Winter hols.
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@ArthanusWhere should I put the flamethrower Magician?
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Getting ready to fly home for the holidays and stuff.
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@AtomicNut for my evil plots plans the center gate would be best
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@AtomicNut for my evil plots plans the center gate would be best


And which one is that one? N, W, E?
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@AtomicNut north with Jing
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Hey guys finally got a day off and have been lazy as he'll today. I'll get a post up in a bit
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@MojaveCourier hey when do you think you'll get a post up? Can't really do much on the easy side already stated that there are no guards in that area?
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Was writting it as you spoke lol. Been a busy week, with college finishinh for Christmas. Tis up now :)
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@MojaveCourier thank you sir. I'll spend tonight forming a post in my brain thing and post in the morning
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Sorry guys I have the post half written and should be able to finish it in the morning
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