@AtomicNut looking it over I have a few points that give me pause. Nothing to big just a few little comments that would either need explanation or a small change.
-first the elves themselves were more based off the Warhammer wood elves, defenders of the wilderness and a bit brutal in their efforts. Now I could see some being tricksters but as a whole brutal murderers (if you enter their forest)
-second I don't really see much room for growth in the character. You already have a wide array of skills and magic that I don't know where else you would grow (granted you have probably trained longer than Jing has been alive)
-third being a current member of the irregulars could be difficult as the battle has already started, this could be remedied with saying Jing had sent you ahead and you were to meet back up with the group at our current regroup point.
@AtomicNut looking it over I have a few points that give me pause. Nothing to big just a few little comments that would either need explanation or a small change.
-first the elves themselves were more based off the Warhammer wood elves, defenders of the wilderness and a bit brutal in their efforts. Now I could see some being tricksters but as a whole brutal murderers (if you enter their forest)
-second I don't really see much room for growth in the character. You already have a wide array of skills and magic that I don't know where else you would grow (granted you have probably trained longer than Jing has been alive)
-third being a current member of the irregulars could be difficult as the battle has already started, this could be remedied with saying Jing had sent you ahead and you were to meet back up with the group at our current regroup point.
And finally you forgot one bit. (Check the rules)
1-Alright. I wasn't sure about the kind of elves you had in mind. I will change it accordingly.
2-Okay, I will scale down and remove abilities
3-Can always be a bystander
4-It was my first day. I had forgotten about that, I will put it in, honest.
Name: Sybille Gender: Female Age: 14 (Actually 36, she has inherited the long lifespan of Elves) Appearance: Like so. She usually wears a form concealing robe to hide her nonhuman traits.
Bio: Sybille was an orphan who was taken into servitude of a certain Baron of the Empire, whose territory bordered the Silent Forest. A wayward creature born from two feuding enemies, the young kid faced a lot of scoff at her half-blood inheritage and was resented by many, usually being relegated to the most menial and denigrating jobs one could imagine that a child could make. However, it was equally true that a lot of the staff were kind to her, and did not mistreat her any poorer, even if her growth was slower than human children in that regard.
One day, everything changed for the young fey-blood. Chasing one of the lord's pet cats, she wandered into the castle's dungeon. She saw something that she was never meant to see. The chained and ravaged body of an elven woman, who had been subject of abuse for years, bound in cold iron chains and so weak she could barely talk. Suddenly, a grim realization came to herself. Why would anyone take a half-blood inside a household if not to protect an even more unspeakable secret? That woman... was her mother. And she had a hunch that the human that fathered herself was none other than the Baron himself.
Something inside her awakened. For a moment, she touched deep inside her own soul, and awakened the power of her own Soulstone. The Baron's mighty hold was suddenly set aflame in wrathful magical fire, as a teary eyed, screaming child with newly awakened magical powers went on a rampage and assaulted the dungeon. There, she broke her own mother's binds and took the broken elven woman outside the fortress in the ensuing chaos. While she had been a product of a vile act, she nevertheless thought that she at least owed her for bringing her to life. She had hoped that maybe, just maybe she would be accepted despite her half-blood nature.
She was wrong. As soon as she stepped into the forest, no less than half a dozen of bows aimed at her, whispers into her ears telling her of how abominable her nature was. She however, was granted mercy for she had brought one of their kin into their fold, and allowed her to leave the forest unscathed. She did so, unable to keep gazing at her mother who saw her as something she would rather never see again in her life. Heartbroken, she turned her sight once more in the lands of men, only to find that she had nowhere to go. She had set fire to her lord's keep, and also, after revealing herself to elves, she had doomed the entire hometown to perish under a rain of arrows.
She hid. Inside a wine cellar, deep in the town's tavern, hoping she was never found by either side, for she would probably be killed on the spot. Not that she had much will to live, but still, she was convinced that her death would be anything but quick. Her fortune for once, smiled at her. No elf or human soldier found her, but instead a wizened scholar, who had been asked to offer magical backup on the humans' counterattack. After she broke into sobs and told him the whole story, the old man just smiled and comforted the troubled child, and decided to take her as student. He also offered her to find people who could teach her the elven script and language.
Sybille left her past behind and aimed to become a great scholar aswell. However the old man, whose name was Zultar, died of old age no sooner she had finished her basic training in the arts. Sad for losing perhaps the person who had been closer to a parental figure, she nevertheless heeded the old man's words, who told that from that point on, she could do the rest on her own, and encouraged joining the Blood Rose Irregulars, an organization which would probably accept her condition and allow her to see the world experiences she needed for her skills to grow.
Fighting Style: Sybille can't do close and personal, and she only knows how to flail a dagger in melee. She, however is a decent shot with the bow, and most importantly, she has a peerless aim when it comes to magical combat. She relies on offensive elemental spells for the latter, both fire and ice. Equipment: A fine enchanted cloak, a dagger. Seweral jewelry accesories containing Soulstones. Skills/Abilities: -Elemental blast: Sybille is adept at flinging elemental blasts at great ranges.She currently can perform fire and ice, but she hopes to improve in this regard. -Enhaced Senses: Being half elf, Sybille has better eyesight (and even nightvision) and hearing than humans. She has also better reflexes. -Archery: While not to the level of her magic, Sybille can shoot fairly well with a bow. -Fey-blooded: She is unnaturally resistant to mind-altering magic and illusions. Also she probably has a lifespan of centuries if not millenia. -Elven Script: She knows how to pronounce and write it. -Servant chores: She can cook, clean and make beds.
Other Information: Being a Half-Elf and fey-blooded, she possesses the weakness of the fae to Cold iron. IE: A horseshoe or similar pure iron item would definitely feel like -acid- to her skin.
1. Listen to the GM(s), If you have a complaint tell me. I am not an evil dictator and if I am wrong I will admit it. 2. Romance and Gore allowed, But keep it in good taste and in site rules 3. Now not all characters will play nice with each other I understand that, but keep the disputes in the RP not in OOC 4. Be civilized and polite please 5. All basic RP rules apply to this roleplay: Power playing, Meta gaming, and others are not allowed. 6. The story isn't exactly set, If you have an idea for a mission feel free to pm me the details and I'll try to work it in. 7. Copy the rules into a Hider in the "other" of your cs so I know you read them. 8. Get into your character's skin become him or her as you are playing have fun and give us insight into their thoughts. 9. Try to keep active, in both the IC and OOC pages please. And even if you don't have anything to say, at least read the OOC
