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Yup, just did.
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Still minor WIP, thoughts? Sorry, I don't feel like a teacher would suit his character too well. Although.... Maybe a demonology teacher? Or a Psionics teacher, but that seems too obvious.

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@Silver Carrot@Awesomoman64

Sorry, I forgot to tag you in my post. You guys can attack him with whatever, I'll respond accordingly. Also, if there are something that you guys want to do or that I accidentally breached, just tell me, and I will edit my post ASAP
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Are there any weapons there?
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Your post is fine by me.
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@Silver Carrot I don’t state it specifically, but there should be everything available there for students to use. So yeah, you can take things you need
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Ah man, you demanding everyone to state their powers will def throw Circe off her game, she has no problem with the teachers knowing her powers, but will be sheepish to share in front of the others right off the bat lol
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@TheWindel @KoL Thoughts? What else do I have to do?

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I'm not exactly sure what the Twitch demon does in terms of abilities. Can you explain that a bit more.
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Well, first things first:

- Remove that bunch of redundant hiders, please. They make the CS needlessly hard to navigate through.

- Second, I have the same question as @TheWindel. What is a twitch demon?

- The description of that Twitch power is too confusing, please clarify this: what kind of power are you writing about? If it's physical power, how strong can he get? How exactly is that harmful for the environment and to people close to him? And what's this "latent power" you described?

- Psionics and ki are not the same thing, just as much as ki and mana aren't the same. Let's avoid this kind of power source crossover if possible. Why is it that psychic powers have a smell, especially a smell of an abstract feeling? Again, keep your description straight, psionics != ki != magic. Also, I want some applications and limits on this power as well "anything the user wishes" is shorthand for reality warping which is not a power within PC realm for very obvious reasons. How does the power have any effect on reality if it doesn't affect the physical plane?

- Explain "Minor vampiric demon suppression" better because I'm not understanding anything about it, given that seems to contradict the previous two entries of his CS.

- Please, don't use Black as a font color. It's nigh impossible to read without highlighting the text, which is an unnecessary inconvenience, especially on mobile devices.

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We going to have a fun little rivalry?? Lol
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I guess we could? Sonia just thinks you’re weird being all touchy with her.
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My posts might be delayed a bit due to irl stuff. I'll try to get one up tomorrow as soon as I can tho.
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@KoL Thanks for providing such a thorough list! I knew exactly what I needed to change, which is nice. I've changed his ability a bunch, and while it's closer to what I wanted to be saying, it's rather different to what I was actually saying. It'd probably be best if you forgot most of what you read in the previous draft.

Also sorry for not making things clear the first time 'round. It was about 3:00 am where I am, so I... uh... wasn't exactly functioning .

Let me know if I fucked up again. Self editing isn't really something that comes naturally to me, and this is an iffy power. Sorry to keep pestering you

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This Twitch demon sounds more like something he'd go to school to excise then to get an education alongside, considering it makes him brash, impulsive, and egotistical to match his boosted powers.

Hmm, I suppose that raises a question; Why is Ceiran going to Hikari Academy in the first place? I can't imagine he aspires to be a heroic figure.
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For the learned people there. While he doesn't necessarily want to be a heroic figure, there may be someone there who can help him. The only problem is, he might not want word of this getting out. He may be executed or something. (assuming capital punishment is a thing here)

Also he likes knowing things. I should write this in the sheet. Thanks for the questions!

Oh yeah, he's brash and impulsive even while not Twitching. It's a trait of his. He can't think ahead too well, so just makes it up as he goes along
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Good to know. You might want to also add that he's trying to conceal his demonic possession to some extent as well.
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Done. It's not stressed, but it's in there
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I see no inherent problems with him. So long as he realizes teachers will be on watch given his manic behavior. Await my partner's judgement.
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He's ok with me as well.
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