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Hidden 6 yrs ago Post by TheWendil
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@Lonewolf685

In that case, fine by me. Await the other GMs' opinion.
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@TheWindel I hadn't considered it, but you gave me a nice idea for an edit to my sheet. So now, the answer is yes, he did (briefly)
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Does she naturally produce the venom in her tail? Or does she have to manually load it in? I would also suggest cutting down the number of poisons she has to 3-5 in total.


There are sacs inside of her tail. With a sting, it pushes a burst of venom through her stinger.

And i removed fire and ice venom and changed some stuff around. Too many temperanerds in this room.
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Finished my CS, let me know if you need anything changed!
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@OwO After the modification Windel mentioned, I also think this is fine. Await KoL's answer before posting in CS Tab.

@KaijuBaragon Fine by me. Await KoL's answer before posting in CS Tab.

@Riegal Legit Villain. Looks about right to me. Wait for all GMs' approval before posting in CS tab.

@Lonewolf685 Promising. Fine with me, check in with KoL.

@Aviaire Touching. I like her. Ok with me, wait for GMs answer.

@NightmareInd Accepted as far as I am concerned.
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@Aviaire

What is the largest range she can emit her Quirk to?

@NightmareInd

I suppose he's fine now. Wait for @KoL's opinion.
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I'll try to submit a character tomorrow or Saturday at the latest.

I'm torn between 3 quirk ideas.
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OMG! A MY HERO RP! I'M HYPE! I CAN NOW MAKE TURBINE! HERO COMING! Also if anyone would like to link characters, I would't. Hero or villain.
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Ok, let's see what can be done here:

@KaijuBaragon, @OwO, @Riegal, @NightmareInd, @Aviaire, @Lonewolf685 You all are ok by me, you can move to the CS tab as long as you've been cleared by the others as well.
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Accepted by me. Await the other GMs' opinion.
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Maybe a 20m radius? But she can’t do much but stand there and use her quirk, not to mention how she’s affected by it, so she won’t go up to it often.
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@Aviaire

In that case, she's accepted by me so long as you add this range to her CS. Place her into the Character Tab.
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@Zaphander

The description of your character's quirk is a little bit vague when it comes to his resistance to damage while transformed, just to make it clearer, how much could he fall before getting any serious damage from say... hitting a concrete sidewalk? As in how high of a building could he jump from without fearing that he would break himself on impact?

Also, since he doesn't breathe while transformed, how long can he remain in that form without suffering choking himself?

Lastly, I suppose that he can only use his phone to alert heroes that he knows the number of, right? Unless he has another way of getting people's phone numbers, without them giving it to him, of course.
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anyways i decided on my quirk I'll start my character soonish
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Appearance: Naoto stands at around 5'5 with a thin shaped body, Looking quite sickly but is actually quite healthy. His hairstyle is short like a low fade that is bright red, Having dark blue eyes with his left eye having a larger pupil since the right eye. Some noticeable features of his appearance is having a mole on his lower left mouth, Pointed ears, high cheek bones and a thin nose.

In his civilian clothing he wears a multi colored t-shirt, The sweater being mostly made up of green and blue. Wearing tight fitted red pants with black running shoes and pink socks.

As Verdrehte he wears brightly colored green and brown tight fitted suit, As well as wearing 20th century black boots. His suit decorated with blue swirls adored on the shoulder and chest of the suit. Wearing a burlap sack over his head with eye, nose and mouth hole to help him breath. Rope wrapped around his neck to keep the burlap mask in place and not fall off.

Name: Naoto Higashikata

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Villain Name: Verdrehte

Quirk Name: Card Morphing

Quirk Type: Mutation

Quirk Description: He has the ability to create constructs out of cards. The ability to create tools, objects, weapons, armor, and even appendages out of cards. Sub-power of Card Manipulation. Variations of Object Constructs. Contents[show] Capabilities Users can turn cards into tools, objects, weapons and other items, create semi-living constructs and/or create structures/buildings of varying permanence. Users who have mastered this ability can use it for almost any situation, creating.

Inventory & Possessions: A old looking dagger.

Sample Post: (Sorry had a brain fart do not know what to come up for a sample post)
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She's fine by me; await the other GMs' opinions.

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Reading over your Quirk, I don't see how it fits under the rules of a Mutation-based Quirk. Card manipulation, especially turning them into weapons and tools, seems more like an Emitter power. Secondly, it seems you've just copied and pasted the Quirk description from a Wiki; either way, the Quirk is too versatile and does too many things to be considered. I would suggest limiting its function to creating one specific object or doing something else with the cards he has.

I also don't see why he has a dagger for his inventory since it has nothing to do with his Quirk. Lastly, you need a Sample Post to be considered for this RP as it gauges your level of writing and whether we'll find it up to standard.
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@Zaphander

The description of your character's quirk is a little bit vague when it comes to his resistance to damage while transformed, just to make it clearer, how much could he fall before getting any serious damage from say... hitting a concrete sidewalk? As in how high of a building could he jump from without fearing that he would break himself on impact?

Also, since he doesn't breathe while transformed, how long can he remain in that form without suffering choking himself?

Lastly, I suppose that he can only use his phone to alert heroes that he knows the number of, right? Unless he has another way of getting people's phone numbers, without them giving it to him, of course.


I would say a ten stories tall, so around 100 feet or so, would be the safest average height before he would take notable damage from falling onto solid concrete. 300 feet would be about as lethal as anyone else falling without some sort of quirk that could negate the damage. Of course if he falls on something like say, a sharp pipe or a jagged piece of rock, that's even more risky since all that weight concentrated to that point could shatter and possibly impale him.

Also he doesn't need to breath in rock form, but that doesn't mean he has to either. He could stay in his rock form indefinitely until enough damage occurs where he would shatter or he chooses to get out when he's not moving. Shattering in this instance would be if he looses at least 10% of his mass in whatever form he's in, with smaller forms being easier to shatter than bigger ones thanks to how relatively small 10% would be. This way he could so something like say, turn into a small rock and hide in a forest or under some water. Though he still can feel tired, hungry, sick, etc, but these are usually only because he was already suffering from one of those things before he transformed.

As for his phone I figured there was a sort of hero hotline for when you need immediate attention, and not just police level assistance. Like if 911 calls for the police, maybe there's another number that calls for heroes. It's why it's used only for dire emergencies like if there's a legit villain on the lose blowing things up and burning buildings down and not just a random purse snatcher. I guess I could say the number would alert a specific hero agency if Peter knows their number.
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@Zaphander I personally don't think I see to much issues with him as long as it's played alright. Wait for everyone's approval.

@Ruler Inc I like it, even if her Hero attitude is down the drain. Consider her accepted from me.

@Eviledd1984

  • Villains are filled for now.
  • Power looks more like a super power than a MHA Quirk. Quirks are more simple or straightforward, and their applications come from how people use them. 'Controlling Cards' is not a Quirk. Controlling the material from which they would be made is already a bit more like it.
  • That sheet has simply no love put into it, and it shows. It's sub-par to all of the rest, and the lack of Sample post (and WIP statement) tells me you either didn't read the whole things or didn't care for them. Unless it was posted too quickly or by mistake, which I hope it was.
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