[OOC] My Hero Academia: Another Story

[TheWendil]

@Lonewolf685

In that case, fine by me. Await the other GMs' opinion.

[KaijuBaragon]

@TheWindel I hadn't considered it, but you gave me a nice idea for an edit to my sheet. So now, the answer is yes, he did (briefly)

[OwO]

@OwO

Does she naturally produce the venom in her tail? Or does she have to manually load it in? I would also suggest cutting down the number of poisons she has to 3-5 in total.

@TheWindel

There are sacs inside of her tail. With a sting, it pushes a burst of venom through her stinger.

And i removed fire and ice venom and changed some stuff around. Too many temperanerds in this room.

[Aviaire]

Finished my CS, let me know if you need anything changed!

[SimpleWriter]

@OwO After the modification Windel mentioned, I also think this is fine. Await KoL's answer before posting in CS Tab.

@KaijuBaragon Fine by me. Await KoL's answer before posting in CS Tab.

@Riegal Legit Villain. Looks about right to me. Wait for all GMs' approval before posting in CS tab.

@Lonewolf685 Promising. Fine with me, check in with KoL.

@Aviaire Touching. I like her. Ok with me, wait for GMs answer.

@NightmareInd Accepted as far as I am concerned.

[TheWendil]

@Aviaire

What is the largest range she can emit her Quirk to?

@NightmareInd

I suppose he's fine now. Wait for @KoL's opinion.

[Mixtape Ghost N]

I'll try to submit a character tomorrow or Saturday at the latest.

I'm torn between 3 quirk ideas.

[Taka]

OMG! A MY HERO RP! I'M HYPE! I CAN NOW MAKE TURBINE! HERO COMING! Also if anyone would like to link characters, I would't. Hero or villain.

[KoL]

Ok, let's see what can be done here:

@KaijuBaragon, @OwO, @Riegal, @NightmareInd, @Aviaire, @Lonewolf685 You all are ok by me, you can move to the CS tab as long as you've been cleared by the others as well.

[Zaphander]

Peter Andrew

Appearance:

Regular

Costume

Name: Peter Andrew
Age: 16
Gender: Male

Hero Name: Avalanche
Quirk Name: Stone Shape
Quirk Type: Transformation
Quirk Description: Stone Shape allows Peter to change into a very large granite rock around five cubic feet or as small as one cubic inch, and weigh an appropriate amount based off his size. He can only take on simple shapes, with the most complex shape he can take is a perfectly spherical shape. In this form Peter can still sense as normal however he doesn't need to breath, though he can still be blinded/deafen. All Peter can do while in this form is roll or spin, with his spherical form being the best at doing both, and he can't change size unless he changes back to human first. He can transform even in spaces too small to normally fit his biggest form though whether or not he'll break free depends on what he's breaking free from. This form is very handy when falling from a high distance as either small or large boulder form is highly resistant against the sort of impact from falling up to around 100 feet.

When he transforms, his clothes tend to tear apart and possessions fall off his body, like backpacks and things in his pockets. Living creatures like people or animals aren't affected if he transforms even if he is holding onto them. It's very hard for him to control his momentum once he starts moving and he can't get out of his form until he comes to a complete stops, though if he's in human form he can transform into boulder form even while on the move. Doing enough damage to him that could shatter his form (Which means knocking off at least 10% of his current mass while in boulder form) does a critical amount of damage to him as well in either small or large form and any damage he has in his human form will also carry over into his boulder form as cracks and chips in the stone. When not moving in boulder form, he can remain in that form for at most thirty minutes, and less if he makes himself move around. Outside forces moving him like someone pushing him or if he turns into a boulder while on a slope doesn't count against that limit. Moving around in boulder form takes up a lot of his stamina, forcing him to rely on momentum to conserve his stamina. The bigger he is the more energy it takes for him to move. If he runs out of stamina he transforms back into his human form by force, and trying to change back will result in a lot of cracks and damage in his form, as well as an even shorter time limit until he either gets knocked out or just dies.

Inventory & Possessions:
Emergency Phone - Different from his regular cellphone, this is a phone meant solely for emergencies and can quickly call the police and alerts any nearby heroes with just a press of the button. It also can make a very loud noise louder than a shotgun blast in order to draw attention to his location. Lastly it can also be tracked via GPS as long as it's charged, and it has a 30 hour battery life.

Gadget Goggles - Special goggles Peter saved up his money to buy. Wearing it lets him use various features such as night vision, telescopes, and even heat detection. It also has a built in flash guard to defend against sudden bright lights. Needs to be charged though. Also works as water goggles.

First Aid Kit - A portable med kit that can handle minor injuries and lessen the severity of major wounds. Comes with stuff that can also be used to deal with common illness such as headaches, nausea, stomachaches, and so forth.

Travel Bag - Peter always carries a small travel bag that he can put his belongings into, like his cellphone and wallet, as well as a change of clothes in case he has to transform into a boulder and loses his clothes.

Sample Post:
Being a hero isn't easy. Peter knew that first hand as he saw his father lowered into the ground. He was a good man and a good husband, going above and beyond for his fellow men in the line of duty. Everyone called him a hero and Peter didn't think otherwise. But that doesn't mean it makes things easy. All his life his father told him to always be careful and to take care of himself. That things are never as simple as just taking the first step. Peter of course didn't believe his old man for a second and always knew he could do more if his dad just let him. But the reality was that you could never be prepared when the worse comes to worse.

After his father died Peter slowly recovered from his death and moved on with his life. While he still had the occasional flights of fancy about being a hero, it always came with the bitter pill about the risks. Instead of dwelling on it Peter just tried to focus on his education and working on his college credits towards law school. He wanted to join the police academy like his father but as an attorney instead of an officer. It was safer that way. His family could still be proud of him for following the family tradition while putting himself in a safe and comfortable job. He worked hard, read his books, took care of his body. Everything seem normal.

But true character is found not by what you show people, but what you hide.

Ever since that day Peter takes time after school to patrol his city. He keeps his ear to the ground to find trouble and gets involved when no one else is willing or able. During these times he can't show his face because he's worked so hard to make sure everyone liked what they saw. Instead he puts on a mask so he can finally do what he wanted to do all his life: take control. At first it was just around his school. Kids bullying each other during the day and thinking they can go home without a care in the world. He made it clear that it doesn't end there. When he heard about his friends having problems at their home life, he makes sure someone, anyone finds out. Cops, priests, teachers, he doesn't care how sensitive the matter is. People were getting hurt because of silence. When they whispered, he would be the one to scream. Peter thought he was helping. He should have listened to his father and remember:

It was never simple.

Everything Peter did only made things worse. People became angry and he only knew one way how to deal with them. Soon his friends started to stop hanging out with him, some of them never came back to school. Drama unfolded all around him and all he wanted to do was help by dealing with them directly. It all came to it's limit when he heard his best friend, the one person who knew and thought like he did, told everyone what Peter did. Even he couldn't believe the sort of extremes that Peter went just to do something, anything, instead of feeling powerless all the time. And now instead of becoming the hero that he wanted to be, he because public enemy number one.

A year later Peter moved away from his hometown. His mothers and his family fought long and hard to protect him from the others who would want to hurt him, both violent and legally, for the things he's done. He had the support of his family but deep down he questioned if it was really all worth it. If being a hero was something he really wanted to do. In order to make sure that this whole thing could blow over safely, Peter was sent to live with his uncle in San Francisco, fortunately right as he would be going to high school. It was then that Peter would have what he thought was his last chance to make everything all right: U.J. The hero academy started by the number one hero himself, All Might. If Peter could make it through this school, to make it to the top, then maybe he would know what he needs to do to be a hero. To learn the skills and knowledge instead of just the drive and the passion.

This was his chance to make things right.

[TheWendil]

@Zaphander

Accepted by me. Await the other GMs' opinion.

[Aviaire]

@TheWindel
Maybe a 20m radius? But she can’t do much but stand there and use her quirk, not to mention how she’s affected by it, so she won’t go up to it often.

[TheWendil]

@Aviaire

In that case, she's accepted by me so long as you add this range to her CS. Place her into the Character Tab.

[KoL]

@Zaphander

The description of your character's quirk is a little bit vague when it comes to his resistance to damage while transformed, just to make it clearer, how much could he fall before getting any serious damage from say... hitting a concrete sidewalk? As in how high of a building could he jump from without fearing that he would break himself on impact?

Also, since he doesn't breathe while transformed, how long can he remain in that form without suffering choking himself?

Lastly, I suppose that he can only use his phone to alert heroes that he knows the number of, right? Unless he has another way of getting people's phone numbers, without them giving it to him, of course.

[Mixtape Ghost N]

anyways i decided on my quirk I'll start my character soonish

[Mixtape Ghost N]

Phoebe S. Carmicheal/Tropica

Hero costume

Phoebe's costume is a little bit like this

African-American | 6'1ft | 121lb

Name:
Phoebe Sabrina Carmicheal

Age:
18

Gender:
Female

Hero:
Tropica.

Quirk Name:
Juicy-Fruit.

Quirk Type:
Emitter

Quirk Description:
Juicy Fruit is a strange one among even the quirks. Where some have the ability to create explosions with their sweat or control over ice and fire... Phoebe's quirk merely allows her to augment fruit. While that, probably doesn't sound very useful, how she augments fruit is what will cement her usefulness. If Phoebe touches a piece of fruit with all five fingers, Phoebe can infuse fruit with healing properties so that, once consumed, the fruit will gradually heal the consumer's wounds. The size and type of the fruit depend on the severity of the injuries healed; cherries and grapes could heal cuts, an apple could heal broken bones, and watermelon could heal people. It depends on how much of the fruit is eaten, too. If you eat half or one fourth... then that's how effective the healing will be. She can also take advantage of the healing, but the effect will be halved. Over time the effect will wear off, so the fruit has to be eaten in a few minutes or else it'll revert to regular fruit. In addition, future development would be infusing fruit with explosive properties.

Inventory & Possessions:

On her being at all times; Phoebe carries an assort of different fruits (Small stuff she can easily carry like Apples, oranges, etc) so in the case of emergencies she can be ready to heal people. Other than that she doesn't carry anything especially.

Sample Post:

"HAHAHA! NOBODY CAN DEFEAT MR. DRILLER!"

The massive villain stood victorious on the destroyed car, with his chest puffed out and with his hands which have been mutated into massive, easily twelve foot long, drills. His head also had a smaller drill, but he maniacally laughed as he was covered in wounds. His tank top was in tatters and his jeans were ripped.

"WHO'S NEXT TO GET DRILLED!?"

"... I bet somebody's compensating," Phoebe had her back to the wall as she peaked around the corner at the hulking beast that just destroyed every hero that came to fight him... somehow. Every hero in sight was drilled. Somehow, all these great heroes lost a fight against some perverted weirdo. And now there was just a girl in training, against a guy who could probably kill her in one hit. Of course, a real hero wouldn't be afraid to put their life on the line to protect innocents.

Good thing Phoebe ain't a real hero.

What Phoebe was, was clear as day; a student training to be a "hero" (it'd be more accurate to say she was in it for the fame and fortunate). Of course, she wasn't going to stand by and let this megalomaniac win; no sirree bob. She was going to at least do something, so at worst she can say she was there. In that head of hers, she had the perfect plan. She reached into her bag and pulled out some oranges - she needed something soft and quick if she was going to do what she was planning on. Using the cars as cover she walked over to one of the heroes; some girl dressed as a jet or something. Phoebe couldn't be bothered to remember the hero names. Quickly she peeled the orange and shoved the pieces into the girl's mouth. All of her drilling-related wounds closed and Phoebe peeled herself as she ran for the next hero. Repeating the process.

Soon there was another rush of heroes coming straight for the driller and he could only stand there with a raised eyebrow. "What the hell?" Mr. Driller asked nobody in particular, "Didn't I just beat you guys? You're old news!" Right before he jumped back into the fight; he noticed a new fighter healing people.

"So that's why..." He muttered to himself before he felt rage overcome him. He launched himself past the other heroes and went straight for the newcomer; midair he shouted, "YOU AREN'T CLEVER! YOU ARE GOING DOWN!"

And if he hadn't shouted that at the top of his lungs he would have surely killed Phoebe in one hit. But he did; she turned her head and saw the giant mountain of drills and rage flying towards her. On reflex, she kicked the hero she was healing away and scrambled to get out of the way. Mr. Driller's... drills, penetrated the ground before he pulled it out.

"You can't get away from me!" The Driller said as he charged Phoebe, before she, again, acted in pure reflex and tossed an orange and hit him square in the face. Unaware that she had already charged it with her quirk... it exploded, and he lapped it up. Realizing his wounds were being healed, he put the rest into his mouth (even the skin) and he was healed. "Why thank you!" He shouted. "Now I can thrash these heroes again!"

She heard various insults and other sounds of disapproval as she decided that she's done enough and chose to remove herself from the situation as the fight continued.

[Eviledd1984]

Appearance: Naoto stands at around 5'5 with a thin shaped body, Looking quite sickly but is actually quite healthy. His hairstyle is short like a low fade that is bright red, Having dark blue eyes with his left eye having a larger pupil since the right eye. Some noticeable features of his appearance is having a mole on his lower left mouth, Pointed ears, high cheek bones and a thin nose.

In his civilian clothing he wears a multi colored t-shirt, The sweater being mostly made up of green and blue. Wearing tight fitted red pants with black running shoes and pink socks.

As Verdrehte he wears brightly colored green and brown tight fitted suit, As well as wearing 20th century black boots. His suit decorated with blue swirls adored on the shoulder and chest of the suit. Wearing a burlap sack over his head with eye, nose and mouth hole to help him breath. Rope wrapped around his neck to keep the burlap mask in place and not fall off.

Name: Naoto Higashikata

Age: 19

Gender: Male

Villain Name: Verdrehte

Quirk Name: Card Morphing

Quirk Type: Mutation

Quirk Description: He has the ability to create constructs out of cards. The ability to create tools, objects, weapons, armor, and even appendages out of cards. Sub-power of Card Manipulation. Variations of Object Constructs. Contents[show] Capabilities Users can turn cards into tools, objects, weapons and other items, create semi-living constructs and/or create structures/buildings of varying permanence. Users who have mastered this ability can use it for almost any situation, creating.

Inventory & Possessions: A old looking dagger.

Sample Post: (Sorry had a brain fart do not know what to come up for a sample post)

[TheWendil]

@Ruler Inc

She's fine by me; await the other GMs' opinions.

@Eviledd1984

Reading over your Quirk, I don't see how it fits under the rules of a Mutation-based Quirk. Card manipulation, especially turning them into weapons and tools, seems more like an Emitter power. Secondly, it seems you've just copied and pasted the Quirk description from a Wiki; either way, the Quirk is too versatile and does too many things to be considered. I would suggest limiting its function to creating one specific object or doing something else with the cards he has.

I also don't see why he has a dagger for his inventory since it has nothing to do with his Quirk. Lastly, you need a Sample Post to be considered for this RP as it gauges your level of writing and whether we'll find it up to standard.

[Zaphander]

@Zaphander

The description of your character's quirk is a little bit vague when it comes to his resistance to damage while transformed, just to make it clearer, how much could he fall before getting any serious damage from say... hitting a concrete sidewalk? As in how high of a building could he jump from without fearing that he would break himself on impact?

Also, since he doesn't breathe while transformed, how long can he remain in that form without suffering choking himself?

Lastly, I suppose that he can only use his phone to alert heroes that he knows the number of, right? Unless he has another way of getting people's phone numbers, without them giving it to him, of course.

@KoL

I would say a ten stories tall, so around 100 feet or so, would be the safest average height before he would take notable damage from falling onto solid concrete. 300 feet would be about as lethal as anyone else falling without some sort of quirk that could negate the damage. Of course if he falls on something like say, a sharp pipe or a jagged piece of rock, that's even more risky since all that weight concentrated to that point could shatter and possibly impale him.

Also he doesn't need to breath in rock form, but that doesn't mean he has to either. He could stay in his rock form indefinitely until enough damage occurs where he would shatter or he chooses to get out when he's not moving. Shattering in this instance would be if he looses at least 10% of his mass in whatever form he's in, with smaller forms being easier to shatter than bigger ones thanks to how relatively small 10% would be. This way he could so something like say, turn into a small rock and hide in a forest or under some water. Though he still can feel tired, hungry, sick, etc, but these are usually only because he was already suffering from one of those things before he transformed.

As for his phone I figured there was a sort of hero hotline for when you need immediate attention, and not just police level assistance. Like if 911 calls for the police, maybe there's another number that calls for heroes. It's why it's used only for dire emergencies like if there's a legit villain on the lose blowing things up and burning buildings down and not just a random purse snatcher. I guess I could say the number would alert a specific hero agency if Peter knows their number.

[SimpleWriter]

@Zaphander I personally don't think I see to much issues with him as long as it's played alright. Wait for everyone's approval.

@Ruler Inc I like it, even if her Hero attitude is down the drain. Consider her accepted from me.

@Eviledd1984

• Villains are filled for now.
• Power looks more like a super power than a MHA Quirk. Quirks are more simple or straightforward, and their applications come from how people use them. 'Controlling Cards' is not a Quirk. Controlling the material from which they would be made is already a bit more like it.
• That sheet has simply no love put into it, and it shows. It's sub-par to all of the rest, and the lack of Sample post (and WIP statement) tells me you either didn't read the whole things or didn't care for them. Unless it was posted too quickly or by mistake, which I hope it was.