2 Guests viewing this page
Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Amethyst
Raw

Amethyst

Member Seen 3 mos ago

Alrighty, my two kids are here! Can't wait to hear what you guys think! :D


Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Hitman
Raw
GM
Avatar of Hitman

Hitman Mori Quam Foedari

Member Seen 2 mos ago

Alrighty, my two kids are here! Can't wait to hear what you guys think! :D




Very interesting abilities and very interesting characters! Welcome aboard!
Hidden 5 yrs ago 5 yrs ago Post by Ryteb Pymeroce
Raw
Avatar of Ryteb Pymeroce

Ryteb Pymeroce The Emerald Mage

Member Seen 4 yrs ago

Hidden 5 yrs ago 5 yrs ago Post by Jumbus
Raw
Avatar of Jumbus

Jumbus

Member Seen 2 hrs ago

1x Like Like
Hidden 5 yrs ago 5 yrs ago Post by LilSwifty
Raw
Avatar of LilSwifty

LilSwifty Danish Pastry

Member Seen 4 yrs ago



Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Hitman
Raw
GM
Avatar of Hitman

Hitman Mori Quam Foedari

Member Seen 2 mos ago



Overall, looks very good! A few very minute details to glance over, and you should be good to go.

  • If you could maybe explain the development of the physical wings a little more? I see that she had it at birth, but it seems to go unnoticed for the rest of the bio. If you could describe that just in brief that would be good, whether it's "relentlessly bullied throughout childhood" or "people found it cool" or whatever.
  • Your backstory kinda cuts off at 18. If you could add just a little bit about the fallout after this incident (how life is going on since, et cetera, et cetera) that would be great.
  • Your powers are mostly good, but there are two that I am a bit concerned with, specifically 2 and 5. I think that these two veer out into other powers' territory a little too much, which I'm very much not sure about.


Outside of that, everything looks great! Love the character.
Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Amethyst
Raw

Amethyst

Member Seen 3 mos ago

Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by canaryrose
Raw
Avatar of canaryrose

canaryrose

Member Seen 20 days ago



this is gonna be so fucking confusing but i love them
1x Thank Thank
Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Scarifar
Raw
Avatar of Scarifar

Scarifar Presto~!

Member Seen 2 hrs ago

1x Like Like
Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Hitman
Raw
GM
Avatar of Hitman

Hitman Mori Quam Foedari

Member Seen 2 mos ago

Looks good!
Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Shard
Raw
Avatar of Shard

Shard

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

If you're still accepting, I may make a character for this.
Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Hitman
Raw
GM
Avatar of Hitman

Hitman Mori Quam Foedari

Member Seen 2 mos ago

If you're still accepting, I may make a character for this.


We are indeed!
1x Like Like
Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Shard
Raw
Avatar of Shard

Shard

Member Seen 2 yrs ago

@Hitman

I will write something up.
Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Hitman
Raw
GM
Avatar of Hitman

Hitman Mori Quam Foedari

Member Seen 2 mos ago

@Hitman

I will write something up.


Sounds great! There's a link to the Discord if you'd like to join in the 2nd OOC post. You don't have to, but a lot of stuff goes down there and most of the announcements take place there as well. :)
Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Hitman
Raw
GM
Avatar of Hitman

Hitman Mori Quam Foedari

Member Seen 2 mos ago

basically our discord

3x Like Like 1x Laugh Laugh
Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by DarkRecon
Raw
Avatar of DarkRecon

DarkRecon The sword that smites evil

Member Seen 3 mos ago

I'm interested in this RP but at the moment, don't know about a good character. I do have some ideas but...compared to the other characters shown so far, doesn't seem like anything original.

But before any of that...are you still accepting?
3x Like Like
Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Amethyst
Raw

Amethyst

Member Seen 3 mos ago

@DarkRecon I’m almost positive that we’re still accepting! Feel free to hop in the discord and chat it up while you brainstorm. We don’t bite...hard. ^~^
Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by DarkRecon
Raw
Avatar of DarkRecon

DarkRecon The sword that smites evil

Member Seen 3 mos ago

@DarkRecon I’m almost positive that we’re still accepting! Feel free to hop in the discord and chat it up while you brainstorm. We don’t bite...hard. ^~^


....-___-'....yeah nice sales pitch there....
Hidden 5 yrs ago Post by Hitman
Raw
GM
Avatar of Hitman

Hitman Mori Quam Foedari

Member Seen 2 mos ago

I'm interested in this RP but at the moment, don't know about a good character. I do have some ideas but...compared to the other characters shown so far, doesn't seem like anything original.

But before any of that...are you still accepting?


We indeed are still accepting and it would be great to have you!
Hidden 5 yrs ago 5 yrs ago Post by taylorquest
Raw

taylorquest

Member Seen 4 yrs ago


↑ Top
2 Guests viewing this page
© 2007-2024
BBCode Cheatsheet