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@CameleonFox an idea @Lord Wraith had, rather than being Thors daughter but maybe is some form of mischievous trick by Loki as some form of replacement for Thor?
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@CameleonFox an idea @Lord Wraith had, rather than being Thors daughter but maybe is some form of mischievous trick by Loki as some form of replacement for Thor?


i kinda wanna still have the whole thing with tess and torunn, having them share a body and i dont think that would work as her being a replacement for thor, also it's not really like thor really has to deal with Torunn... both her and tess are around 42 at this point,
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i kinda wanna still have the whole thing with tess and torunn, having them share a body and i dont think that would work as her being a replacement for thor, also it's not really like thor really has to deal with Torunn... both her and tess are around 42 at this point,


No I meant... that was Lokis mischievous idea to 'replace' Thor, and you can still do Tess and Torunn. I'm just trying to find a way to make it work for you without Thor being a dad, as by this point if she's been active around five years the two of them will have met by this point.

I am going to have to say I'm not comfortable, feel free to overrule me GMs, with you taking Magnog though.
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i kinda wanna still have the whole thing with tess and torunn, having them share a body and i dont think that would work as her being a replacement for thor, also it's not really like thor really has to deal with Torunn... both her and tess are around 42 at this point,


i didnt even really say that she was thor's daughter in the final draft of my character sheet so we could just say that torunn was like a friend of thor or something
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i didnt even really say that she was thor's daughter in the final draft of my character sheet so we could just say that torunn was like a friend of thor or something


in the comics shes definately the daughter of thor, but i didnt state it outright in the final draft, i dont think
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in the comics shes definately the daughter of thor, but i didnt state it outright in the final draft, i dont think


Torunn Thorsdottir


If you're not too interested in playing the Thor daughter angle there is the likes of Valkyrie available.
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If you're not too interested in playing the Thor daughter angle there is the likes of Valkyrie available.


if you would be comfortabe with it, instead of being his daughter, she can just be his sister who was casted out around the early 80's so everything with tess can line up

also yeah i did forget to change her name until now sorry, i went ahead to fix it a bit))
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C H A R A C T E R C O N C E P T P R O P O S A L
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L A U R A A S S A S S I N N U N A V U T, C A N A D A 'T H E F A C I L I T Y'
C H A R A C T E R C O N C E P T:


"In the midst of hate, I found there was, within me, an invincible love.
In the midst of tears, I found there was, within me, an invincible smile.
In the midst of chaos, I found there was, within me, an invincible calm.
I realized, through it all, that…
In the midst of winter, I found there was, within me, an invincible summer." - Albert Camus

X-23, that was the name given to the greatest creation of the 'Facility', their one and only success but also the only one that they needed. Since she was created the 'Facility' shifted their resources away from cloning and towards developing X-23 into the most efficient, ruthless and most importantly obedient assassin that they could. To aide in this they have conducted numerous physical and chemical experiments on her to test the extent of her capabilities. Over the years they have developed various fail-safes meant to protect themselves from various imagined scenarios where X-23 has somehow been wrestled out from under their control without their expressed consent. They are confident that they are well prepared for every possible scenario.

My intent for this character is to start from the very beginning. Laura is a clone of Wolverine that has been created by the 'Facility', an offshoot of the Weapon X programme. Using Laura as an agent/assassin they eliminate any competition or potential security risks, they will stop at nothing to protect themselves and enforce their own agenda. Thus my approach to Laura's character will be starting from a 'clean slate' that can be built upon. Laura is viewed by the 'Facility' as nothing except for a tool, a weapon, and she has known no life outside of the 'Facility'.

C H A R A C T E R M O T I V A T I O N S & G O A L S:

Laura is one of those characters that I always find myself being rather drawn towards and feeling a personal connection with, I guess in part she has a coolness factor to her which helps but I find myself more interested in the obstacles in her life that she has overcome and they journey she has taken to find a sense of identity and a growing confidence and pride. Even in her earliest stories I found myself really appreciating the character, although also being a bit frustrated at some of the what I felt were questionable decisions that were made with her.

My driving motivation while writing stories involving Laura will be to really capture the idea of self discovery and personal growth. Of learning how to overcome your past, your anxieties and fears, your distrust in the world and the people that inhabit it, to find confidence, pride, and love from within as well as without. Although at the start I will focus on the 'Facility' in the first Arc I intend it to be mostly for establishing the origins and groundwork for my interpretation of the character although that is still important I am very keen on and exited for developing what comes afterwards, exploring a world that is fresh and new but dangerous, forming friendships, and findings one's chosen family. Ideally I would like Laura to enter a master-apprentice type relationship with Wolverine, which would progress into a more father-daughter one down the line.

The tone I wish to convey is a serious and mature one, however I don't want it to be grim, dark, or edgy I would ideally have it more hopeful and optimistic, perhaps even uplifting. Some of the subject matter does not lend itself well to light-heartedness of jokes but I hope that I can strike some balance while keeping a respectful approach to what is happening.

There should be plenty of opportunity for interaction and crossover with different characters at different points of the initial arcs that I have planned out, as for example while with the 'Facility' there could be a lot of potential with the more secret organisation and agencies side of things. There could also be various contexts where Laura has been sent on a mission by the 'Facility' for different reasons, for example proving that she can complete an objective with various potential interferences.

Arc 1

The 'Facility' has begun field testing their latest project 'X-23', they are confident that they will get the results that they have been looking for and are starting to reach out to government and private organisation who might be interested in purchasing their 'weapon'. Meanwhile Dr Martin Poirier has been developing his own weapons and intends to put them in competition with the 'Facility'. Internally the 'Facility' looks like it is a well oiled machine, an apt analogy for this heartless institution, however under the surface jealousy and resentment boils as well as regret and shame...

Arc 2

Laura finds herself cold and alone with only a vague direction to guide her and imaginary scenes of a distant place that she has never been to. Through instincts alone she must survive as she puts an end to the last remnants of the 'Facility'. Then perhaps she can begin to live...

Arc 3

Laura experiences a frightful encounter with a Wendigo. Saved by the superhero team Alpha Flight, Laura must learn how to operate within a team if she is to overcome this monstrous foe. But can she bring herself to trust these strangers?

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