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(Let me know if I gotta change anything.)
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@Lilissen
No rush. A lot of people don’t have a character sheet ready.

@Redcord
Thor is great and accepted. Please move the sheet to the characters tab.

@BangoSkank
That take on Wolverine would work in this.

@PatientBean
Black Cat also looks good and is accepted. You may move your sheet to the characters tab.

@Eviledd1984
Spider-Man is looking good, but I would like it if you expanded the second paragraph in the history section about what he is currently doing. Besides that everything looks good, save the fact you repeated his skill set twice. But once you expand on what I asked, I’ll probably approve Peter.

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Hidden 2 yrs ago Post by Eviledd1984
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@Martian

How does my sheet look now?
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Hidden 2 yrs ago 2 yrs ago Post by ImaginedBird67
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@Martian

I think my history needs work but other than that, I think I'm good.
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@Eviledd1984
Thanks for making the alteration. Spider-Man is approved and can be moved to the characters tab.

@Lilissen
You don’t need to rush. Just let me know what character you want to play, just so I can tell you if they would fit.

@ImaginedBird67
There’s a couple things I would like you to expand on. For the appearance section, I would suggest just using an image. The history section needs a lot of fleshing out, as it is currently two sentences and not the minimum two paragraphs. I would suggest expanding on Kate’s origins, her reaction to the Hydra reveal and then how she joined the Avengers. Also I would like you to expand on the sample story line section. If you could make those changes, I’ll look over your character sheet again.
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@ImaginedBird67
There’s a couple things I would like you to expand on. For the appearance section, I would suggest just using an image. The history section needs a lot of fleshing out, as it is currently two sentences and not the minimum two paragraphs. I would suggest expanding on Kate’s origins, her reaction to the Hydra reveal and then how she joined the Avengers. Also I would like you to expand on the sample story line section. If you could make those changes, I’ll look over your character sheet again.


Thank you for the response. The history section was me misreading what was required, I shall get to this immediately. But question what do you mean by expanding the story line section?

Also, the pictures don't seem to work for some reason.

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Still working on an Iron Man sheet. Might be able to get it out tonight, just have to wrap up the history section.
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@ImaginedBird67
Thanks for expanding on the history. As for the image, what site are you using to host it? I personally use https://imgur.com. If you could add a second story line, maybe something like her training under the original Hawkeye, and get the picture working, then Kate will be accepted.

@webboysurf
Iron Man is accepted. Please move his sheet to the characters tab.
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@ImaginedBird67
Thanks for expanding on the history. As for the image, what site are you using to host it? I personally use https://imgur.com. If you could add a second story line, maybe something like her training under the original Hawkeye, and get the picture working, then Kate will be accepted.


Finally got the pic and did the other second storyline. I'm not sure if it's just my computer but my images don't show.
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Also, how many characters are we allowed?
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@ImaginedBird67
I'm going to approve Hawkeye. Please move her sheet to the characters tab, and edit in an image when you get one working. Also I'm allowing two characters per player right now.
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@ImaginedBird67
Hey, you got the images working. Also Captain Marvel is approved and can be moved to the characters tab.

@udonoodles @NinaDivine @Byrd Man @Sep @Sanity43217 @Birdboy @Lilissen
Checking in if you guys are still interested in participating. If yes, please let me know when to expect a character sheet from you.
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Checking in if you guys are still interested in participating. If yes, please let me know when to expect a character sheet from you.


i'm still interested, though given the majority of my ideas have been overruled by the present cast, i might need some time to think over new ones. is there a deadline you had in mind for entries?

edit: on second thought, i don't think i have much to contribute here, so i'll be bowing out.
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@ImaginedBird67
Hey, you got the images working. Also Captain Marvel is approved and can be moved to the characters tab.

@udonoodles @NinaDivine @Byrd Man @Sep @Sanity43217 @Birdboy @Lilissen
Checking in if you guys are still interested in participating. If yes, please let me know when to expect a character sheet from you.


I'm afraid not. Working away
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Sorry about not being around, was a little bit sick.

@udonoodles @Sep
Thanks for letting me know. Best of wishes for you both in future RP adventures.

@Crimson Flame @PatientBean @Redcord @Eviledd1984 @webboysurf @ImaginedBird67
ANNOUNCEMENT:
The first IC post is up! I wanted to get it out before Christmas, but by no means feel compelled to reply until after the holidays.

@NinaDivine @Byrd Man @Sanity43217 @Birdboy @Lilissen and anyone else interested in participating.
While the IC has started, I’m still allowing character sheet applications and will be until we reach the point where the first mission truly begins.

And to everyone as a whole: Merry Christmas, Happy Holidays, or whatever else you do!
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