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Me'n Da Paw did a collab too~
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@Zeroth Yeah I figured that would be the case as I said it has been a while. This was just the first draft concept. I'm alright with completely changing the character. I'll get something together a bit more that works better. Honestly just plain normal spirit magic would work for me. So I guess I'll just start making my changes.
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@BladeSS4 The thing about Spirit Magic is that it requires meeting that spirit and forming a contract with it over the course of the RP itself--it's not something that Players can start out with from the get go.
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Well here is version 2 of my character this one is extremely watered down. Kept it sort of flame magic with the potential of a spirit later on. Hopefully this version of the character is better and more acceptable than the first I submitted for review.




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@BladeSS4 There are still several issues with this application as is, but it's somewhat more workable than before.

  • We already have another player whose magic is Sun themed, as well as an important NPC, so I feel like this would be a little too much overlap given the rarity/power of that element.
  • I'm not going to allow the grimoire to have a spirit inside it.
  • Given his background information and the fact that he's not going to have lived multiple lifetimes anymore (you'll need to correct that in his details btw), it doesn't make sense for him to be a master martial artist. Characters starting the game shouldn't really have something like "knowledge of many styles" and so forth.
  • The "creative use of mana" skill sounds like more of an informed trait, it's not really something that differentiates him from other players in any noticeable way. Especially when his spells are just "flashbang" and "fireball" respectively.
  • This is more of an opinion than something that goes against "the rules," but to be perfectly honest a lot of details in his background, personality, and description of his magic come across as very...Gary Stu/Main Character Syndrome. I think characters having tragedy or extreme events in their lives that drive them is fine, but this just doesn't come off that well.


Again, it's more malleable than it was before, but by the time all of the above was addressed I feel like it would still be a completely different character.

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I will be working on a GM update post this weekend! I think everyone's pretty much done with collabs, right? If not, let me know!
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I’m pretty comfortable where Hikari is, so I didn’t feel a post was necessary from me this round. I’m good to keep moving forward.
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Hell yeah, looking forward to it
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For sure ready to move forward, yup.
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Let's-a go! :D
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Eyo, will be dropping this RP. Just can't get into it, alas. Good luck with it though, y'all!
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I forgor about this, never even started making a character. :p
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@ERode

Sorry to see you go, but it happens.
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Update is go! I'll be collabing with Databug for Tristan's next part, but other than that I don't think I missed anyone? Let me know if there are any issues!

The next update will be the last one for this trial, and then we'll move on to the next...which I think will be quite interesting, given what we've seen from characters in this one! >:)
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I was wondering where Ricebolt went... So he finally shows himself, huh? And he's just as much of a casanova as Pompadouche I see. xD

Well then, in spirit with Nephy's character....

OF COURSE WE'LL ACCEPT HIS GENUINE AND OBVIOUSLY-NOT-AT-ALL BACKSTABBING-RIFE OFFER! 8D
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@Zeroth Assuming we can still deal with this on our own as long as we make it interesting? Should we check with you or with @Remram for Isvelt's reponses?
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@SilverPawFeel free to defend against the attacks however you want--if you want to say your character directly blocks them, just keep in mind that it's multiple attacks from mages of varying strengths, so it's likely not something you could completely no-sell. But as far as "can I just go ahead and dodge," yeah, you have free reign. Bob and weave, send out a counter attack, whatever.

As far as taking any of the NPCs out in a single stroke, just be reasonable with it or make it narratively interesting. I will also accept "rule of funny," lol, if you want to have one NPC get in the others' way or something like that.

For Isvelt, it can go either or! If Remram wants to chime in I've got no issue with it!
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@Zeroth@SilverPaw

Do you guys want me to respond as Isvelt? I can do that if you want.
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im dealing with some medical stuff on my end but im trying to work on keeping up with posts.
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Take your time my dude. Your health always comes first.
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Illios and Bryant meet again.
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