Yes, I just need to write the background but at the time, as I stated above, I was in the process of moving but if this still happening I'll be more than happy to write up a background for my said character.

OMG!! Excitement just filled me right there. :)

Okie dokie. ^^;

Genkai said Gosh, did I overlook you? >.< I'm sorry. Can you link me to your CS? I'll check it out!I

You had exams at the time I think and just weren't on as much, so it's fine :p

Here's my CS. You did look it over and gave some feedback, but I wrote a response to that as well, which I think you didn't really get to at the time.

Thank you.

To get back onto what you said way back then.

So her model appearance would be her real appearance right? Not her online avatar. Her online avatar wouldn't be allowed (from the Gvn) to be used in modeling. It's their property and no one is really able to make tangible avatars. So it would have to be HER as a personal modeling. If you wanted to stick with that route.

As far as other Gvns go, they don't necessarily interact much unless there is a global threat. For the most part, each Gvn has their Correctors stick to their own country but it wouldn't be a stretch to say that there is some online underground forum for Correctors or Hackers to gossip about people around the world.

Since you plan on making her more of a vet, you could up her age to 23 if you wanted, we have so many 22 year olds running around here. I think I'll need to take another look at the CS but I think is that all?

Genkai said
Nothing wrong with Monty Python. XD And your link doesn't work. I shall go cry now. But anyway, I can't wait to see who is accepted (wait, I should know this...) and how they can mesh together, hopefully fairly well

Well of course we are all here! We are strong willed folk that took the patience virtue in fourth grade instead of armpit fart specialization. -insert derogatory comment about uneducated plebeians here-

People meshing together is important! It allows them to meld together like fruit in a blender into a delicious tasting mango smoothie... but you know people flavored! (I believe my analogy is going off track..)

And the link does not work? Oh no! Well have another one!

I might ask for one more day - I am having some trouble with adding my would be Corrector Appearance.
I mean ... will it be okay if he would look exactly like Noctis Lucis Caelum from the upcoming FF XV ?

No worries, and nah, I don't mind. I lost track of FF so I won't have a bias when it comes to his appearance. XD

Though I do want to get back into FF...when I'm not so poor.

Good. I´ll submit a sheet tomorrow ! :-)

Genkai said I think I'll need to take another look at the CS but I think is that all?

My original plan was for her digital appearance to be used as a model, but if it has to be her real appearance, that's fine too. And I can up her age no problem, that's fine. I'll be taking another look myself since it's been a while and I'll post when I've made proper edits.

Do our characters have to be from Japan or can they be from the United States?

Krauxis said
My original plan was for her digital appearance to be used as a model, but if it has to be her real appearance, that's fine too. And I can up her age no problem, that's fine. I'll be taking another look myself since it's been a while and I'll post when I've made proper edits.

Okay, good then!

iSuspect said
Do our characters have to be from Japan or can they be from the United States?

It would be preferable that they are, just easier in terms of adjusting, I'd think. Since at the moment, non-native Correctors coming in would be a rare occurrence, I wouldn't want too many of them coming in. Since they'd be kind of 'special' characters.

Genkai said
It would be preferable that they are, just easier in terms of adjusting, I'd think. Since at the moment, non-native Correctors coming in would be a rare occurrence, I wouldn't want too many of them coming in. Since they'd be kind of 'special' characters.

Okay. Sorry that I haven't got my bio up yet but I assure you that I am working on it. Work is kind of killing me. :/ But can you give me any feedback so far from my character sheet so I can go ahead and adjust along the way, please? :)

Sure, can you link me to it? *tries to reach and cannot because lazy* >___>

Genkai said
Sure, can you link me to it? *tries to reach and cannot because lazy* >___>

http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/4817/posts/ooc?page=2#post-361169

There you go. And I honestly understand the feeling. :D

Name
Michiko Hashimoto

Alias in the DgtWld
Fox

Age
22

Average Appearance


Corrector Appearance


Weapon of Choice


Fox´s weapon of choice is a sword with an engine built into its hilt. Despite it´s appearance, Fox wields it with great agility as his fighting style is based on it. The data feed for the sword adjusts some attributes of the sword like piercing/cutting power, weight - basic abilities of every sword. Fox´s fighting style is dominated by swift, agile movements as his body is more built for that style of combat - he lacks in raw strength.

Cell Phone


Personality
Michiko is a person who views the world from two viewpoints at once - both from the viewpoint of logic and feeling, making him an open minded thinker who can offer several viewpoints on one situation. Also, this fact combined with his great interest in numbers and mathematics makes him a very quick minded person who can solve problems while knowing the basic facts. This also means that he is sometimes hard to approach as he can jump to conclusions quickly. However, once he sees he was wrong, his humble personality makes him apologize for anything that might happened because of his thinking. Once he opens himself to somebody, he will do everything to protect and help the said person, making him very protective and caring about the ones he cares about. Also, his stubborn personality makes dealing with a nussance sometimes.

Background

Michiko was born to Akane Hashimoto and Richard Douglas, both workers in the Samsung company whom met at a company event in Osaka, Japan. Richard moved into Osaka a year after the events to pursuit his dream of having a family with Akane, and they settled down. Three years into their marriage, Michiko was born as their first and only son. His parents did the best to grant him the best childhood possible. They both took turns in spending time with the little boy who developed a strong attachment to his family, that deepened as the boy grow older. From a very young age, he was taught that if he wanted something, he had to work hard and prove it that he deserved it. This was the foundation of the person who will work hard to achieve his goals and dreams. He established the first friendships at the Osaka playgrounds, some of them turned out to be lasting friendships. Thanks to the way his parents raised him, he was also very humble from his early childhood.

As years passed on, he attended the Nishi-Ku Elementary School in Osaka, the closest to their home. There, the boy showed great promise by easily mastering and progressing the lessons in school. He always did the homework on time, and sometimes he did a little extra work just to hone his skills. He preferred mathematics above other subjects, but he managed to pass them regardless. The friendships that endured from his early childhood still lasted, some of them even deepened. Years passed on and he continued to work hard for his goals. His humble personality kept developing - he was polite to the ones that he had a good relation with, but remained cold and arrogant towards the persons that disliked him for no reason. Years passesd on and on and before his parents realized, the young boy was about to finish the Elementary school. His next steps took him to the Osaka Junior High School.

He continued to prove his knowledge in the field of early mathematics and counting, while at the same time he started to show some interest in more engineering oriented subjects like physics and information technologies. He created new friendships and continued to nurture older ones. His parents continued to pass on their knowledge onto their only son, who gladly accepted it and did his best to live his life as best as he could - for him, that was school, his family and friends. Here, Michiko started to really immerse himself into mathematics counting, with a little bit of physics and IT subjects, and he already made up his mind for his next step in education. The next step arrived faster than he anticipated, as he graduated from the Osaka High School six years. His next steps took him to the Osaka University of Technologies. He was seventeen when he started his first year at the university.

At this point in his life, he was approached by the Government with an offer he had no option to refuse - to become a Corrector, a fighter of cyber crime in the digitized world. Without the option to refuse, Michiko accepted the offer and took on his new job with great enthusiasm. New challenges and duties were a welcomed change into his life, but it also had some downsides. The beginnings were hard for the boy who progressed High School with little to no problems. He had issues with understanding the new, complex things presented to him and the communication between him and the teachers was on the freezing point. Not to mention, his work was not going well with his sleep regime, so he was in a state of constant tiredness. He struggled for a few weeks and then he decided to change his approach and things changed by themselves in school. He picked up a steady pace of understanding and mastering the subjects via hard work and communicating with his teachers, despite his secret life as a Corrector. He was never the most popular and he never wanted to be one, so he partially isolated himself from his classmates, only spending time with them when necessary. Despite this attitude, he made some good friends with similar mindsets and they get along pretty nicely. Little did he knew how much will the Government change his life two years later.

After going to the Gvn office, they told him of his new assignment and how it will change things for him. The Government arranged his transfer to the Tokyo National University for Mathematics and Information Technologies due to his " outstanding capabilities " in the fields of study of the University. This made his parents very proud about him, and changed the boy´s life even more. He managed to handle the lack of sleep that came with the increasing frequency of jobs by working as hard as ever - he successfully does both of his roles without raising any suspicions for him being anything else that a really hard working student. The new surroundings gave him the freedom he needed, and he really find himself in his job as a Corrector - something that manifested in his real life as well. He heads into the new year with great excitement, eager to find out what awaits him.

Some Info I need your input on

It would be nice for Michiko to know his fellow Correctors, or at least some of them. They are in one job, and might have worked together in the past. Even met personally.

Not that much, but I keep watching and responding in it as the talk there develops.

I can be as active as my schedule allows me. I am an university student so it is really shifting, but I think I can find a few spare minutes for a post.

I hope you are doing great, are you ?

Okay so my brother has gone (sad sigh) so now I have my time back! Which means I have no more family crap to deal with so we can actually get down to business! (to defeat the huns) So so so so sorry for all the fucking delays. Blame my brother but I haven't seen him in so long so...yeah. *clears throat*

I'll check out the two finished character sheets tonight, I've decided since I've done all my errands and nothing is on tv tonight, that the rest of the day is meant to be dedicated to the Guild. :3

So I'll be editing THIS post with the feedback.

FEEDBACK & SHIT:

@SVK: Everything seem okay save for the last paragraph of your character, I'll need some clarification. So you're having him been recruited to Tokyo as a Corrector at the usual age, yes? So if that is the case and if he's been in Tokyo ever since he started, then the characters who are there, should know your character. *nods* I could assume the reason for bringing him from Osaka (and not leaving him there) would be that Osaka is kind of a small pond with little activity and he'd be more useful in Tokyo? Am I safe to assume so?

And for his weapon, since he is a higher rank, he can have a bit more freedom with it, considering if he's used it from year one, I could say his handling of the weapon is pretty good. Even so, you'll need to give me some more specifics as to how much the weapon weighs, how durable is it? What can it cut through? Does it have anything else to it? Like the element of fire or something like that? Considering he's more of a "nerd" than a "jock" how does he stay fit enough to wield a hand held weapon? Why wouldn't he pick a skill like healing or defense if he's sort of humble/ intelligent? Just some things I'm wondering, other than a few questions I'd like answered, he looks good. :3

@Krauxis: Okay, i think it looks good to me. (finally amirite?) So you're approved. Let me put that in the first page so I don't forget!

@Suspect: What you linked me to hasn't been edited in two months? Did you put it elsewhere...?

I think I covered what I needed to cover right?

I'll be editing the first post now, with links to who HAS been approved, if you're not there, let me know and we can figure out if I missed something of if you have anything else to tweak. ;3

I am glad you had a good time. Eight more hours till I finish my sheet.

UPDATE.
It is finished and ready to be reviewed.

Welp, that week was an absolute bitch for work. I could hardly get on RPG at all @_@

Shouldn't happen again, at least for a while, so until further notice, I'm back. My sheet's been edited as per instructions. Now Sarah models IRL instead of digitally, and her age has been bumped to 23 (I also made her service term 5 years to match.) I think that was everything (at least for now?)

Good good, SVK. And yes, you're still getting called that.

Okay, I'll take a look at em all now, as I mentioned, check back to my post above for the necessary edits and feedback. :3