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Ok, well the wording is misleading and I can know how to use my sense of smell so no need to tell me how but thank you@Bright_Ops
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@Holy Soldier How is it now ?

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Character Name: Alexander Salzar
Alias: -None-
Age: 21
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 80kg
Hair Color: Dark brown but there is a hint of white at the roots. It's as if the hair itself darkens the longer it gets.
Eye Color: Normal brown, human eyes. But when he uses magic they turn slightly purple. Most only see it when it either gets pointed out for them or when they focus on his eyes when it happens.
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Written Description: Alexander often appears pretty clean and well shaven and such. Though his clothes aren't particularly flashy, they certainly are practical. Unlike robes. They are also always absolutely spotless. He makes sure of that. Alex himself is by far not strong, nor as lean as thieves or barbarians would be. Though he isn't frail as the common wizard, nor as old. He has a scar on the back of his right hand from a blade. He keeps his body devoided of any gold and keeps his copper orb in a satchel on his hip.
Level: 1
Class: Sorcerer (Sorcerers, unlike wizards, have a natural aptitude for magic. Them harnessing magic is akin to a poet writing a poem.)
Abilities:
1. Mana blast - The sorcerer concentrates mana in front of him and releases the violent energy in an instant. It's a short ranged spell with devastating effect. The size, as well as the power of the blast, depends on how long the Sorcerer has been channeling mana & how capable a sorcerer is at channeling Mana. As a starter Sorcerer, he barely grasps the idea or concept of Mana. The closest comparison he can make is wood to fuel a fire (not really accurate at all) thus his channeling ability is not that good yet.
2. Mana orb - The sorcerer gathers Mana around his enchanted Orb. Allowing the Mana to remain stable as it clings to the object. It can throw said orb for explosive effect. Again, power depends on how capable the sorcerer is at gathering Mana, as well as how long he/she was channeling.

Skills:
1. Beast knowledge - Alexander knows about the many beasts of Bridgewater, as well as whatever roams the fields & forests around it. This knowledge translates into knowing what beast may drop what resources, as well as where it may be the weakest. This applies to wild creatures (like wolves) and any related creatures (like giant rats). However, it does NOT apply to humans, demons, mystical creatures, etc etc.
2. Alchemy - Give him a cauldron and the required materials and he'll whip you up whatever potion you want. One that enhances the mind, one that makes you stronger or one that knits the flesh together faster. The opposite is possible too. The fastest way to kill a man is by making sure his heart stops without even making a wound. Aside from those serious businesses, it's also pretty profitable when you learn how to make potions that just get someone high as a kite.

Right now he can make lesser health & mana potion, as well as a potion that gives you a bit of a buzz (could technically be used to gain an advantage in battle but it has to be ingested and takes a while to kick in). He uses the last one mostly to gain a few coins. To practice alchemy one needs a complete alchemy station (cauldron, water, fire,...), vials and the appropriate ingredients.

Weapon: Orb - The preferred weapon of the Sorcerer is an orb. From when they were little, most Sorcerers learned how to levitate tiny rocks or objects. Most learned that an orb quickly becomes a sling without a rope attached. Which is how they commonly fight when someone gets too close and they can't gather Mana. Sorcerer's their spells often depend on the Orb so there is often a built in safety making it return after used.

Personality: Alex is by all accounts a bit of a hard-ass. He stands on politeness and seriousness. Though he will laugh at a joke, don't expect him to make any himself. During job, he tries to be the epitome of professionalism. That all lasts until you get him drunk. Becuase then he's as loud as a dwarf and as foul-mouth like a sailor. However, while his is polite and such, he is also pretty greedy and his only loyalty is to money. He ain't an idiot thought. You'll have to pay him a lot if you want him to break any laws. And even then he needs to be sure he won't get caught. All in all, he ain't stupid.
Quirks: Greedy, believes that black cats actually bring luck.
Likes: Wealth, magical power, having a great pub party, influence
Dislikes: Poverty, powerlessness, barfights
Inventory: Empty
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@AshevelendarI hope she's not an alien because she sounds like one and those are not allowed. I also said no Original Races. Please read over the CS and its rules very closely.
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@Legion02If you make a Mage, then that makes a Third Party because Second Party already has a mage. Second Party needs an Archer and a Tank.
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Why is it so surprising Gwen is upset about No's behavior? The guy's basically straddling her chair, getting right up next to her, staring, then suggesting he's the best thing that ever could happen to her. There's flirting, but No is bordering on sexual assault.

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Sorry, I thought there would be a way to tell from his human form that he's a werewolf. I'll fix that then.
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@CyraniaHe's quite the barbarian isn't he?
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@Holy Soldier But I really want to make my mage guy :C Do I have to be in a party to start? I mean, there is one job that can be done alone apparently?
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@Legion02The Guild/Party Leader chooses the quests for people to complete. The guild leader still needs to be elected though. I might have to make it an OOC election because the shenanigans in game are distracting everyone from what needs to be discussed. But, yes, you can keep your guy. He'll just be in Third Party, which means he is number 3 in priority for quest dibs. Whatever is left over, and you better hope it's the 1 person quest that is, he'll be able to have whatever is left over. But...stay tuned for my review of your CS. That's coming next.
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Character Name: Alexander Salzar
Alias: -None-
Age: 21
Race: Human
Gender: Male
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 80kg
Hair Color: Dark brown but there is a hint of white at the roots. It's as if the hair itself darkens the longer it gets.
Eye Color: Normal brown, human eyes. But when he uses magic they turn slightly purple. Most only see it when it either gets pointed out for them or when they focus on his eyes when it happens.
Visual Description:

Written Description: Alexander often appears pretty clean and well shaven and such. Though his clothes aren't particularly flashy, they certainly are practical. Unlike robes. They are also always absolutely spotless. He makes sure of that. Alex himself is by far not strong, nor as lean as thieves or barbarians would be. Though he isn't frail as the common wizard, nor as old. He has a scar on the back of his right hand from a blade. He keeps his body devoided of any gold and keeps his copper orb in a satchel on his hip.
Level: 1
Class: Sorcerer (Sorcerers, unlike wizards, have a natural aptitude for magic. Them harnessing magic is akin to a poet writing a poem.)
Abilities:
1. Mana blast - The sorcerer concentrates mana in front of him and releases the violent energy in an instant. It's a short ranged spell (How far in meters can it reach?) with devastating effect. The size, as well as the power of the blast, depends on how long the Sorcerer has been channeling mana & how capable a sorcerer is at channeling Mana. (You should know how capable your character is at channeling mana. He's level 1. So what do you think?)
2. Mana orb - The sorcerer gathers Mana around his enchanted Orb. Allowing the Mana to remain stable as it clings to the object. It can throw said orb for explosive effect. Again, power depends on how capable the sorcerer is at gathering Mana, as well as how long he/she was channeling. (Same comments as above.)

Skills:
1. Beast knowledge - Alexander knows about the many beasts of Bridgewater, as well as whatever roams the fields & forests around it. This knowledge translates into knowing what beast may drop what resources, as well as where it may be the weakest. This applies to wild creatures (like wolves) and any related creatures (like giant rats). However, it does NOT apply to humans, demons, mystical creatures, etc etc.
2. Alchemy - Give him a cauldron and the required materials and he'll whip you up whatever potion you want. One that enhances the mind, one that makes you stronger or one that knits the flesh together faster. The opposite is possible too. The fastest way to kill a man is by making sure his heart stops without even making a wound. Aside from those serious businesses, it's also pretty profitable when you learn how to make potions that just get someone high as a kite. (He's a level 1 character in a RPG. Therefore, his Alchemy is going to be very basic to just making basic health potions, basic mana potions, and antidote. He will have to RP in-game making these tonics each time and collecting the ingredients for them. Whatever you deem the ingredients to be. This has to be believable. I don't want people pulling any potions, tonic, etc. out of their bum.)

Weapon: Orb - The preferred weapon of the Sorcerer is an orb. From when they were little, most Sorcerers learned how to levitate tiny rocks or objects. Most learned that an orb quickly becomes a sling without a rope attached. Which is how they commonly fight when someone gets too close and they can't gather Mana. Sorcerer's their spells often depend on the Orb so there is often a built in safety making it return after used.

Personality: Alex is by all accounts a bit of a hard-ass. He stands on politeness and seriousness. Though he will laugh at a joke, don't expect him to make any himself. During job, he tries to be the epitome of professionalism. That all lasts until you get him drunk. Becuase then he's as loud as a dwarf and as foul-mouth like a sailor. However, while his is polite and such, he is also pretty greedy and his only loyalty is to money. He ain't an idiot thought. You'll have to pay him a lot if you want him to break any laws. And even then he needs to be sure he won't get caught. All in all, he ain't stupid.
Quirks: Greedy, believes that black cats actually bring luck.
Likes: Wealth, magical power, having a great pub party, influence
Dislikes: Poverty, powerlessness, barfights
Inventory: Empty


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@Cyrania he got there towards the end and was eating pie so he wasn't really paying attention. He otherwise would've had a better understanding of the situation.
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Okay. Firstly, I added this to the OOC OP as new information:

So, because we have an increase in interest. The parties are arranged under a guild. The guild's name is being voted on. The guild leader is being voted on. The parties are arranged by priority for quests. Players who go AWOL and disappear will have their place in the party forfeit, which will allow players from Second, Third, and any other party to advance into the next party to cover the gap. First Party has first dibs on quests, then second, then third, etc.


Secondly, we have to vote on some things. Since I think people are having a lot of fun in the IC interacting with each other, I felt we'll do the Guild Proceedings OOC. There are two things that need to be voted on.

First! The Guild Name. So I need everyone to vote on this.

I made this link. So you can all vote anonymously on the guild name. If there is a name that you want to add to this list, mention me and let me know.

Second! The Guild Leader. Here's another Poll.

I'm going to leave these polls up and I'll check the results regularly. If I get nearly 100% participation, then I'll announce who and what. Thank you all for your patience, participation, and for enjoying this game so much. :)
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If any new people are looking for character ideas I have some in either page two are three
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@Holy Soldier Should have explained the Mana Channeling more, my bad. Basically, he's only level 1 so it won't be powerful. But I put it in there so it could level as he levels. So my question is: do I have to somehow put it in numbers of how it increases in power? (I'll make it clear by default that he's not that good at it yet)

For Alchemy, again, you make a valid point and I will change accordingly. Would it be fair if I detailed what he can make (Lesser healing potion, lesser mana potion, lesser drug potion (gives you a slight buzz, mostly taken for entertainment and sold for money)? And he learns new potions as he goes along and levels. I'll detail the recipes when I get a basic idea of what I can use as ingredients.
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@Legion02That'll be fine and no you won't have to detail in numbers.
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@Holy Soldier It is not original race. I pointed out ( put a link to the Wikipedia page from where I took the race ) that her race was used in D&D ( Dungeons And Dragon. I believe that it was used in Spelljammer expansion ) . She's not an alien. Just an intelligent bug.
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@AshevelendarI don't know...it did say they were elves originally, but as soon as the History said this: "Bionoids were originally tailored as troops in the Unhuman Wars. Volunteer elves gave themselves to be altered into organic fighting machines. After the Wars, they were cast out into the cosmos, to make their own way far from the sight of the elves. Years of ostracism, of living apart from the rest of elvish society like plague victims, has instilled in them a deep distrust of all other elven races" I'm going to have to say know because I know for a fact D&D tried to rip off the Guyvers. Which are aliens.
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@Holy Soldier That I didn't know. We could certainly say this Bionoid is not an alien and that's it. But if you don't like it...I'll try to search for a new race.
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GM Mass PM,

This is the second time this has happened. If i do not approve you, you do not put your CS in the character thread and you do not post in the IC. If somebody does this again, I'm going to deny their application and just bar them from the game.
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@AshevelendarJust keep it simple. If you're making a tank, then make a tank. If you're making a archer/ranger, etc. Make one.
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