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@Asura I think historically in the canon, the female kages were among the most powerful ones too. But all the female side characters were rather mediocre, which pains me because Hinata is easily my favorite character in the entire anime.
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To be fair, Hinata and Sakura were leagues above other side characters. Maybe they sucked some power from Naruto and Sasuke's doodles. :v
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@Buddha
I want permission to exclude birth name and all family information.
My character doesn't know it, the anbu of Kirigakure destroyed all written evidence of them and most certainly no one in Konoha knows anything about it.
I believe the names aren't that necessary except for more back story.

And about the metal wires/kunai and ninja stars. Should I add them in the weapons category?

Also about the E and D ranked techniques. It says we can perform them an unlimited number of times but how much of these techniques do we actually know?
If I don't have a definite number I'll just take it that it includes all D and E rank techniques withing my 2 chakra nature categories.

So if you agree with my previous points, all that's left is a picture and JUTSUs. I would request that you review my character so I don't waste time with techniques only to make a new one.

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@Asura Sakura's only point of shining was versus Sasori, and she was being controlled by an old hag. Though she was definitely above all other side characters (Kiba, etcetera) mostly because, well, she was in a team with Naruto and Sasuke, so naturally she'd be somewhat similar in calibre. Though if she was to truly represent the female side character Naruto/Sasuke deserved, she'd be more strong I imagine. Now she just seemed like an emotional damsel in distress. Just my opinion, of course.

@Bishop If you wish to exclude these.. rather basic information pieces.. then you had better come up with a reason why Konoha would even consider letting in someone that is A) foreign B) undocumented and C) possibly a spy, and/or dangerous.

The metal wires kunai blabla falls under standard shinobi tools.

It says you can have as many of them as you want within reason, not that you can perform them unlimited times. It also states that you should add them within reason, as in 'not every technique'.

Character is decent, but the fear doesn't make sense. What family can he lose. You make a large point out of the fact that everyone in his clan is dead (Sasuke much) but then you say his family dying would be a fear. There's no family.

There is no kekkei genkai name. It needs more explanation because I can't understand what it does. You mark someone for lightning and then any lightning attacks on them are more powerful? Doesn't sound like a kekkei genkai, sounds more like a hiden, or even a regular jutsu.

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HAHAHAHA, I can add it as a regular JUTSU, thank Go..Buddha-sama.
And his family is the group of mercenaries he joined. Fearing to lose them IS what made him leave them.

As for information on family members, he checked the "Orphan" box on the document. As for legal guardian, he raised himself...damn he's looking like a spy more and more.

How about this. The Anbu captured him and performed interrogation on him by genjutsu and whatnot, then allowed him to enter the academy after wiping memories of interrogation. Nah, then they would find about his real past...


He forged the documents and arranged for an elderly couple to adopt him.
I'll just put their names AS LONG AS YOU KNOW that their NOT the real names.
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Is this taking place prior to Kirigakure's hunter-nin being founded? I'm assuming a young teen with the Shikotsumyaku casually packing up and leaving isn't something they would approve of.
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@Asura It'd probably be more along the lines of them just hunting him using regular, but strong shinobi. Perhaps some sort of ANBU team. Or perhaps there are already hunter nin. Alternate universe. Feel free to come up with your own answer.

@Bishop So he already lost his family? I'd honestly add a better fear besides that one.

Besides that, do add their real names. A) it doesn't matter, and B) it's OOC information, so nobody is allowed to use it ICly without somehow acquiring the knowledge ICly or otherwise running it by you.
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@Asura It'd probably be more along the lines of them just hunting him using regular, but strong shinobi. Perhaps some sort of ANBU team. Or perhaps there are already hunter nin. Alternate universe. Feel free to come up with your own answer.


Hnn. I'm assuming her defection should also occur before she is officially crowned a Genin? So y'know, she isn't strung up for being a spy. Although I suppose suspicions would always remain, even if using a spy with a super rare and noticeable bloodline is silly as sin.
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@Asura If it happened during the winter/wars then I'd say that Konoha would be more than willing to accept a person with a rare genetic bloodline limit. Especially if it inconveniences Kirigakure, who were enemies of Konohagakure during this time. So, if they can somehow obtain her and extract any information from her, that'd be good.

Of course they'd test her first to see where her loyalties are. If she acts suspiciously, she'd probably not get allowed into Konohagakure unless it was with escorts and stuff. (As in, she lives there, but is always imprisoned in her own house, or so).
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@Asura If it happened during the winter/wars then I'd say that Konoha would be more than willing to accept a person with a rare genetic bloodline limit. Especially if it inconveniences Kirigakure, who were enemies of Konohagakure during this time. So, if they can somehow obtain her and extract any information from her, that'd be good.

Of course they'd test her first to see where her loyalties are. If she acts suspiciously, she'd probably not get allowed into Konohagakure unless it was with escorts and stuff. (As in, she lives there, but is always imprisoned in her own house, or so).


If Kimmimaro is anything to go off, being locked up like a dog until it's time to attack something might not be uncommon for somebody like her. :p
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@Asura I mean, that makes sense to me.

Also, my hokage will probably take on the likeliness of you personally. :/
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@Asura I mean, that makes sense to me.

Also, my hokage will probably take on the likeliness of you personally. :/


The likeliness?
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@Asura Just so happens that 'Asura' is both involved in the mythology of the Asian area as well as Naruto itself. And now, you.
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@Asura Just so happens that 'Asura' is both involved in the mythology of the Asian area as well as Naruto itself. And now, you.


Oh! You mean me and not my character.

Kick some deva ass.
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@Asura It's related more to the origin of ninjutsu (the two guys at the header of the RP, that's Indra and Asura, the sons of the Sage, remember) so it'll be less about deva and more about religion.
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@Asura It's related more to the origin of ninjutsu (the two guys at the header of the RP, that's Indra and Asura, the sons of the Sage, remember) so it'll be less about deva and more about religion.


So she's a gross Senju? :p
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Egh, more like a thief that mimicks the likeliness of Indra and Asura.
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Sweet my character got accepted. I will try to improve my writing skills. I know my writing can be rather bad at times but I will try my best.
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Fuck yah, finished the family bullshit, fake info AND only JUTSU and bloodline powers left. Also changed the fear.
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How are Jinchuriki/Tail beasts going to work in this? Canon wise they are meant for 'military' strength. I just wonder how they will be used in this AU.
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