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Sounds like that was a rather interesting conversation

Edit: I have edited My cs slightly tweaked the Relic and gave it a name, sorta
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Ugh, everything I'm trying to post here won't get posted, just does that loading thing and then, instead of just being posted as it has before, nothing changed.
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EDIT: Ok what the crap. Why did this go through and nothing else?
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Ok, we finally found a decent connection to (ab)use, so here goes the criticism:






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I guess either loner is popular, or it's in my case where none of the nations are likeable enough to earn my allegiance. Kalnach? No explanation necessary, Othea ain't exactly competent, the other one is a different brand of incompetence with infighting, and Kalesia... The most evil to me of them all, brainwash the people into mindless subservience, pretend to be better than everyone else, rape is A-OK in god's eyes, as long as babby is produced. Either that, or they really are awesome but that would be bullshit. La di da do no wrong perfect at everything douchebags. Looking over them aside from the rape thing nothing suggests badness by any means in their lore section. Meritocracy nobility, equal gender rights, Evokers not being put on pikes for being evokers, perfect happiness rate. I know you aren't incompetent, so there are darker parts, but they should be hinted at as foreshadowing. Ugh, derp, forgive me I looked again, evokers carted off to breeding pits. I still hate them.

As for my character being without allegiance, he doesn't really have a choice. If it makes you feel any better he wants one, badly.
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Actually freeshooter... one mistake there.
Freeshooter92 said rape is A-OK in god's eyes, as long as babby is produced.

Rape is a sin of the worst sort. Its only the vocators who get away with using captives for breeding against their wills.
EDIT: A "not" had snuck itself in there, turning its meaning around completely. Fixed now.
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*/me wipes brow*

Whew
Thank goodness I was already accepted beforehand.
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I kept the knowledgeable skill in there but I made her gain it through secrecy and by means based on the means that Frederick Douglass, an African-American slave, used so it should be fairly plausible. If I need to change it, alert me and I will, though I would rather keep her politically smart.

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I edited Sven and chose mind control over illusions due to not being able to figure out the technical details of illusion such as area, whether it was smoke and mirrors or realistic illusions that were implanted in the targets mind to seem real.

As for the characters with no allegiance how about they form together to create their own faction where they try to influence things together? That way they will be connected and will have loyalties to the faction they create.
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Their own faction?
Personally, I don't think that'd work. Why were the characters on their own in the first place? They didn't like where they came from, obviously, and they didn't want to be controlled by someone else, more or less. And in the times that the roleplay takes place, starting one's own 'faction' would be difficult, since you first must make a name for yourself in some form or another, and then gain peoples' trust, and gain something to keep them in- land? money? items? Expensive and lengthy, to make one's own faction. One would worry if it were some guy starting a rebellion, or simply trying to single you out so he can slit your throat and take your coinpurse.
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You can always do what I've edited Kheris to do.

Which is start with a loyalty and drift away from it for something else.
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I regretfully have to pull my application for this RP. Life suddenly got a lot more hectic and I'm not going to have the time needed to keep up to date with this. Thank you for you time and hope to see you if you opened this up again in the future.
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Shifter_Master said
I regretfully have to pull my application for this RP. Life suddenly got a lot more hectic and I'm not going to have the time needed to keep up to date with this. Thank you for you time and hope to see you if you opened this up again in the future.


It's a shame to see you leave! Good luck with the hecticness and hopefully we'll see you around!
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Indeed. No matter how much we criticize a CS, it is sad to see a player go. It takes a lot of frustration before we consider it anything but sad for a player to leave. Echo probably knows roughly how much that is.

By the way Echo... You need a kick to get started on Alessia?
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Ellri said
Indeed. No matter how much we criticize a CS, it is sad to see a player go. It takes a lot of frustration before we consider it anything but sad for a player to leave. Echo probably knows roughly how much that is.By the way Echo... You need a kick to get started on Alessia?


I've done that twice after Roan was made, maybe a third time's a charm. However I think he needs help with her abilities, or that was what I was told last time, and needed you around. :p
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@ Apokalipse
It's great to see that you've revised your cs, you neatly took care of Ellri's critisism. So far that I'd say, good job.

However, (you felt it coming, didn't you? ^_^' ) me and Ellri have a shared concern and I thought of a suggestion.





I hope you can forgive me for being so strict with you, but it's rather important to make sure our foreign character's histories and mindsets correspond to their societies'. However, on a positive note: I would like to point out that I find it impressive that you took on the challenge of creating a character who originated from a country created by another person. You did a good job as far as I (and my fellow gm's are/) am concerned.

Now enough with the flattery and feelings of guilt for being strict *puts on my strict GM-face* FIX IT!
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@ ApokalipseIt's great to see that you've revised your cs, you neatly took care of Ellri's critisism. So far that I'd say, good job.However, (you felt it coming, didn't you? ^_^' ) me and Ellri have a shared concern and I thought of a suggestion. I hope you can forgive me for being so strict with you, but it's rather important to make sure our foreign character's histories and mindsets correspond to their societies'. However, on a positive note: I would like to point out that I find it impressive that you took on the challenge of creating a character who originated from a country created by another person. You did a good job as far as I (and my fellow gm's are/) am concerned. Now enough with the flattery and feelings of guilt for being strict *puts on my strict GM-face*


Lol, it's totally fine. I love criticism, it shapes the mind better, and I understand when creating countries, or anything in general, you like to make sure that everything is consistent. I will fix it and repost it and hopefully, the guild will not stop working. For two days I kept trying to post it.
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Apokalipse said
Lol, it's totally fine. I love criticism, it shapes the mind better, and I understand when creating countries, or anything in general, you like to make sure that everything is consistent. I will fix it and repost it and hopefully, the guild will not stop working. For two days I kept trying to post it.


Thank goodness for that then xD I really hate being strict with people, so it's a good thing that I have my two lovely fellow gm's to be strict as well lol. It looks good to me now!
I know right! I've been trying to say sorry for being absent for a few days, but that extended to another few days since I was unable to post it :'D Hopefully the guild won't come crashing down a second time *knocks on the table*

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@Lixvari I still have some comments concerning Sven (I'm in a critical mood so that's partially to blame), but I'll first run them by the other two before I post it here! It's coming though... *omnious sounds*
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