[OOC] Coruscant Sacked: Aftermath

[Fallenreaper]

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But me and Rtron were discussing them.

We have determined they are Cahute.

I was throwing cahute things at you.

You like cahute things.

@Sep

Then do me a favor, toss them at Sish. ^-^

[Sep]

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Then do me a favor, toss them at Sish. ^-^

@Fallenreaper

Oh we will. Me and @Rtron agreed Sish is going to die by way of being swarmed by Baby Acklays.

[Fallenreaper]

Good! ^-^ Jayda will be pissed but she'll live. XD

[Sep]

Good! ^-^ Jayda will be pissed but she'll live. XD

@Fallenreaper

She can release the Baby Acklay swarm.

[Fallenreaper]

I usually see her ending him more...violently. XD

[MonkeyBusiness]

Jade Yu

Name: Jade Yu

Species: Human

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Faction: Jedi Order

Rank: Padawan

Captive? Yes, taken on the day the Jedi Temple fell.

Appearance:

Jade Yu

Height: 5'2"
Weight: 105 lbs
Dress: As seen in picture as well as long Jedi brown cloak that covers from knees to head.
Lightsaber: Green
One long padawan braid on the right side hanging to the small of her back.
Ignore clone troopers in background of picture.

Notable Race Traits: N/A

Flaws:

• Inexperience with Civilians: Though Jade tried to be kind, she has not dealt with civilians often being raised by the Jedi and having a Master who is always traveling to the battlefield.
• Jade can lose focus on the task at hand rather quickly
• She is unskilled in offensive lightsaber skills
• Has a hard time relaxing as a result of her time spend on the battlefield as she expects something is always needs to be done.
• Alternative training: Because of the war with the Sith, Jade did not have the typical padawan training.
• Fields affected:
  • Lightsaber practice
  • Growth in what it means to be a Jedi

Skills:

• Lightsaber form: Soresu [Form III]- Defensive style focusing on the deflection of blaster fire and lightsabers with no offensive stances.
• She has kowledge of medical herbs and treatment taught to her by Master Lyric
• Natural connection to the force

Force capabilities:

• Force Healing
• Force Revitalization
• Basic force abilities

Biography: Jade was born on the planet of Alderaan, thought that is all that she knows about her childhood as she was taken at the young age of three to be raised in the Jedi Order. She was raised within the Clawmouse Clan in the Jedi Order at the Jedi Temple where she learned what it meant to be a Jedi and the basics of force use.

As Jade reached the age of eleven, she was placed in the Initiate Trials(Apprentice tournament) on H'Ratth as there was a need for more Jedi and younglings were being pushed on a fast path to becoming padawans. H'Ratth was chosen as the location for Jade's trials as she had shown promise with the force powers of healing and that was the location of the Jedi Academy specializing in healing.

She spent a year training along side other young Jedi in training under the healing Masters at the Academy. When the time for the Initiate Trials finally came, Jade chose to display her powers in the force over her lightsaber skills. During the tournament she must have caught the eye of Master Lyric as it seemed that she was chosen to be trained under him.

After being chosen by Lyric, she traveled with him throughout the galaxy to many different battlefields against the Sith where her knowledge of force healing and medical techniques continued to grow. She learned how to fight effectively using a lightsaber though her skills with healing proved more effective than fighting on the frontline as she assisted her master with the wounded soldiers.

Finally with the hope of peace on the horizon, Jade was sent back to the Jedi Temple on Coruscant to report on their latest mission and to catch some much needed rest and relaxation. After so much time on distant battlefields, the young Jedi did not enjoy the peaceful life of the Temple easily and found herself helping out in the Halls of Healing where she started to learn from the Jedi Healers and help those that were injured.

Personality: Jade was always the gentile youngling that would step in to stop fights between others and did not like to start arguments with others. She is the person who would go up to anyone even people she does not know and find out what is wrong with them so that she could do what she could to cheer them up. Jade as a more free spirited person has always had a problem with not being able to have her own freedom. She feels that everyone should be able to have the freedom to choose things for themselves and not have their rights stripped from them.

Motivation: Jade's long term goal would be to either escape or be rescued from the Sith prison so that she would be able to join the fight to free Coruscant. After driving the Sith back, she wants to work her way to become a Jedi Knight and spend her time mastering the art of Force healing so that she could help those who can't help themselves.

Player’s long term goals: If rescued from the Sith, Jade would like to join the fighting resistance to help free all Jedi and drive the Sith back across the galaxy. She would like to know that her master is alright and hasn't already fallen at the hands of the Sith.

If converted to the dark side, Jade will give up her studies in force healing and instead delve into the arts of Sith Alchemy. She would be driven by her darkness and drive for knowledge to the point where she would either need to be taken out by the other Sith or she will rise through the ranks to become a well known member of the Sith.

Relations: Jade is the padawan of Jedi Master Lyric Novan and has been his student ever since graduating from the rank of youngling to Jedi padawan.

Lea Rahn- Jade met Lea during her time at the H'Ratth academy since they were the same age studying Force Healing. They were friendly to each other but never truly got to know each other during her short time at the Academy.

[Sundered Echo]

I dunno, @Fallen... Torn to pieces by a swarm of baby Acklay sounds pretty darn violent.

[Lucius Cypher]

To the pain!

[Fallenreaper]

I dunno, @Fallen... Torn to pieces by a swarm of baby Acklay sounds pretty darn violent.

@Sundered Echo

Depends, will they nibble or gum him to death? >)

[Genni]

I dunno, @Fallen... Torn to pieces by a swarm of baby Acklay sounds pretty darn violent.

@Sundered Echo

Why use Acklay when you could release a swarm of baby Ewoks instead!?!

Not only will they get you with their sharp teeth and claws, but you'll also have to face humiliation in the afterlife knowing you were mauled to death by cute little teddy bears!

[Rtron]

I'm so glad that the both of you have a Jedi prisoner. :P

Vengeance will be Sish's!

[Fallenreaper]

I'm so glad that the both of you have a Jedi prisoner. :P

Vengeance will be Sish's!

@Rtron

I recall Xid use to be his favorite torture toy. He had...what, three rounds with Sish?

[Genni]

I'm so glad that the both of you have a Jedi prisoner. :P

@Rtron

Don't worry, I'm keeping her nice and fresh for you to play with.

*yanks hard on the chain connected to Dede's... sensitive place*

See? She can still moan like a good girl. >D

[Fallenreaper]

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Don't worry, I'm keeping her nice and fresh for you to play with.

*yanks hard on the chain connected to Dede's... sensitive place*

See? She can still moan like a good girl. >D

@Genni

A bit from the chatroom my dear, so enjoy.

[00:44:41] <Rtron> FALLEN.
[00:44:48] <Fallen> WHAT?!?!?
[00:44:51] <Rtron> How long did it take you to corrupt Genni!
[00:44:51] <Rtron> XD
[00:44:55] <Rtron> Three seconds?
[00:44:59] <Fallen> Not long...
[00:45:01] <Fallen> <3
[00:45:19] * Rtron huggles.
[00:45:24] <Rtron> This RP is going to be interesting...

Hehehee. You're going to fit in well, very well in here.

[Rtron]

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I recall Xid use to be his favorite torture toy. He had...what, three rounds with Sish?

@Fallenreaper

He was the only torture toy! So yes. Three rounds. Technically.

<Snipped quote by Rtron>

Don't worry, I'm keeping her nice and fresh for you to play with.

*yanks hard on the chain connected to Dede's... sensitive place*

See? She can still moan like a good girl. >D

@Genni

Indeed. >D Such a shame Sish isn't refined enough for that stuff.

You and fallen are going to be like, besties. I can feel it.

[Genni]

You and fallen are going to be like, besties. I can feel it.

@Rtron

Does he have a pet wife as well then?

[Rtron]

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Does he have a pet wife as well then?

@Genni

She, and it's leashed uh...whatever She views Echo and I and all the rest as.

[Ellri]

@Flagg
Almost perfect.
Just two points that struck out at us:
“To powerful force users, Callidus would register as a peculiar blankness in the ambient telepathic chatter such a Sith or Jedi would be used to.”

The telepathic network of sorts the Jedi and Sith “connect” to isn’t really that blatant or open. Its not chattery. Its more of an extra sense. The presence of the Dark Side might be a bit foreboding to such a sense. Not really sure what terms the Sith would choose to use to label the presence of light side users. In terms of direct communication (with words and images) Telepathy really only allows a Force user to send words to someone. You can't pick up ambient thoughts. Thats more the area of drain Knowledge.
Force Stealth allows you to essentially mimic what you want to look like to such a sense, or just to hide it completely. While it is an ability that can be “active” all the time, you can also deactivate it if you want. If you fully hide your presence in the Force, you’ll simply look like another human, one without any Force Sensitivity. Does this make sense?

The other point of note, is very minor:
“Republican and Neutral Space” in the paragraph with [CLEARANCE REQUIREMENTS MET: PROCEED].
It is a proper noun of a location rather than an adjective describing political views. Thus, the correct form would be “Republic and Neutral Space”

[Ellri]

@SimplyJohn
There are a good number of powers, but it does seem you’ve managed to balance it out nonetheless. Good.
You should add some relations with other player characters. That’s the primary purpose of the relations field.

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@MonkeyBusiness
At 16, with 13 years of training, she will be fairly experienced with using the force, even if she’s far from mastering anything. This is in reference to the flaws section, not the Force Power section (which is good).

This may have come across unclear: The RP will start during the sacking, before the jedi prisoners have become prisoners. The ideas behind the sections you write about post-capture are good, but they need to be adapted to take the pre-capture start into mind.

Interesting goal about freeing Coruscant. Would be interesting to see her eventual reaction when she learns Coruscant will have been returned to the republic only three days after the sacking.

Otherwise a decent sheet. Nice to see a padawan that is not even close to overpowered.

[Fallenreaper]

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She, and it's leashed uh...whatever She views Echo and I and all the rest as.

@Rtron

Heheheee. I thought you would never recall that. :p