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FINAL DRAFT (hopefully)

Uchiha, Shouta - Red Lightning




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@yoshua171: Since everyone uses colored text for dialogue... this might help keep people from using the same identical one with their PCs. Though at some point, that will be impossible. XD Namely with you creating numerous PCs out of the yin-yang. :p
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@Fallenreaper please put that in a hider. Also, you could've just supplied a link to computerhope.com.
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@Fallenreaper please put that in a hider. Also, you could've just supplied a link to computerhope.com.


And that's that first I've heard of that site so... How can I provide a link to a site I have no idea existed? >_>
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WIP (fuck you Paul the picture is mine)


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@Tuujaimaa I lol'd at his rank, but seriously give him an actual rank please.

Hmm. So while I can see some issues, most of them are solved by the fact that there are a few, though less straight forwards, ways around most of his particularly powerful techniques. Still, I may request some changes in the future, but for now Accepted, put him in the bin.

EDIT: Acceptance rescinded till I see his equipment and approve of it.
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@Desire

Shouta was born 14 years before the Shinobi war to an Uchiha father and a woman native to the Village Hidden in the Mist.

So the shinobi war, as it says in the OP, was 10 years ago and it lasted 15 years.

You state that he is 24, but if he was born 14 years before the war, then that would be 14+15+10=39. So either he was born one year into the war and didn't participate because he was too young (which is totally fine), or you increase his age to answer what you stated.

Everything else you mentioned seems fine, but you do need to alter that timeline a bit so he's either older or the same age.

Once that is corrected then I'll take a second look and then accept it.
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@yoshua171 I done goofed with the first part, I just changed the wording to during. Sorry about that!
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Kk. Accepted. Move him to the bin and I'll add him to the roster.
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Arashi, Akane 茜 疾風* - The Lost Moonflower

*Kanji goes first name then last order


I did not draw or lay claim to the image above, that goes to the artist, merely using it for reference for the (N)PC.





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Are the Uchiha or Hyuuga clans available if not I have other Ideas
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Are the Uchiha or Hyuuga clans available if not I have other Ideas


Yes, they are available.
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@Keyblade87 Hey I have an Uchiha character!
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@Desire haha Cousins i guess XD
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Welcome Keyblade! I shall now call you Key for short.
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@Innue Chiyoko, Hitsujiki and Tokiko are accepted. Add the sheet to the bin.

@Tuujaimaa I have one requirement for Tensai. The effects of his staff and Chigoku Inkan: Yokusei no Gogyō [Verbatim Sealing: Five Elements Suppression] do not "get along," and thus activating the technique will nullify the effects of his staff. Otherwise he potentially his an impenetrable defense that can last for an undisclosed amount of time.

Once that is done he is accepted.
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Uchiha, Akira - The Fanged Inferno







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FYI Konohagakure doesn't exist anymore. It is now Kyokujitsu no Tochi (referring to the nation) and Kyokujitsugakure (referring to the capital). The Land of Fire is merely a territory in Kyokujitsu no Tochi.
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