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Name: Al Valkanos

Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Class: Warrior

Appearance: Al's taller than average, with decent muscle tone, but his long body makes him look leaner. His hair is a messy, unkempt mop of muddy brown hair, and his facial features are surprisingly soft. Albeit, he's usually got a bruise or bandage marring them.
His dress style is pretty comfy; he mostly wears loose fitting traveler pants and untied boots, with a cotton shirt and dingy longcoat up top, with the sleeves rolled to his elbows for a can-do look. His right hand and lower arm is wrapped in bandages for better wrist support and also so he doesn't lose his grip. On his back he typically keeps one or more large greatswords, of varied make, kept in a sling. He made a necklace out of a a beast's fang, and wears it as a lucky charm.

Personality: Al is by all means a kind, well-meaning person, with an understanding of the importance of friendship. He just happens to have a wild streak, and that streak just happens to be rather good at hitting stuff really hard.
He's not so much caught up in a balance between right and wrong as he is between right and fun. This poor impulse control, combined with a poor danger sense, inevitably means he's often the first to dive into a dangerous area or do something stupid for fun. It's great in a dangerous line of work, though.

Brief Backstory: It's not precise to say Al's forgotten his past due to amnesia. It is, however, accurate to say he's forgotten where it is. However, when growing up, he was always considered a strong boy, even in a rural community where the pastime was wrestling wild animals. Al, however, couldn't be content living a life of mostly farming and whiling away the hours on the porch. He was the sort of child who liked to wander. One day, the year he became a man, he wandered a bit too far, and ever since then has gotten increasingly lost. Determined not to let that get him down, the then fifteen year old began a new life, the life of an adventurer, sellsword, and treasure hunter.

Equipment: Al's weapon of choice is the greatsword, and he's currently carrying six of them. If one breaks or gets tossed, he has a handy backup. These particular ones are made of steel, but he's not picky when it comes to replacements.

Additionally, he hauls a handy array of equipment for traveling
-A backpack
-A large blanket
-A lantern
-Flint and Steel
-A torch
-Salty beef jerky
-A waterskin
-A bottle of liquor
-Rope
-A bear trap

Abilities: Al is strong - much stronger than his frame would even suggest; he can crumple metal with his fists, throw heavy objects, and lift big things. He's durable to boot- It's pretty common for enemies to take a sledgehammer to his face, because anything less probably won't phase him.
Naturally, his self-taught fighting style takes advantage of this, and focuses on Al throwing his momentum around to deliver maximum impact haymakers. Drop kicks are common, as are wild punches, suplexes, and throwing whatever's handy, up to and including the enemy. Additionally, Al carries around several greatswords, since he finds their length and mass are good for slinging around. Also he thinks they're cool.

Perhaps the biggest downside is that his muscle mass isn't proportional to his strength. A fighter with the same strength levels but more muscle mass, for example, has an easier time throwing Al than the other way around, and naturally has an easier time putting more force behind blows.
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@SleepingSilence: Well... I wasn't really accepting claims on character classes, but someone called thief before you did, and I've been helping them work out their character. Since they came first it would be a bit unfair to make them scrap the work I've been helping them with. If you want something like that, I'm sure there's other light combat classes that don't overlap.

Also... Hundi actually can lie, it's just culturally not highly-thought-of to tell falsities. Lies of omission are totally okay though, and just because you're honorable doesn't mean you can't hide a bunch of archers to force your opponent to have an honorable duel if he gets any funny ideas about using dishonorable methods after your challenge. Or like, a lot of things in warfare for that matter are lies of omission. All hundi are also combat-trained, even your most basic farming family will have every single member of it capable of picking up a weapon of some sort and fighting. So basically, it's not just something you get from coming from a line of fighters if you're a hundi. Or rather, EVERY family is a line of fighters in addition to whatever else it is they do.

@IncredibleBee: I'm afraid I'm going to have to reject you. It's become very obvious to me that we really, really don't work well together. You had a lot of issues with the setting and with my conduct as a GM, and it was to the point where the OOC was one long, extended argument. Obviously I also didn't make the best decisions in the course of that, but it doesn't change the fact that it's clear to me we clash over just about everything. As a result I think we should just stick to other RP's.
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Look, I think we got off on the wrong foot in the past game, but that was a long time ago. We are both adults, and I think we can agree to put the past behind us for the sake of having a fun game together. I have thought carefully about my behavior, and in retrospect, I was in the wrong for what I did. I will refrain from trying to take over as GM or be overly argumentative.
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... Okay, I'm going to give you a chance again.

You do honestly seem like you acknowledge you were causing trouble back then. I don't really like barring people from my RP's unless it's absolutely necessary.

I will say that I'll keep an eye out for any of that behavior, because I'm still wary after having trouble with people before. But you seem honest and I'd rather not force people not to participate in my RP's.
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@VitaVitaAR Ah, alright. My bad, I didn't see it. No problem, I can make him a bard. Was planning on that in the first place anyway. But, I'll just edit him up slightly. Hopefully it will work.

Okay, so my backstory fits then? Like I said, I'll edit some of it. Decided to post it here so you don't have to go back a page. Let me know if this is alright?

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  • Name: Olivie Brasseur
  • Age: 24
  • Gender: Female
  • Race: Half-Giant--question not the mechanics of that.
  • Class: Wannabe Knight
  • Personality: Brave, honourable, good with animals... and extremely susceptible to insults. You'd think that a half-giant warrior would be more thick-skinned or at least a bit less kind, but instead of starting tavern brawls over some comment on her size (big or small), she tends to go mope in a corner.
    She really wants a pet.
  • Brief Backstory: Olivie grew up with both of her parents on a farm in Velt, which is definitely one of the strangest households you could imagine to exist, and both were retired mercenaries who taught her the basics but couldn't really do much more. Having grown up on stories of knights, fighting, and dragons, she decided exactly what she wanted to be: a brave hero serving the kingdom, or the church, or maybe even a princess.
    She realised, however, that knights are expected to supply their own equipment... so she's adventuring to raise funds and get enough of a reputation that she can actually achieve her goal, plus to find someone who can teach her all the other little skills.
  • Equipment: Olivie's equipment is rather simple, since she can't exactly get the full suit of armour she wants: protection for her legs and hands, since they're the easiest thing for people to reach, and a sword her mother used to use, which she should really use two-handed given that it's as long as she is tall...
  • Abilities: Even given what she is, Olivie is scarily strong, swinging around her sword with one hand. Unfortunately, this makes her actual... skills lackluster, since there's few people of the appropriate size to beat proper form into her head. Dangerously exposed attacks and occasionally outright jumping, with the saving grace being that very few people want to risk getting that close.
    Especially when someone just over ten feet tall has done a backflip to get away from them.
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@SleepingSilence: Er, well... I'm a little confused as to why you picked a hundi, honestly, since their whole thing is being a bunch of honorable warriors. They're also pretty rarely seen in Velt, except on their coming of age quests or as adventurers and sellswords.

Basically I'm a little confused as to your race choice when you're not going for the race's main thing. ^^;

@Raineh Daze: As per the update to the OP, since you discussed it with me beforehand, accepted.
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@VitaVitaAR Well, no real big reason. Aside from everyone's playing humans and it's a little boring if everyone is, am i right? And most monster races, would be hard pressed to be a bard. Imagining a harpie or snake bard. I honestly don't know what class would be better, visually speaking. But, I think it works with my backstory, if Hundi are normally proud warriors, my character not being that in any real way, made him an outcast to his family, and I also find Hundi less appealing to talk to, because I am so different. Plus, I'm trying to be a traveling salesman so it makes sense why I'd be whereever I am. I thought it was quite nice story wise myself. Unless there's stats I have to worry about. I'm basically an outlier of that race. I mean I CAN change into a human without much being lost I suppose, Aside from character variety in the party...
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I see no problem with a naga bard. They have arms after all, and with the right instrument they could be...

... a rattlesnake. : D
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I see no problem with a naga bard. They have arms after all, and with the right instrument they could be...

... a rattlesnake. : D


...

*sigh*
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@Raineh Daze Heh. Boooo. xP
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@SleepingSilence: Er, well... I'm a little confused as to why you picked a hundi, honestly, since their whole thing is being a bunch of honorable warriors. They're also pretty rarely seen in Velt, except on their coming of age quests or as adventurers and sellswords.

Basically I'm a little confused as to your race choice when you're not going for the race's main thing. ^^;


It's hard to make the argument that every member in an entire race would act the same way, I'm sure there's more room for flexibility then that.
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I see no problem with a naga bard. They have arms after all, and with the right instrument they could be...

... a rattlesnake. : D




Anyway, character is in the works just as soon as I figure out what in the name of all that's godly I intend to make.
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@Diggerton I mean, I agree with that in general. I personally find it more interesting when races or classes don't fit a mold. Makes fiction more interesting IMO.
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@Diggerton It's not 'acting a different way'; it's coming from a certain culture and then... having absolutely none of those cultural values and generally being their opposite for no reason. Take a typical dwarf, and then making them a teetotaller hippy who shaves and doesn't care about his people. Or the Drizzt clones.

Or badly written foreigners in series, who act like natives with a funny accent.
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@Diggerton It's not 'acting a different way'; it's coming from a certain culture and then... having absolutely none of those cultural values and generally being their opposite for no reason. Take a typical dwarf, and then making them a teetotaller hippy who shaves and doesn't care about his people. Or the Drizzt clones.

Or badly written foreigners in series, who act like natives with a funny accent.


It's not uncommon for people from a certain culture to go against its values; take NEETs in Japan which come from a very hardworking culture or people raised in highly religious communities and become atheists. It's definitely not crazy for someone to go against cultural values.
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<Snipped quote by Raineh Daze>

It's not uncommon for people from a certain culture to go against its values; take NEETs in Japan which come from a very hardworking culture or people raised in highly religious communities and become atheists. It's definitely not crazy for someone to go against cultural values.


It is for them to go against every bit of a culture and get an intense hatred of the entire thing.

... and NEET is an English acronym. I assume you mean hikikomori, which isn't a relevant example at all.
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@Raineh Daze Well, that can be a problem if there isn't a reason given. Though I'd like to think, I gave one. If you give characters reasons why they don't fit their cultures values, I don't see it not working. It's especially less surprising the younger you are, to go against what your 'suppose to be'.

Though I still have no real problem changing it, if race is the only thing that's concerning.
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<Snipped quote by Diggerton>

It is for them to go against every bit of a culture and get an intense hatred of the entire thing.

... and NEET is an English acronym. I assume you mean hikikomori, which isn't a relevant example at all.


Well, I do speak English so me using an English acronym is expected. And it is totally a relevant example. Japanese society traditionally is based around virtues of honor and workmanship. However there is a culture of people that go against that.
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As far as hikkikomori goes...Social anxiety = subculture now? And NEET's something completely different. It just means someone who is unemployed and not at university. Which COULD include someone really hardworking, but who hasn't found employment yet. Or didn't quite do well enough on university entrance exams.
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