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Ready for review! @ScreenAcne





Something I made for fun in a different rp, in an even more future setting where the Gorgas actually have their own fleet.


@dragonmancer

I'll need to balance out that beam resistance a bit since sun beams could melt through most atom engineered up hulls for energy to energy combat. We're talking tank top weaponry here.

How about this:

He can be immune naturally to hot and blistering weapons and not suffer any sort of heat stroke/ organ failure from heat side effects. This, pretty much means he can take on small and medium sized heat weapons and not be bothered. Like at all, he's effectively able to charge most beam basic infantry with impunity if they don't have other weapons. Keep in mind, he most likely will get armor of some sort later on that will buff him against higher rank of beam weaponry too.

even if its expensive for him. Because shekels come to players. Is the way of life.

Also, I'm giving you 5 extra points for his stats. Because I realized I'm kind of shafting the aliens a little on the stat department and there is no reason a bad ass dragon shouldn't have strength higher than 5.


Done, I'll fix that in a jiffy!


@ScreenAcne

How's this in terms of stats and whatnot for the race?
WORLD EVENT


A letter has arrived in the hands of each hero of each god;

Attention chosen heroes of the Gods! The great and almighty Kilgarrah has awoken from his delayed slumber, and challenges YOU to be the next champion of the newly founded DRAGON ARENA! Fight other opponents and heroes in a gladator arena hosted by the scalelord himself, and win prizes! Show off your weapons, your skills, whatever you have! Just play fairly and slay your enemies remember to show mercy to your defeated opponents!

"The grand prize will receive a most prestigious and glory-filled award from yours truly" ~Kilgarrah
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@Scio
Alright so I removed some spells that he'll after learn later on among other things due to inexperience, if there is anything else that should be cut let me know. I tweaked around some information as well, however I'm confused on what you mean by coding the text, how exactly would you wish me to format it? I'm not exactly too 'savy' with the coding on this site.
@Menhir Could you dumb that down for me?

Glad someone notices her. I have that as well. She's one of my go to character's when I join RPs.

@dragonmancerIt would be great if you could fix the coding of the text. I know its a hassle to do, but everyone's done it upon my request. Thanks, man.

Not much to say about his personality and history. As for his abilities, they're too strong. He seems too proficient with it despite being traumatized by the accident that happened in his school. Its weird that he refuses to talk about it but might probably be freely practicing his magic given how good he is with it.


Understood, I'll fix that up soon, I'll get back to you when its ready for a revision.
Name: William "Billy" Avalan
Age: 17
Appearance:
He has large blue eyes, messy white hair, and pale skin. He stands exactly 6'0 in height and weighs 180 lbs.
He wears a blue winter jacket with a hood, black jeans or grey sweatpants, and a white or black t shirt. On very hot days he will wear some shorts and a lighter jacket.

Personality: After his incident he has been very reclusive and anti social. He tries to avoid contact at all possible in fear that he will hurt more people or loose his sanity. He tries to keep down his stress and anger with a variety of anger management tactics, as he is easily annoyed but has adopted to try and do the 'turn the other cheek' mentality. He is very quiet and has a 'cynical' sense of humor to the few he will talk to. He definitely will not sugar coat anything and will be straightforward and honest with any question, regardless of offending anyone.

History: He was always a 'quiet' kid with a passion for nature, but at one point he 'discovered' his gifts when he was pushed to far in his school, which on that day the school burned to the ground and he was the only survivor. Most didn't think anything of it, as there was no evidence or witnesses of his draconic fury unleashed. Despite this, he was still contacted by the four winds years later. This event has obviously scarred him, and he refuses to talk about any details or specifics of his past, especially with his destruction of the school. While he in part loathes his ability, he also desires to hone it as to better control and understand his magic ability and to avoid hurting anyone again from lack of self control. As such, he only practices in his lonesome and typically refuses it to use it in the presence of others, let alone show people.

Skills: With little actual fighting skill his method of offensive, in the rare chance that he does fight, is almost instinctual and animalistic rather then finesse or skill, especially when enraged. Despite having very little actual combat experience, his enraged state seems to fuel an instinctual and destructive desire that while still reflects his lack of technique or battle prowess is still very dangerous to be against, as if he was a beast.

His cynical nature can keep him calm in dire situations to some extent, an ironic tolerance for extremes yet susceptible to annoyances and frustrations.

He has been able to fight off his beastly rage quiet well in everyday life, aside from the one incident of course, and his methods to deal with management, mostly from his stress ball, can keep him calm.

While he avoids social interaction, he can be surprisingly tolerant of others so long as they don't annoy or antagonize him.

Name: Dracomany
Type: Specialization
Description: 'Dracomancy' is a sort of grouping of dragon related magical abilities, where one can gain qualities of a dragon through spells, invoke draconic related spells or instances, and other related features. Due to its wide variety it is difficult to advance. Many spells fall under multiple different categories making it difficult to truly classify.

You cannot burn a dragon: No amount of heat alone can damage William. Granted a fireball with explosive force can still damage him, in terms of the raw force that would follow the intense heat, but the heat itself wouldn't burn him. Even the most extreme of temperatures such as molten rock or high-end energy wouldn't directly effect him in this matter.

A dragon's temper: This has mixed results for William. When enraged, he will enter a 'berserk' like state; which results in him loosing focus on pain and most if not all senses of danger or otherwise hindrance to his ability, increased adrenaline, and a desire for destruction and blood lust. This temper however, seems to directly effect Will's sanity. While he has some control over it, it isn't hard to push him into a tantrum. In blind rage this can easily lead him to be hostile towards both friends and foe alike, additionally, because he looses all his sense of pain or danger, he becomes essentially unaware of whatever damage his body has taken. While this can cause him to 'last a bit longer', in dangerous situations this can easily become a fatal flaw for Will.

Reptilian senses: He can smell with his tongue, quiet remarkably well in fact. Additionally, his eyes often give off an illumination that is often described as the flames of dim candles, allowing effective 'night vision.'

Resilience of scales: With the aspects of a dragon, he is stronger and faster in his base form then the average human, though not by much, he is certainly well fit despite having a skinny build. He also has an elongated lifespan, likely an indefinite one.

Cold-Blooded: One of the bigger downsides of this magic is that he becomes very susceptible to the cold. Even at room temperature Will is 'chilly' since his body naturally cannot produce body heat, anything below 60 F is potentially fatal. This also makes him extremely vulnerable to cold/ice based attacks in combat.

Roar of the Fire Scourge: Will produces either a form of shout or roar, which will in response, creates a 5 m AoE of force and air pressure that can launch back foes and objects with great force.

Seething Song: He can breath a jet of flames from his mouth with a range of 9 meters, alternatively he can shoot a projectile fireball with the explosive force a grenade, or a shorter range spread of fire from his mouth.

Gift of the Sky Tyrant: He can sprout a pair of bat-like wings along his back for flight.

Armor of the Scalelord: He can grow a set of plate-like scales along his body, giving him armor as durable as steel.

Inventory: He has a stress ball in his pocket that he will take out and squeeze when ever he gets annoyed or frustrated.
PREPARE YOUR ANUSES FOR A WORLD EVENT ASS CHALLENGE TOMMORROW (I know I said I'd do it today but fuck you I'm putting it up tommorrow)

I'm sorry for the language.
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