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When you see that you no longer owe anymore posts and have nothing to write *insanity ensues* Aaaaah!HSkjhaksjhdjf
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Hello all. I am an experienced writer who is writing my own fiction stories on the side. I can role play any genre. What I love most is being able to go-all-out when weaving tales with other writers. It just makes the story more interesting, so I can't wait to write with you. :)

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Waiting on one more CS and the game will go up and we'll finally begin.

Level: 1
Day/Time: Day Two, Afternoon
Location: 6th Floor of the Butter Building
Tag: @Guardian Angel Haruki@Zarkun@Leaves@Etherean Fire
Word Count: 307


Cloud was mostly quiet as Frisk addressed the group. The lawyer was definitely out of the loop and trying to ensure he didn’t get himself killed was a pain. The ex-SOLDIER glanced over at Phoenix as he introduced himself.

“You can call me Cloud,” he greeted. He then explained, “We’re on a mission to retrieve the soul of a comrade. It was stolen by one of King Dedede’s goons. King Dedede is the ruler of Dream Land and our enemy. If you were sent here with us, then that too is your mission whether you like it or not.”

Cloud didn’t comment on the killing. Instead, his attention returned to Frisk to hear her thoughts. He crossed his arms before his chest and bowed his head in thought.

“We may not always get the opportunity to deal with enemies in such a peaceful manner. The M-Virus is not peaceful and from my experience, deserves no mercy. Once someone’s taken by it, they’re already dead. If I can knock them unconscious, then I will. If I can’t, then I’ll apologize now.”

Alicia was next to speak. She and her Ghost’s reasons for killing seemed more personal and ingrained. At the same time, Cloud sided with Frisk a little.

“We’re in a different land. This is not the Last City. This is not your home world and this isn’t mine. I don’t know how this world functions or what its rules are, but I think you should try to learn what they are rather than using senseless bloodshed as the sole solution. I agree with Frisk and the lawyer that there are alternatives, but I only agree that there are alternatives when the opportunity presents itself. If this opportunity presents itself in our next fight…” Cloud uncrossed his arms and frowned at Alicia, “Then I will personally stop you.”
GM





Metal Cricket


The Metal Cricket landed on top of the Sister Ray’s barrel and didn’t seem to register the SOLDIER 1st Class that was on its back. It had its sights on a different target that stood at the other end of the barrel. Two missile hatches popped open on the Cricket’s shoulders and before the machine could fire, a black orb engulfed it. Gravity forced the Metal Cricket into a crouch; however, the weight of the machine and the force of the Demi spell were causing the metal barrel beneath the cricket to grown as the barrel would begin to warp.

The Metal Cricket slowly turned around to face Damian like a crab, its joints beginning to spark as its revolving eye glowed a menacing red. A red beam shot from the eye, the one weapon it had that wouldn’t be affected by the gravity. Like a precise blade, the red laser swept diagonally across the cannon’s barrel toward Damian. The laser had been so powerful that the SOLDIER 1st Class would feel the end of the barrel drop beneath his feet as it was cleaved free.


The Hacker

The apartment shook. The hacker’s hands froze for the first time on the keyboard. She reached up to grasp her headphones from her ears and listened for any more sounds. She didn’t hear anything, but she wasn’t going to risk it. She had already wasted enough time. Jessie set her headphones aside and uncrossed her legs. Rising to her feet, she walked over to the black bag, which had originally held all of the equipment scattered about the room. She unzipped a compartment and removed a rectangular explosive that she set down in front of her computer and set the time for two minutes before arming it. As the timer started to go, Jessie raced over to the window she had covered in newspaper. Unlocking it, she slid the window open and climbed onto the window sill. Crouching, she looked up at the roof and reached up to grab hold of it, pulling herself effortlessly up.

Swinging her legs over the side, Jessie dropped into a crouch, the brunette camo-painted beauty smirking. Like Biggs, her face was painted and she wore a red headband about her head. Gray, padded armor covered her torso and shoulders over a blue shirt with sleeves that stopped short above her elbows. Brown cargo pants covered her legs and brown combat boots covered her feet. The girl pushed off the floor and charged across the roof. As she approached the gap to the next building, she jumped, leading leg stretched out as she crossed the gap and caught the ledge. She tumbled forward into a roll and rose to her feet to continue running.

Communication can be override.
Automatons have to be manually stopped.
No further automatons will be taken over.
AVALANCHE is withdrawing and leaving behind the chaotic machines.



The Giga Hunter

Cayde had chosen to leap down and attack the Rover on top of the ATV, and the Giga Hunter watched. As it continued to march closer and closer to the ATV, it fired a missile at Cayde while he had been busy trying to dispose of the first Rover. If the SOLDIER 1st Class dodged the missile, it would inevitably strike the ATV a third time. Its gatling gun fire was sending lines of white hot lead at the SOLDIER 1st Class. The Rover that had been crouched before the ATV rolled backwards on its wheels to steer clear of the Hunter’s fire before it rose on its four legs and joined in the fire. The two other Rovers were galloping toward the situation.
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The lab coat frowned at Lapin’s suspicions and then cautiously stepped back away from her when she demanded to see his credentials. The SOLDIERs and trooper didn’t budge even as Rowen attempted to approach him. With a smirk, the lab coat said, “Apprehend me?” He then laughed, “You can’t apprehend me.” He turned and ran for the chopper.

The SOLDIER 3rd Classes dashed a foot back from Lapin, Beryl, and Rowan, drawing slinged assault rifles from behind their backs instead of sabers. The fire they were going to lay down was inevitable, the Shinra Troop was preparing a grenade.

The lab coat dove recklessly into the chopper and exclaimed, “Go! Go!”

The aircraft started to pull away into the sky.

The gunfire alerted several SOLDIERs to the chaos that erupted at the helipad. SOLDIER and Shinra Troop imposters began backstabbing, the suspected comrades firing into their backs and slitting their throats with knives. There were thirty imposters who had been able to slip into the Excavation Unit’s ranks during their complacency.
My CS submission does not count towards the two CSes I'm waiting on. I am dropping my character in here in the case anyone wants to build character relations. He already has a roommate (actual player) for his apartment, but the more the merrier. Whatever helps make the rent cheaper.




Character Information

Character Name

Bolt's real name is Carrot, the name given to him by Cabbage Patch his Mama. Because he thinks the name is stupid, he nicknamed himself "Bolt" after the lightning tattoos on his arms. Nobody knows his true name for it's a closely-guarded secret. Only his family is allowed to call him "Carrot." He is often nicknamed: Carrot Top, Farm Boy, or Bumpkin.


Alias
None


Age
18


Race
Human


Sub-Race
None


Gender
Male


Occupation
Construction Worker


Height
5'11"


Weight
210 lbs


Hair Color
Orange


Eye Color
Blue


Visual Appearance


Written Appearance
Bolt’s most iconic trait is his hair. He has thick long hair that he keeps tied behind his head in a hair tie. Not only is his hair wild, it is orange, which is why he was named Carrot as a child by Mama Patch and why he is often nicknamed Carrot Top. On top of his head is Carrot’s lucky cap to include the symbol of a Carrot on the front. He always wears it except when he decides to get serious. He wears a blue denim jacket over a white tank top, and he wears faded-black denim jeans. A pair of black and silver suspenders hold up his pants even though his pants still pool over his Timberland-style work boots. Down his left and right arms are the black lightning tattoos that he has coined the name “Bolt” from. Beneath his layer of clothes, Carrot’s solid build is well-hidden. His always smiling and boyish mannerisms make him an easily underestimated character. However, when Bolt decides to remove his hat and jacket and throw-down. His enemies are often surprised to see his buff working man’s build. Bolt's aura when he's charged up is Orange.


Personality
Bolt is your typical Southern boy. He is quite the bumpkin, but as much as he seems simple, he’s actually smart. His personality is somewhat deceptive. It is easy to treat Bolt like a simpleton or a joke, but the boy’s actually as smart as a whip. He can always be expected to crack a joke in an unsettling situation or brighten anyone’s day with laughter. While he rarely seems serious, Bolt does know when to put all jokes and antics aside. He is a gentleman—always saying “Please” and “Thank you.” He doesn’t like when others are picked on or when women are assaulted in his presence.

Bolt doesn’t like being called “Carrot” by anyone but his family members. They’re the only ones allowed to call him that and so if someone insists on using it, they’re going to get a fight. As nice as Bolt is, he isn’t afraid to punch someone deserving in the face. He loves his family with all of his heart and especially Mama Patch’s southern cooking.

As a fighter…well…Bolt can be rather special. He might run away from battle and frustrate his opponents. It’s difficult to say if he’s really a coward or has some sort of a plan. However, when the boy is serious, he can be pretty frightening. A good sign that Bolt is serious is when he throws off his hat and jacket.


Background
Carrot was born to Bean and Cabbage Patch on a farm in the grassland west of East Capital. Because of the distance and the amount of hands needed to run the farm, Carrot was home schooled by his father Bean...like the rest of his siblings who were born after him: Potato, Tomato, Lettuce, Bean Jr., Cauliflour—Carrot has lost count. He has a very productive family. Regardless, Daddy Patch preferred to raise his children himself. For you see, Daddy Patch was once upon a time a soldier in a certain army, and has since retired but that’s a story for another day.

Carrot’s relationship with his father is one mostly of pure respect and a dash of love. While Cabbage was the one to coddle her children, Bean was not. When Carrot wasn’t studying, his father was putting him through rigorous training. Carrot had to run—a lot. He felt that he ran more than any all-star athlete has ever had to. Sometimes he even had to run from Bean. Bean’s paranoia was having him prepare his children for whatever would one day come their way. Carrot never quite learned what that was, but his father’s training has since paid off. Carrot grew up to be a strong and disciplined boy. At ten-years-old, he was able to lift the family cow with one hand and hand-pull a cart overloaded with staples to East Capital.

With the Patch family becoming more and more productive, the Patch home was running out of space and Carrot was getting too old. Once he turned eighteen-years-old, Bean kicked Carrot out of the house and told him to find a job so that he can help him and his mother out. Carrot was free, and he wanted to get outside his father’s cross-hairs. He got an apartment in Central Capital and a job as a construction worker.


Weapon & Techniques


Weapon
Carrot was taught by Bean how to handle several military-grade weapons; however, he wields none.


Power Level
910


Techniques

Bob & Weave
Bolt demonstrates his superhuman reflexes and agility with his technique Bob & Weave. He can just about dodge nearly anything thrown at him with this technique, sacrificing his offensive opportunities for a defensive strategy. While the technique is mostly designed to dodge punches, kicks and certain ki attacks aimed above his hips are also avoidable. The action of Bob & Weave requires Bolt to remain stationary. He then will lean in whatever direction necessary to dodge the intended assault.

Character Information

Character Name

Bolt's real name is Carrot, the name given to him by Cabbage Patch his Mama. Because he thinks the name is stupid, he nicknamed himself "Bolt" after the lightning tattoos on his arms. Nobody knows his true name for it's a closely-guarded secret. Only his family is allowed to call him "Carrot." He is often nicknamed: Carrot Top, Farm Boy, or Bumpkin.


Alias
None


Age
18


Race
Human


Sub-Race
None


Gender
Male


Occupation
Home-Schooled Student and Farmhand


Height
5'11"


Weight
210 lbs


Hair Color
Orange


Eye Color
Blue


Visual Appearance


Written Appearance
Bolt’s most iconic trait is his hair. He has thick long hair that he keeps tied behind his head in a hair tie. Not only is his hair wild, it is orange, which is why he was named Carrot as a child by Mama Patch and why he is often nicknamed Carrot Top. On top of his head is Carrot’s lucky cap to include the symbol of a Carrot on the front. He always wears it except when he decides to get serious. He wears a blue denim jacket over a white tank top, and he wears faded-black denim jeans. A pair of black and silver suspenders hold up his pants even though his pants still pool over his Timberland-style work boots. Down his left and right arms are the black lightning tattoos that he has coined the name “Bolt” from. Beneath his layer of clothes, Carrot’s solid build is well-hidden. His always smiling and boyish mannerisms make him an easily underestimated character. However, when Bolt decides to remove his hat and jacket and throw-down. His enemies are often surprised to see his buff working man’s build. Bolt's aura when he's charged up is Orange.


Personality
Bolt is your typical Southern boy. He is quite the bumpkin, but as much as he seems simple, he’s actually smart. His personality is somewhat deceptive. It is easy to treat Bolt like a simpleton or a joke, but the boy’s actually as smart as a whip. He can always be expected to crack a joke in an unsettling situation or brighten anyone’s day with laughter. While he rarely seems serious, Bolt does know when to put all jokes and antics aside. He is a gentleman—always saying “Please” and “Thank you.” He doesn’t like when others are picked on or when women are assaulted in his presence.

Bolt doesn’t like being called “Carrot” by anyone but his family members. They’re the only ones allowed to call him that and so if someone insists on using it, they’re going to get a fight. As nice as Bolt is, he isn’t afraid to punch someone deserving in the face. He loves his family with all of his heart and especially Mama Patch’s southern cooking.

As a fighter…well…Bolt can be rather special. He might run away from battle and frustrate his opponents. It’s difficult to say if he’s really a coward or has some sort of a plan. However, when the boy is serious, he can be pretty frightening. A good sign that Bolt is serious is when he throws off his hat and jacket.


Background
Carrot was born to Bean and Cabbage Patch on a farm in the grassland west of East Capital. Because of the distance and the amount of hands needed to run the farm, Carrot was home schooled by his father Bean...like the rest of his siblings who were born after him: Potato, Tomato, Lettuce, Bean Jr., Cauliflour—Carrot has lost count. He has a very productive family. Regardless, Daddy Patch preferred to raise his children himself. For you see, Daddy Patch was once upon a soldier in a certain army, and has since retired but that’s a story for another day.

Carrot’s relationship with his father is one mostly of pure respect and a dash of love. While Cabbage was the one to coddle her children, Bean was not. When Carrot wasn’t studying, his father was putting him through rigorous training. Carrot had to run—a lot. He felt that he ran more than any all-star athlete has ever had to. Sometimes he even had to run from Bean. Bean’s paranoia was having him prepare his children for whatever would one day come their way. Carrot never quite learned what that was, but his father’s training has since paid off. Carrot grew up to be a strong and disciplined boy. At ten-years-old, he was able to lift the family cow with one hand and hand-pull a cart overloaded with staples to East Capital.

With the Patch family becoming more and more productive, the Patch home was running out of space and Carrot was getting too old. Once he turned eighteen-years-old, Bean kicked Carrot out of the house and told him to find a job so that he can help him and his mother out. Carrot was free, and he wanted to get outside his father’s cross-hairs. He got an apartment in Central Capital and a job as a construction worker.


Weapon & Techniques


Weapon
Carrot was taught by Bean how to handle several military-grade weapons; however, he wields none.


Power Level
910


Techniques

Bob & Weave
Bolt demonstrates his quick reflexes and agility with his technique Bob & Weave. He can just about dodge nearly anything thrown at him with this technique, sacrificing his offensive opportunities for a defensive strategy. While the technique is mostly designed to dodge punches, kicks and certain ki attacks aimed above his hips are also avoidable. The action of Bob & Weave requires Bolt to remain stationary. He then will lean in whatever direction necessary to dodge the intended assault.
@SudkurveLooks good. You have my pre-approval. That's 3 out of 5 CSes. 2 more and I know they're on the way. :D
@HillanSo one of the CSes I received was a Saiyan as well (the CS that was on hold), and I have to say the other player's CS wins this one. If anyone wishes to still try and top the Saiyan slot (anyone else who hasn't sent a CS), then you may do so.

You are welcome to try again with another character. I will still be waiting for 3 completed CSes not including a CS I would submit (I haven't even started mine but mine isn't included lol).
I received a second completed CS, but I got a hold on it until I get the three remaining CSes to push us to game mode.
I received the very first completed CS in the game. I need 4 more before we get this show on the road. :) I've been drawing doodles of my character so expect to see those lol.

I am going to say this. The more detail your CS has (not over-detailed or "fluff" just a sufficient amount), the better chance you'll have. I do not accept skeletons. CSes need MEAT!

Also, I was going to add "Aura Color" as a CS option, but as Sudkurve has done, it's easier to just mention it in your character's written appearance if it's applicable.
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