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7 days ago
Current Me today: *writes action sequence* ". . .actually that doesn't work." *rewrites action sequence* *pauses* *has a good leisurely think* "Actually, if I just change it like that, the first way works."
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25 days ago
Writer's famous last words: "Oh it shouldn't take long." -3 hours later, it's constructed to satisfaction.
27 days ago
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1 mo ago
Those times in every writer's life, when they read over something they'd written in time's past and go: "What was I *saying*?!"
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Anyone else who uses Wix: If you ever duplicate a post then start editing the copy but don't finish, make sure you publish it *before* reverting to draft. Don't let what happened to me, happen to you.

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It all never happened ~ but in your mind!
It all never happened ~ but in your mind!

Aspiring Screenwriter. Imagination whiz jumping between many 🌎s.
Self-taught Pic/🎶 Editor, VFX Coordinator & Mixer.
Independent student of 🎞; ever learning.


'The Reality Is: X-Men woke something up in me.
'The Reality Is: X-Men woke something up in me.

The Reality Is: It's getting me through.'
The Reality Is: It's getting me through.'


The comic book world is such a rich sandbox! Perhaps none richer than the X-Men -mutations to mix, slice-of-life elements to turn into anything but ordinary -the lines are drawn but the colours exceed them ~care to embark on the eXploration with me?

*cue 🎶X-Men Animated Series theme🎼swelling into Fox Movies theme🎵*




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Cache of other X-Men concepts.









X-Men Envisionings: one passionate fan's riff on the FOX X-Men franchise.
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The X-Men continues to be this excellent odyssey
The X-Men continues to be this excellent odyssey

Where ever it takes me.
Where ever it takes me.


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Jaclyn "OfAll" Chreyz

Location: Asteroid M
Skills: Power Mimicry - Active Power: Chaos Magic





OfAll thought she caught the sound of her name, and in short time Antoinette was right beside her, asking if she was alright and where she hit. ". . .more my back," OfAll responded uncomfortably. "But it's fine," she pushed herself up onto her all-fours, "I'm fine, I mean. Thanks," she smiled. Antoinette was one of the few members of the team Jaclyn had some interaction with prior to joining them. A positive acquaintance, to be sure, and it was good to be reunited with her, Bethany and Neil. Just half more of the group to go.

OfAll looked up as Lance spoke then, having also come over. "Yeah," OfAll kind of laughed, embarrassed, as she now, carefully, got to her feet. "Thanks for checking on me. That sounds real good," she said of meeting up with the others soon; the smile already faded from her face and a low-key bothered exhale now escaping from her lips.

This was enough.

She'd seen magic go wrong, and she'd seen it work.

She would stay away from portals -and mutant circuits- but it couldn't be all bad and they needed her,
she needed herself -as in, she knew she was more capable than this.

She concentrated again, taking a deep, steadying breath as she did so. Pushing from her mind the calamity that happened before, decidedly shelving that away as, again, "just portals", and she made an attempt to transmutate her space suit into some kind of suit of armour.

Without really thinking about it she had closed her eyes. The feeling of magic did follow -decidedly a different feel than Max's mutant circuit. Much less otherworldly, out-of-body, and more like a tingling sensation that flowed from her mind, to her hands, then spread both across and away from her body.

It also felt. . .incomplete. Or. . .ill charged. Like a device where the batteries were running low and the sound effects played wonky.

In this case, the feeling of the magic was sort of . . .crackly. Like a dull, Pop Rocks sensation.

When OfAll opened her eyes, she found her spacesuit had changed.
For the worse.

OfAll sighed. This, this was almost amusing. The term "rag lady" popped into her head although her suit didn't look that bad. More like one that had been tagged for the decommission pile, used too much to be useful, yet possibly still salvageable with some work.

Deciding that "work" was not to be done by her hands, OfAll shelved her idea. Perhaps the type of armour she had in her mind was just too complicated, or -Holo could've done that she thought to herself. Magic seemed like part visualization, and OfAll was not the visual thinker of the family.

But as her attempt didn't result in the blowing up of her suit, nor any calamity of any sort, OfAll actually could smile at this failure; some of her fear towards magic having been settled through it.

Shifting her mind with another breath, OfAll decided to try and do something about her arms. Yes, maybe it wouldn't be long now before they reunited with the others, with Edus, but who knew what could still be encountered along the way, what wrenches could still be thrown into the works.

Besides that, healing was always a useful thing and likewise, it was magic practice.
OfAll liked the idea that she could practice one thing by doing different things. Well, she didn't know if that's exactly how it worked here. Perhaps magic was more akin to different muscles in the body and flexing one wouldn't really contribute to the strength across the board.

Either way.

Her first attempt she was feeling something again. That Pop Rocks sensation, a little "brighter". But then it stopped. Did it fizzle out or had OfAll balked? She had suddenly had the thought, as the sensation spread over the damaged part of her arms, what if she made it worse?

Shaking her head, OfAll was determined to try again. How can you make things worse healing? she thought to herself in way of calming, not berating. That little back-of-the-mind voice everyone has, however, was starting to speak up well, maybe repairing tissue is one misstep away from- A stronger shake of her head. Focus, OfAll. You can do anything, just set your mind.

Positive self-talk.

And, a positive result did follow -feeling the tingling, fizzy sensation spreading like a tide coming in and going out across her injuries.

The winds had really ramped the pain back up to the point of feeling like they were reburning a little. Not only had OfAll calmed that, but she managed to dial the pain down lower than before them. Surveying the look of her arms, she thought they appeared a little less red than they had been.

It wasn't perfect, but it was an improvement.
In itself that added another layer of relief.

OfAll smiled, turning then to join the others.

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(assuming there's been some PMed votes)

Xavier was a man of deep control. One had to be when you could connect yourself to the minds of everyone on the planet. Cerebro was a tool to help channel, target and enhance, but Xavier's mind was a well honed tool itself, and could do much on its own.

He could make people forget, he could implant impulses. A telepath could make you jump off buildings if they were skilled enough and so inclined.

Of course Xavier never was.
Inclined, that is. He was certainly that skilled, and the reality that he could do those things, easily, simply -as though he were writing a book and dictating the actions of a character, was exactly the reality that kept him in check.

A reality he had to keep a firm hold on if he were ever to see his dream of a peaceable existence between mutants and non-mutants.

All that to say, as much as Xavier kept in control was as much as he appeared in control; calm in the face of danger, benign. The unassuming old man in a wheelchair. Perhaps Ryder being Xavier's kin wasn't so foreign an idea when considered this way; he played the parts he had to, as well.

In Xavier's case, he never set out to deceive. Wasn't taking in information so he could launch an informed assault. He just. . .knew who he had to be for whom.

Like the teenager who would mouth off with friends, yet be the picture of manners with Grandma. It wasn't that one nature was true and the other false. It was that life prompted different aspects of yourself to be in the driver's seat at different times. Many selves made up the one, including secret selves.

Xavier wasn't looking to expose that "self" of Ryder, but he suspected there was something less hostile beside and behind the feral survivor who'd had to be in that driver's seat her entire life. Perhaps selves she didn't even acquaint herself with but might find she'd like to know.

All in good time.

And all that to say, Xavier wasn't quite so naive as he appeared, knocking on the wall of a highly fortified structure.
He crossed the threshold with vigilance. Yes, the hook-and-pull still felt as abrupt as you'd expect. Certain nervous reactions cannot be helped; the startle reflex from a sudden noise.

But he didn't feel genuinely afraid.
Instead, Xavier explored this space, running his hand along the peculiar wood paneling, feeling the cold against his fingers; symbolic of what "touch" she's known, he was sure. Staring out the windows into nothingness -a nothing somehow so complete it was like when people said you could "feel" the tension in a room; he felt like he was staring at something. As Ryder had observed, even negative space had a shape.

In a place so filled with hostility toward an occupant -a captive, it was easy for Xavier to imagine something hiding in that nothing. Like a child's claim of monsters being in all the dark places.

So alive,
yet unreal.

Xavier realized he was bracing himself, and in the next moment he understood; like feeling the shift in the atmosphere before a lightning strike.

YOU ARE A FUCKING IDIOT, OLD MAN

Her words crashed through his every cell -as though trying to disconnect any of his that had to do with her, as though she wanted to be left alone on a genetic level.

There are some things in life even the most prepared -even the most prepared mind cannot fully be ready for.
Xavier found himself reeling,

and then she was right there before him as though she had been from the first second.
And of course, in a cerebral sense, she had.

A demand and a jacked threat.
Xavier anticipated something along these lines, yet naive perhaps he still was, as he hadn't expected it quite like this.

Regardless, he continued to exude calm as he answered her, but the type that could be defined as "careful treading"; picking through the mines. "We have been caring for your healing body. I will not lie and say interest in your mutation isn't also present. Jean is a geneticist, Hank's interests run the gamut, and yes, everyone is curious given your origins. . .But we are not Umbra. You may recall the purpose of this school, which I'm certain you know is where we are, is to help young mutants, powerful, or not," even so early in knowing of her, he spoke with every awareness that Ryder was, perhaps more than anyone he had or would encounter, most definitely in that first category, "to feel safe. Both within and over their environment. You are not a specimen here, Ryder, nor shall you be treated as one."

There was something of a promise there. If there had been any prodding that skewed more scientific than medical -besides the DNA confirmation which they did perform- there would be no more without consent. Xavier would make certain of that.

He had been explaining "himself" in a general way, but concluded more personally: "I am not interested in what you are, beyond what you have been in the eyes of others. Only who you are."

Now, there was a different kindness. He may see her as "his", though not so much in the possessive sense. Only a desire for some connection, and, at this point, more for her than for himself. Certainly she'd had none of any kind at Umbra.
Jaclyn "OfAll" Chreyz

Location: Asteroid M
Skills: Power Mimicry - Active Power: Chaos Magic





'What next?' OfAll thought as something formed in the middle of the winds, and then-- Max!! No worse for wear.

Her heart lightened, despite the overcast she still felt.

She watched -and heard- as Max tried to combat the winds with magical ones of his own, but it didn't seem to work. She caught his look. After what'd just happened, was he actually expecting to circuit again? Like the winds around them, a question swirled in OfAll's mind, one that came into it a few moments ago; Max's present disposition possibly answered it some. Possibly not.

Pietro went off with Bethany and Guin, and by Lance's words, the rest of them would be doing their best to hold firm until those three managed to "shut down" the winds up ahead. If one mutant was enhancing another, OfAll had a fair feeling the other probably wasn't intending to be doing what they presently were. Especially as they couldn't see them, what reason would they have to blast wind down a hallway? Unless it was something of a knee jerk response to the prior explosion, but it still seemed reckless.

And, despite Magneto's words, "reckless" sounded like an apt moniker for this Cortez guy, at least.

In any case, OfAll hoped Pietro, Guin and Bethany could stop things peaceably. There were already enough face-offs for one day, though they were pretty much 0-for-X.

And if the rest of them were just essentially waiting, it seemed an advantageous time to ask that question of hers: "Max, is it just portalling that's dang--" Since she was keeping her arms to her back, all OfAll could do to shield her face was look away from the wind. As such she didn't see the tornado coming so much as she realized she was having to raise her voice above the wind more -realized by the intensifying sound that it was growing, still.

And then she squinted through --and in the next instant was whipped violently down the hall a few feet before banging into a corner of the ceiling and falling to the floor, the rest of the wind washing over her.

Those telltale words rose into her mind:
'Welcome to the X-Men. Hope you survive the experience.'



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What sort of stuff are you into? Original content exclusive? Some fandoms?
Jaclyn "OfAll" Chreyz

Location: Asteroid M
Skills: Power Mimicry - Active Power: Chaos Magic





OfAll had to wonder if Max was mouthing "sorry" for just suddenly grabbing and pulling her somewhere, or for the fact she had manifested his magic. Perhaps he had a sense of what she'd wound up doing with it. And maybe she should've had the sense not to mention she had manifested it at all.

Max tried a circuit with herself and Neil, the latter of which not seeming so keen.

It was unlike any experience OfAll previously had. As if her body was operating through a network beyond her own brain; her internal rhythms shifting from her own to something more communal between herself, Max and Neil. She felt connected to something beyond them, like magic itself, and yet, untethered. . .as if she could go anywhere.

And then she was.

She opened her eyes to the physical world in front of her and found herself staring into an unsettlingly identifiable celestial object.
How?

It took her precious seconds to realize what had just happened, and for the second time that day, and for the same reason, she found herself behind pulled out towards the uninhabitable expanse of space. This time with a set destination that would mean certain death -her spacesuit was already damaged.

"NO!"
Then Max gave the explanation -and solution, and with cautionary words just to her, he was gone.

Unshed tears held in her eyes. For a moment she was still, then she looked around.

Neil seemed concerned about Max. Bethany as well, though her comment to Magneto struck OfAll as a bit off.

Lance and Carolina seemed more. . .low key about it. Like they were familiar with Max doing this -just another day at the office. There was some reassurance to be had in that, besides Lance's comment about Max's oxygen.

Then there was Guin. She seemed livid. OfAll held back saying anything however, even an apology; that could come later. It seemed better just to move on from the moment. A major discussion was certain to follow this foray into space, like a battle of its own. Now was not the time.

Besides that, something was prickling in the back of OfAll's mind: it was something in Max's manner when he cautioned her, and something about the manner of his teammates now. . .She drew a refocusing breath just before a huge gust of wind struck through their hallway. Regular air moving over OfAll's arms caused pain --this was searing. She shifted at first not sure how to guard against it, and finally went with holding her arms behind her back and leaning against the wall.

She shook her head at Pietro --much as she wanted to know what was going on, she felt she was at the bottom of any prudent tag-along list.

"Who's on here with wind powers?!"OfAll yelled out to Magneto. There was no way it made sense to feel this amount of wind here, unless maybe all the oxygen was getting sucked out. Though it didn't feel that way. OfAll thought of Storm. She did not think Storm was up here, but what OfAll was thinking was how Storm could do a lot more than just manipulate wind. She could've caused that flood as well. Was there another mutant with weather powers? And if so, what else ought they prepare for?

Just noticed where that fifth entry got off to.
My vote remains as is, but love the existence. The piece itself is rather psychological...at once making you think, and making you feel perhaps manipulated. It almost reads more like...Not sure how to say it. More like prose? Less like a story? Cool submission style, in any case. You win in my book for fully embracing the theme!


The Uncle:
It felt like when the girl/woman would stare off and imagine her Uncle's stories, she would be literally transported there and perhaps disappear in her regular life for that time. I found that to be a fascinating concept. Breaking the Parts into different stages of the character's life was a neat way to do it, too. I liked the kind of takeaway at the end how most people are too busy with their own lives to care about listening to other people's, and the last sentence is one of those that stays with you. However, I'm not sure the story felt the most like an invisibility story to me, as a whole.

the girl unseen:
I liked the setting and the visuals, especially when Lorelei finds the book. I thought it was interesting, too, that time seemed to pass differently for her than for everyone else. That's always a fascinating concept. However, I found a couple of points in the story confusing: At the top it said she longed to be seen and heard, yet the wish she makes is to be invisible. Then when the wish comes true, all the world was said to have faded away to grey, not details, yet she felt excited to be able to go anywhere and she frolicked through the forest. I'm not sure if maybe the greyness was supposed to be only for a moment. It was a simpler story, but had a nice amount of interesting details.

To be seen:
Fascinating concept! And concept within a concept given how the movies seem to be filmed (fun titles). I also like the idea of getting close to this person, mostly not even physically seeing them. Really connecting with the person. However, the perspective of the story is from one who is not among the invisible, so it does come off more as a story about what it's like to know invisible people or be in a world with them, than what it's like to be one. What we do learn of Marilyn's life are details that could exist whether she was an invisible person or not, and I found "'They don't really see me' was a phrase many woman used because of the whole invisibility thing" a bit confusing within the concept which might've made more sense if the idea were explored from the women's perspective: why do so many choose to remain invisible? Is it so they are really seen?

That being said, my vote goes for 'To be seen'!
It's the one that gets me thinking / engaging with the presented world the most.
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