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4 yrs ago
Current "An apology is a promise to do things differently next time, and to keep the promise." - Ging Freecss
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4 yrs ago
“If you want to find the secrets of the universe, think in terms of energy, frequency and vibration.” ― Nikola Tesla
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4 yrs ago
“I think and think for months and years. Ninety-nine times, the conclusion is false. The hundredth time I am right.” – Albert Einstein
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4 yrs ago
“Yesterday I was clever, so I wanted to change the world. Today I am wise, so I am changing myself.” ― Rumi
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4 yrs ago
“Stand in the ashes of a trillion dead souls, and asks the ghosts if honor matters. The silence is your answer.” ― Javik
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@BCTheEntity Yay, now I know I'm one of the most dangerous pirates out there \o/
@Buddha I'll finish it up in the morning. I have to work tonight so I'm about to knock myself out real quick.
@Buddha Stereotypical! *gasp*

Maybe I'll think about giving him a overhaul...

Nah I won't lol. He'll become his own character eventually.

@mochin Thank youuu!
@Buddha You spoil me so well lol.
@Buddha It made me cry, all the racist jokes were too much T_T

Nah, it was actually pretty informative. I might need some pointers regarding the jutsus tho, the idea was sudden asf. It was just something I thought would be cool and really battle effective.

All the other comments, I kinda left out on purpose. I didn't see him seeing his relationship as too important. So I didn't add it into his history. And umm, I knew they had shinobi in the village but his outlook was just kinda farmish I guess. Plus I wasn't sure how it all melded. How the Hamajo forces would interact with Ninja system. Hell, looking through his eyes it all felt kinda gray and grim. He was aware of the previous Kumogakure so I just guessed he'd dwell on the really bad things that happened and not the normality that surrounded it.

The whole apathetic/hopeful conflict in the review. Let's see if I can explain it to you squares. Deep down he's hopeful, really deep. He feels like things can change. But his mother's death and father's change afterwards sorta clouded it, causing him to outwardly portray, and kinda believe in his own disinterest in the well-being of others. . . I guess what I'm trying to say is only in the most important of situations does he reveal his true self. The rest of the time, he can be seen as more-or-less apathetic.

Either way, I'll work on improving his personality a little, making it a bit more believable. The rest, I'll attempt to get correct but I'm near-sure I'm going to fuck it up somehow lol.
I say put it in the OOC.

We don't have secrets here.
RED HOOD PIRATES




Bogard Sunny x GrandLine

@JmerlRobot @LokiLeo789 @BCTheEntity @Tmitche23 @dragonmancer


Bogard really didn’t want to move his head. Even that small motion had sent a horde of pain down his back and neck. Still, he nodded in appreciation and thanks to the pain was forced to attempt to grab the plant with flicks of his tongue. He stretched out as far as possible in hopes of grasping its stem or leaves in his mouth.

The moment he had chewed it and felt the oncoming numbness, he continued on with his conversation with Dirk. Bogard was just happy that he was willing to work harder to change. To not let himself be convinced of remaining the same.

He grinned warmly towards the sky and sighed a air of relief. “That’s good, I’m happy you've been thinking about it too. Either way, if you hadn’t, I wouldn’t of let you die. Neither of us would’ve. You're the First Mate of the Red Hood Pirates. That'd suck if you died.”

“. . . You’re right about us all needing to train too. These Marines are only getting stronger the further we travel down the GrandLine. Quite frankly,” He glanced over to Xerxes beside him. “I’m afraid none of us would be a match for him or that guy he was fighting on Drum Island. We need to get even stronger than the us we know today.”

His expression lost its innocent as he forced himself through the horrendous pain to sit up on his elbows. He looked towards Jackal with a profound seriousness. “I was suppose to break you two out. You were suppose to have information on my past. Talk big guy, I need this info.”

@banjoanjo He always has it. But he's not going to want to use it.

Its like one of those special pens you get from a trip. Its all fancy and its meant for writing but who wants to write with something so nice lol.
Finally got him done. Go ahead and massacre him.

Fuck you, @Buddha! But yes, yes I was. And as you can see, I present greatness to you.

So just giving a small update. Maemi-boy is almost done.

I just gotta do his custom jutsu and such. Revise and edit than post him. Unfortunately that's going to have to wait till tomorrow. I'm off then so I know I'll get it done.

@Buddha I listened to the music in the clan sheet you just posted. That shit was dope. I'll get around to actually reading the Clan sheet eventually. . . Maybe lol.

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