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21 days ago
Current The one adorned in the red of heroes had need to finally drop his mask. A funeral for summer, for our youth. Goodbye, those heated days... youtube.com/watch?v=UxwHkqk…
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22 days ago
It seems the long summer, which gouged with fangs and gave us hope, has come to its end...
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3 mos ago
Late in it, but happy Kagerou Day!
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4 mos ago
"Jesus does not like very many girls." - Grant (GOODTIMESZone)
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"And how smart you are only determined which way you fall." - a dream I had once
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Thank you. Don't have to overdo it, just tip the scales back a liiiiiittle bit. There's nothing in there that I'd mind getting added back in when upgrades start rolling around, just a touch less from the jump.


While I call it a new draft, the only things changed were in the mech portion. I also made a summary of the changes.





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Okay! First off, I really love a good form change gimmick and I like the look of this one.

That said, I do think Michael's a little too powerful for the general baseline that's been established. Right now, at least. I fully intend to be letting everyone have the opportunity for upgrades (probably more than once, if we run for long enough) but I do think I would prefer if you reined it in just a little bit for now.

Generally speaking it feels like Michael can do a good bit of everything right now without a lot of drawbacks. Most specifically, though, I would prefer that the predictive aspects of the two forms' OS either get removed, or given a severe enough drawback.

I know that's a really general bit of feedback and I'm happy to talk it over some more with you but I had a hard time figuring out exactly what I'd suggest changing.

@FlappyTheSpybot Let me know as soon as you're done, and I'll give it a read!


No worries, I was sort of relying on Stel's lack of piloting ability to offset it, but I'll run it over and see what I can do to weaken it.
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No problems with Stel, but the Michael will take a little longer to read through. There's a lot there, and I confess I'm having a hard time keeping it straight in my head. I'll edit in my feedback on Michael (or post it by itself, if someone posts in between) but I didn't want you to think I had forgotten to read it.


No worries, I could probably have written it easier to read, to be honest. Sorry about that.
That's the most I've written in a long time, but I've got a first draft CS done. Let me know what needs changing.
Just now read Artemie and crap we filled the same niche with our pilots. :/


I legitimately thought I dreamt seeing the interest check to this on the homepage so I'm just now getting around to it, but I'd be interested in joining this if there's still room. I might need a day or two to figure out a CS though.
Devil Survivor is always great, but this seems like it's not gonna work as a traditional RP without it being some sort of D&D homebrew. I'll be watching and reading though, so good luck!
Violet turned around and grabbed a few ingredients. "One 'Diabetes Praline,' coming up!" She took 1 part honey to 2 parts cherry vodka and mixed it half and half with 1 part lemonade to 2 parts blueberry syrup, throwing it spinning into the air a few times to mix it before flash-freezing it and shaking it profusely to break it up into a slush. Finally she poured it into a glass and slid it to Misty.

"New recipe I thought up, you're the first to try it." she said with a grin. Her voice dropped to a whisper and she leaned in to her friend. "You've got to be more careful. Especially with the gov. trying to pull this new testing shit. If they pulled their heads out of their asses long enough to think about people's powers more than two seconds, people like us are screwed. Congrats on getting into the rumor mill though, finally."

Violet turned away for a moment to serve another patron a drink before returning. "So, got any fun plans?"


@Nimda
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Violet awoke to the sounds of of twenty-year old music, the last time music had been good in her opinion, blaring from her alarm clock at exactly 3:13 p.m. Unfortunately for her, it was one of those new "robot" alarm clocks that runs around the room like a headless chicken, so she was forced to actually get up and catch it to turn the damned thing off. Fortunately, on the other hand, by the time she caught it she was wide awake and less angry at the machine, meaning it got to live another day. This left her with just enough time to eat a frozen pizza, uncooked, and get dressed in her usual outfit of a black shirt, jeans, and a red coat before she had to leave. On the way out she grabbed her weapons, a pistol placed in a holster, tacked on as part of her coat, which sat just above her butt, a katana that was attached by wire upside-down to her hip, and several small canisters both full of liquid and empty that she placed inside her coat.

She jumped onto her so-called "vehicle" a contraption that was made by sticking together four skateboards, a motor, and a garden chair with a lot of hope and the dreams of small children, and began rowing her way to work. She passed several students on the sidewalks heading in the opposite direction, on their way home from the Education District, many of whom she knew on a first-name basis. But now was not the time, now was the time for getting her workout and getting to her workplace, so she switched sides and continued rowing with simply a wave to those she knew. She managed to make it to the bar with 30 seconds to spare which was plenty of time to park in the grass behind it, run inside, and take over for the current bartender.

It was about an hour later that she sighed and mentally cursed out her friend. First the government wanted to do more testing, and then on top of that she had to worry about that lovable idiot? The death in the news didn't phase her, but she was upset at pretty much everything else she'd heard so far on the job. She'd have to chew her out later.
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