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Current I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography.
2 yrs ago
At least if you're writing something you know, with knights.
2 yrs ago
I mean, depends on what you're writing, and the tone and theme of what you're writing. Trained armored knights were legitimately monstrous on the battlefield, so looking up how they fought helps.
2 yrs ago
As much as there's a lot of reasons twitter sucks, I genuinely don't want to see it die for the sake of all the artists who now rely on it. Hoping the shithead stops trying to directly administrate.
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roleplayerguild.com/posts/5… If anyone's up for fighting some kaiju, why not try out my new RP, Godzilla: YATAGARUSU?

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Undead-Infested Town





"D-d-did you both just pat my head?!" I cry. Why?! What!? I'm not a child! I'm seriously not! Cutie?!

I can feel my cheeks burning hot, my hands clutching at my beret as find myself glaring at the both of them, fuming. Just because I look like this doesn't mean anything!

Is... is this the same feeling as the original Sephily felt when she was treated this way---?

I don't even know how to feel about that!

With everyone gathering what they can, and hopefully listening to my subsequent suggestion on a formation as we leave the ruined inn, it's time to go.

It only makes sense to put Bianca first. She's clearly armored and wielding the largest and most directly offensive weapon out of all of us. She's already demonstrated how swiftly she can kill one of these undead. Putting myself towards the middle is obvious. I can't fight. I have no idea what I'm doing yet. Plus this body definitely isn't as strong as Sylva's or Sora's.

---And as much as I hate to admit it, I can't help but feel a bit scared. My heart's hammering in my chest. Just one undead was a completely different experience compared to fighting them in a video game.

The air is fresh out here, at least. I'd been bracing myself for a rotten odor, given how many corpses were shambling about, but the open air and the sheer age of the bodies seems to have ensured that the smell isn't too strong.

That's a relief.

I feel more comfortable with our formation, too. It's plenty clear that whatever happened here was a much larger conflict then just the outbreak of the undead.

Is there a war going on? It would explain some things, like the barricades I saw from the inn's windows. Those were fortifications in preparation for battle.

Whatever the case, it definitely happened a while ago. I'd already suspected as much given the state of everything, but now that we're out on the street I can see the various ways nature is already starting to reclaim this place.

Except----

The burned out buildings are fresh. Even from here I can tell, they look like they had to be burned only a few days ago. They're charred black, not crumbled into ash or completely collapsed.

All the other damage looks as if it had to have taken place some time ago, so why are the burned buildings so new-looking?

I don't get it.

Was someone here before us? But why would they just set fire to some buildings and seemingly leave(or maybe die) then?

The thought makes me uneasy. I don't understand what could have happened.

On top of that, someone must have rung the church bell. I can see all the shambling corpses gathered off in the distance. Who did that?

Was it an undead just falling back on the lingering memory of a routine? Did the bell ring due to some sort of magic? Or was there someone here who did it on purpose?

I've only got more questions then I started out with. But I can't just stand here wondering about what might have happened.

"Th-there," I begin, pointing with my staff towards the building with the sign faintly displaying a hammer, "I'm guessing that was probably a blacksmith. You might be able to find more weapons in there, though I don't know what kind of condition they might be in."

@PKMNB0Y@Aku the Samurai@SilverPaw@RolePlayerRoxas
@King Cosmos: Hmmm.

On one hand I do like the idea of the stacking effects on a target, but on the other I'm still a little concerned it's too potent of an autohit to work around when GMing a fight scene with her.

I'm a little torn on this, because I kind of agree with Rain that it might be too hard to evade but at the same time I like the general idea and can see your point? Hmmm.

I'm kind of stuck, I might need my co-GM to step in here.

@Teyao: As I understand it, he can force someone to work on his narrative? I'm a little sketchy on that, because it takes away pretty much all control from the other player.

@PKMNB0Y: Accepted.
Okay, before I get to addressing bios one by one:

I think given the limited number of slots I'll allow people to sign up, but I'll reserve the right to pick the characters I feel fill out the cast the best.

Anyone else will be placed on a waitlist in case we lose someone.

With that, I'll be getting to the rest of the bios later today!
Okay sorry for the delay over the weekend! I was getting my new PC set up and that took some time and effort. ^^;

I'll give everyone a proper look over tomorrow!
@Aku the Samurai: Hm.

I still don't think this Contract Ability screams Orochi, and it kind of blocks out anyone else who might want to go for an elemental focus.

I think you should lean into the snake elements more and set up a different contract from the outset. There's other serpents or potential ideas for serpents(an OC snake god could still be pretty serious business) you could go for.

@RoadkilBanana: You should probably look up some actual Japanese names before naming characters.

While I did kind of hope to see this sort of contract thematically, I feel like your power is way too weak for B. B's not particularly weak, it's the higher end of average.

@King Cosmos: Lighting fires on eye contact is a bit too much, since it's a pretty potent ability that'll immediately handle most threats. I'd say try and figure out a different effect or find ways to make it a little more restrained so it's not an inescapable autohit.
@Rune_Alchemist: Accepted.
@Raineh Daze: Accepted. While I don't want everyone taking these kinds of contracts, the steep limitations make it balanced out and they're not unheard of even if they happen infrequently.

@RoadkilBanana: Declined, this is very flat and doesn't really elaborate on the abilities well enough at all. I don't get a sense of the potency of the fire manipulation or why it would be B-rank.

@Aku the Samurai: As noted by my decision to lower the ceiling for player characters, declined. I also don't think his abilities connect well to Orochi's mythology, being a bit more generically snakey. I feel like conceptually he might be served a bit better starting at a lower rank and working his way up.

@Half Pint: I know it wasn't directly mentioned in the OP, but by this point other countries do have their own contract academies even if the practice likely originated in Japan. You'd be better off going with someone who lived in Japan before making a contract, but originally came from elsewhere or is half-Japanese.

Okay, want to apologize for any inconvenience this might cause but I think I'm going to need to adjust the OP a bit to better reflect my intentions for RP powerscale and contract rankings.

The big thing though is we're now going to have no player s-ranks.
@BOOM: Okay boy where to start here...

To begin with, I'll point out I'm not a particularly big fan of using RL images for anime-based RPs. It comes off as jarring and incongruous at best. To top it off, the image is pretty much unrelated to the description you give later on which makes it all the more confusing.

As for the rest...

It's sort of a mess? It doesn't really fall in line with how contracts are formed even unintentionally. When I mentioned unintentional contracts, I meant things like "my friend died but now their ghost follows me all the time because I wished they wouldn't go" or something like that, where you did make the contract but didn't realize it was a contract or something like that.

Just suddenly getting god powers from someone you had zero contact with before this point... not exactly. The backstory's also fairly incoherently and poorly-explained.

Additionally, with Ebisu being an actual member of the Seven Gods of Fortune, you've honestly failed to connect anything there to the actual mythological figure. I'm not asking for super adherence in how your abilities work but it should at least be recognizable to some degree.

Your contract, given the abilities given, is not at all A-rank. It's lacking in application and potency, and from an OOC perspective borders heavily on mind control which I'm not inclined to accept. It also doesn't really fall in line with her backstory either, how are people expected to consent to giving away lifespan over the internet when they don't even know that's a possibility?

Declined.
@BOOM: Please don't post non-accepted bios in the characters tab.

I didn't even have the opportunity to review your sheet, it doesn't belong there.
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