Sep said
It's all right, most people who knew Seb call me Seb. I sometimes wish I could go back to my OldGuild name.

These are me points that I myself see:-Instinctively touching the force is usually something I avoid, however as we've seen users strong in the Force can access it at a young age, though these abilities are generally the foundation on their entire "Force" career as it were. Anakin Skywalker got strong yes, but he always remained best at predicting other peoples moves.-Not history related but how could his mother tell he was passionate when he was that young? Childrens emotions then aren't really good pointers to who they will be, kids generally start to show the traits they'll carry throughout their lives about 5 years off age but that's still open to major change.-Being passionate seeing your mother cut down your father had to stir something.-The last of the CS all seems to do with the setting of the RP which is Eisens so I dunno about it working. Though Sith don't typically take you in just to set you out again, unless just to cause trouble and maybe raise a few eyebrows.One thing as well, I should point this out Force healing doesn't mean you can heal all injuries, it means you have the capability too not the ability too. I.E. Someone the same age as you who has focused more on it will be able to do more even if weaker in the force. Healing ranges from sealing up cuts to mending bones and even in some cases complex virus' tumours and the likes.

Hmm, I've taken everything into thought. Some of the pointers I added to the CS, like his reaction to his father's death. I'm not to sure about how else to end the CS besides sending him off. I'm not sure how to keep it going without RP the Sith as well. I'm sure something is amiss in the Remnants. Whether that's true or not, we'll have to see :) As for the healing, I planned on having it so that he could only heal small cuts and injuries anyway. I'm sorta good at finding a balance between my characters and reality but I sometime get loss in my own plots and such.

Alright, I apologize for my delay, I was pretty much told I need to be packed up and ready to move by tomorrow (not too surprising for a Navy life), so I've been busy packing. I might disappear for a day or two beyond tomorrow, but hopefully not. Thank you for jumping in Sep, where you have, and let me try to address what I missed so far.

@Renny: I'll approve you for now, but like I've said to others, please don't start abusing this or such things along those lines.

@NarcissisticPotato: I'll be honest, I was wondering if someone would try to infiltrate one side or another. As long as you have a reasonable idea as to how she was able to sneak her way in to a position that would be useful for gathering information, your approved as well.

Also dark side users don't make very good healers. As force heal requires absolute calm, and when your thoughts go everywhere or your always angry it tends to either work in a weird way, or not at all. I'm not to versed on the dark side though but it's normally based more on emotion than the light side.

Enalais said
Also dark side users don't make very good healers. As force heal requires absolute calm, and when your thoughts go everywhere or your always angry it tends to either work in a weird way. Or not at all.

It can work. Just if you try to do something so pure as healing with thoughts of rage and anger it can end up doing the complete opposite.

Such as how Force Lightening is an act of pure aggression, it isn't a move to kill it is a move to inflict pain. You can't do that while in a right state of mind. Force Lightening is one of those force abilities that in the right mindset just happens it doesn't need taught. While there is Electric Judgement that is "light side" it is far weaker and does require training.

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No problem Eisen and probably going to throw up a Republic Navy char if that's all right with you, just someone to cart the task force around.

I didn't know that one had to be calm in order to use force heal; while he may seem cheery on the outside, on the inside,a storm brews. I can do without the heal, this is why I asked for some help :) Thanks Sep, Ena, and Eisen

NarcissisticPotato said
That sounds good to me! So, shall we start (when we do) with them meeting or shall we assume they already have?

We can assume they've been working together for a little while

vietmyke said
We can assume they've been working together for a little while

Sounds good to me!

I altered my CS just a tid bit. I think I measured out his training and knowledge, based on his history, very well. Let me know what you guys think.

I'm assuming Eisen is MIA on account of Navy stuff for a little while, do we still have characters in the making?

Renny said
I altered my CS just a tid bit. I think I measured out his training and knowledge, based on his history, very well. Let me know what you guys think.

Still all right so you'll still be accepted.

vietmyke said
I'm assuming Eisen is MIA on account of Navy stuff for a little while, do we still have characters in the making?

I think theres a couple toying with ideas which we can wait on. If he's gone for too long we could always throw up an IC just having our chars settle in slightly doing random things.

Since it might tale a while I might as well take the time to improve my character. Since your the resident expert Sep can you give me your thoughts on my char too please? He is on the first page still if your willing.

It won't quote it Blackbeard, but yeah. It'll be fien and sure.

-Why was he whisked away? What had he done or what had people said to require him to be taken? More importantly why was the family killed? This is during a period where the Sith are gone (Except the Remnants however strong they are) and they're trying to keep their movements relatively secretive from what I've read.
-Why was he near not in the Sith Academy? Which would naturally be a hidden place due to the nature of the Sith in this period.
-It was a mighty step to be taken under a Sith Lord rather than just a Knight. How'd he do it? Due to the remnants nature was there a lack of Knights? Or did somehting special happen.
-The not dying by your hands is a nice touch the the Sith rarely deal in "Innocent until proven guilty."

This is just what I've taken away from it.

Lol, new standard for CS's: Sep reviewed, GM approved.

I'll change it so he was taken to become part of the academy because he had some level of power, and when his family resisted thy were killed. Sound better? And I'll put him straight into the academy.

The Sixth lord bit was purely just me not knowing the Sith very well, I guess a knight would be fine but equally I'm guessing it would be unrealistic to be at my current level unless I was tutored by a lord? I might be wrong, if not do you have any suggestions as to why I would be taken by a lord? Maybe he was the one who originally took me from my family and so he had some connection to me already?

And lastly I tried to make it sound as if he had been put through rigourous testing, almost torture to find out the fate of his master but I only told the truth which was the my hands quote. Is that unrealistic? Would they just kill him even though he was telling the truth?

Blackbeard said
I'll change it so he was taken to become part of the academy because he had some level of power, and when his family resisted thy were killed. Sound better? And I'll put him straight into the academy.The Sixth lord bit was purely just me not knowing the Sith very well, I guess a knight would be fine but equally I'm guessing it would be unrealistic to be at my current level unless I was tutored by a lord? I might be wrong, if not do you have any suggestions as to why I would be taken by a lord? Maybe he was the one who originally took me from my family and so he had some connection to me already? And lastly I tried to make it sound as if he had been put through rigourous testing, almost torture to find out the fate of his master but I only told the truth which was the my hands quote. Is that unrealistic? Would they just kill him even though he was telling the truth?

-makes sense.
-Well to get to your level you could have passed through the ranks, became a Knight yourself then moved on. Besides if you had managed to kill a Knight you'd be at least as powerful if not more powerful than him.
-In terms of the Lord how did they form the connection from their brief meeting? Did he have a vision? Did he like his hair colour?
-I'm not sure what they'd do without more information on Eisens Sith Empire if I am totally honest though they typically aren't very lenient and still hate to lose Sith Blood. Which is why a lot of the time it was hard as apprentices were still expected to kill their masters but had to do it in a way to avoid getting in major trouble. So they typically had witnesses around and what not for their "accidents" and if they suspected you enough to torture you you'd have to somehow find a way to regain their trust, especially in relation to EIsens supah weapon. A lot of this last bit depends on Eisens empire and I don't want ot speak on his behalf.

Well, getting moved over to my new place of residence didn't take more than a day, but I am on a public network now, since I can't get internet to my room itself, and I can't reach any other network. So I might get some lag or delay at points, depending on how many people there are in here at any one time. Did I miss anything major that needs my attention? If not, I can get started on an IC later this evening, or tomorrow, depending on events going on here.

Nothing to report.

Thanks Sep, I wanted to tone him down and I'm hoping that did it. Naraal has a unique connection to the force and it'll be in stark relation to his true beliefs of the Force. Should be fun to discover and such while growing stronger.

Eisenhorn said
Well, getting moved over to my new place of residence didn't take more than a day, but I am on a public network now, since I can't get internet to my room itself, and I can't reach any other network. So I might get some lag or delay at points, depending on how many people there are in here at any one time. Did I miss anything major that needs my attention? If not, I can get started on an IC later this evening, or tomorrow, depending on events going on here.

Things are fine here. Uh, no-one new applied just some brainstorming and folk asking me to help them out. Enalais appeared at some point too to steal my last teacup.

I demand retribution!

But nah, look forward to an IC.

Sep said
Things are fine here. Uh, no-one new applied just some brainstorming and folk asking me to help them out. Enalais appeared at some point too to steal my last teacup.I demand retribution! But nah, look forward to an IC.

Your Teacups are delicious! *Chomp* *glass chewing*