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@Sawdust that's a really cool idea o:
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I would be interested in creating a Hidden Leaf character for this if you guys are still accepting. I had a Kekkei Genkai in mind that I've been thinking up for quite a while that revolves around using chakra to be able to use a form of telekinesis.
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And here I thought I was going to have to skip off to Stone.

I'll hold off on doing so until we've a better idea of numbers, then.
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Alrighty! I really do hope everything is in order. I look forward to hearing all about my mistakes and where I went wrong and how much it was a total waste of time!
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Aw shit, I just made my character's whole combat skills revolve around using chakra to manipulate weapons with his mind. It would kind of seem like I'm copying your guy's shuriken jutsu @Unraveller... Hm, would it be okay to make a puppeteer even though my character wouldn't be from Sunagakure? @Write
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@TheFourthIV Well, I am not entirely set in stone by any stretch of the imagination. By all means I can change it up if you would prefer to have a more original array of skills, I'm accommodating!
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@TheFourthIV Well, I am not entirely set in stone by any stretch of the imagination. By all means I can change it up if you would prefer to have a more original array of skills, I'm accommodating!


Eh, don't worry about it I'll just change it up, shouldn't be too hard to think up something new.

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Well, sorry that I beat you to the punch anyhow, but as long as you are happy with it I guess everything turned out all right! Though to be honest, I'm not quite sure if I am totally digging my own abilities, I might have to change 'em up.
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Don't worry about it, it's completely fine as I'm totally satisfied with the character I have now.
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Very cool characters so far. Mine is almost done too :3
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So umm, I have a few questions. Is there a GM here than can help me? I'm working on a Hyuga and picking Jutsu but they don't seem to have ranks listed on the wiki. I'm wondering if the Rotation jutsu is too advanced for a genin?
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So umm, I have a few questions. Is there a GM here than can help me? I'm working on a Hyuga and picking Jutsu but they don't seem to have ranks listed on the wiki. I'm wondering if the Rotation jutsu is too advanced for a genin?


Yo, I gots this.

Anyways, yeah, it depends alot on what your character is good at. If they have good chakra control, I'd say Rotation isn't out the question, but that'd definitely be a requirement. Hit me up with any questions.
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@The Unraveller- It looks like 'Ribingu no kiri' is an enhanced version of Hiding in Mist Jutsu, which is B ranked, and I'd have to say no to that alone. Only way that would work is if it was a close range cloud of limited distance. The chakra sensing for now I'm going to have to say no to as well, specially as your char isn't a sensor. I also use Earth Release a ton, I know hiding can be cheap (love doing it), so going to say make sure you remember your character needs air whenever he goes underground.

Also, good luck controlling a mute, might be hard, but up to you.

@TheFourth- Gotta be honest, Nara's are really hard to grade. With the attributes, if his intelligence plays that big a part of his combat, I'd need it listed under skills. I'm a wee bit hesitant though about okaying a taijutsu oriented Nara with shadow clones. I'm pretty sure those aren't shadow clones though, as you have that as a C-ranked tech, shadow clones are B-ranked. I'd like a name change, just to avoid confusion, maybe shade clones? If it's C-rank, they'd be weaker, so I'd say they can't use seperate jutsu. Also, to avoid combo potential, and cause you do have flash bangs, I'd like them weak to light.
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@Ganryu Hopefully I changed everything you touched on, please tell me if there is anything else.
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Perfect, throw it in the bin
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I just changed Nai's stuff up as well, replaced the fog jutsu with another. It really does seem like our Mist group is going to be a distant sniping and tracking unit, which is pretty interesting to me!
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Into the bin with that as well
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@Ruined Melody I see two or three problems.

1.) Eight Trigrams Rotation. I know the technique doesn't have a rank, but Neji was considered an absolute genius for having learned it at his age. (Aside from already being considered a genius in general)

2.) How is she training with her father every day? She's out in the field, not back home in Konoha(Hidden Leaf). Is her father deployed as well for some reason? Does he travel to the camp to train with her or something?

3.) She was said to have the fastest hands in her clan when using gentle fist? Even faster then the masters of gentle fist? Then her father. The people who are more experienced than her? That doesn't sound make much sense imo.
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@Ruined Melody I see two or three problems.

1.) Eight Trigrams Rotation. I know the technique doesn't have a rank, but Neji was considered an absolute genius for having learned it at his age. (Aside from already being considered a genius in general)

2.) How is she training with her father every day? She's out in the field, not back home in Konoha(Hidden Leaf). Is her father deployed as well for some reason? Does he travel to the camp to train with her or something?

3.) She was said to have the fastest hands in her clan when using gentle fist? Even faster then the masters of gentle fist? Then her father. The people who are more experienced than her? That doesn't sound make much sense imo.


Thanks for getting back to me :)

Well first, the Rotation is a technique passed orally in the Main Branch house of the Hyuga and the reason people thought Neji was a genius for learning it was only because he'd learned it without it being taught to him (since he's a member of the Branch family) so I didn't take age or Rank into consideration since I didn't feel like it mattered. I believe 13-16 would be a reasonable age for it to have been taught if one has the right Chakra control to do it.

Second, the issue with when her Father trains her... Well in my mind, I was thinking Genin don't do a lot of away missions where they're gone for extended periods of time. Don't they mainly do like.... D rank missions? Would once a week be more reasonable? If not, what do you think is? Every few weeks? It's something that flexible of course but I do want to keep her trainings as a semi-regular thing.

As for the last one, I was thinking of ways to kind of set her apart. Essentially I was thinking that she could have the fastest hands, meaning that she is able to accurately pinpoint and attack one's chakra points faster than anyone else. This would be due to her having a really pure or strong Byakugan as well as some natural talent for accuracy. It's not something I have to keep so I can take it out if need be.
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