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@LmpkioIs his Dash skill just a factor of him being a fast physical runner? 30 MPH is a little over 40 kilometers per hour, and while it's only over what I'm assuming would be close combat distances, that's still faster than my own adrenaline-junkie character's own 100 meter dash speed. You might want to lower that or provide some justification for it from his powers. Otherwise this looks fine, and from his one limit I'm going to rule that his healing light can currently make a person recover twice as fast as they normally would, and that his dark blast can hit with twice the force of a physical punch in addition to the burning. Both of these can be improved as we go along in the RP.


I was going to have his powers of both light and dark enhance his performance a little. I mean, he usually can't run that fast, but in either forms he can run that fast. If you want me to make him slightly slower, I can go 25 mph or the lowest being 20 if you want.

And yes, I was thinking of the light/dark balls being as powerful as you suggested. I'll add them in and post it in the CS.

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Hmmm, having trouble with the actual character side of my hero idea (since the power is all figured out) so tempted to try and throw together a villain-ish character in the meantime. Had the idea of them basically wanting to "test" Quirks or something and basically treating their villainous actions as some kind of "game" or "exam" but... Hmmm. We'll see how that works out I guess. ^^;
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I'm wondering, what's your soft limit on the speed of Sou's skill- 'Propel'?
What would be reasonable?


I think being able to propel himself at about 30 kilometers per hour (just a little under 20 miles an hour) before he hits the ground and adds to it with his running speed, and then gradually slowing down over distance, would be fine. If he was constantly using his explosions for propulsion without touching the ground, he might be able to build up to twice that speed, but it would of course put a lot of strain on him and he'd risk damaging his limbs from both the explosion and from landing at such a speed.

Hrmm. There was a character I wanted to run here, but for the sake of avoiding another combo platter Quirk and a little overlap I'm kinda on the fence about signing her up.

Her Quirk is just petrifying her arms into flint and steel with all the pluses and drawbacks of that. It's kinda similar to Writes, but not overtly, I think?


Would it just be one arm per transformation? Would she be able to make blades, or would it just be a body-hardening quirk? As for other applications, what was your primary use of it going to be? Like you said, it's a bit similar to Writes, but it's also kind of similar to Intertia's character, though granted their actual power is adjusting oxygen density and the sparks they make are from another piece of equipment.
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It's just a body-hardening Quirk that applies one arm per transformation, yeah. As in, like, it's not a mix of flint and steel throughout one arm. It's just one arm being steel and one arm being flint since its primary usage is supposed to be causing sparks that can ignite things.
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@Zeroth I think I will definitely add the immune system thing with lead constantly working against her body she would be incredibly susceptible to colds and whatnot.

I'm hesitant to rule out acrobatic movement as a whole as the description of her character is that her legs are incredibly powerful. Though I do like the idea of her having trouble holding back so I will add the four limitations we've talked about.

Just like this if that's cool with you!
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Hey, I was wondering if I could join this RP? I'm currently updated on the anime. Also I have a few ideas floating around, but I'll look around to see what everyone else has, so there's no overlap.
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@Knight of Doom Room is available! Hop right in!
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It's just a body-hardening Quirk that applies one arm per transformation, yeah. As in, like, it's not a mix of flint and steel throughout one arm. It's just one arm being steel and one arm being flint since its primary usage is supposed to be causing sparks that can ignite things.


Inertia's character sort of already does that, although rather than open flame the focus is on explosions. While the body-hardening would put a different spin on it, I'm afraid I'd really prefer if there were as little overlap as possible between the powers, sorry. I do like the idea of a body-hardening Quirk that uses different materials, though--maybe use some metallurgic knowledge of alloys or something to figure out another way to apply this kind of power? Is there such a thing as two metals that become magnetized or electrified when rubbed against each other, or something like that?
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This is a WIP because I'm currently on mobile:

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Is this still accepting? @Write showed it to me, and I might see about drafting up a CS if it is.
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@Krayzikk Always! Come in!
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@Zeroth
Exactly how much detail do you want us to go into on a Villain's back story? You want their origins? Or just sum up their basic villainous shenanigans and reveal their backstory later in the RP, if possible?
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@Zeroth Edited for your approval. Note that the healing factor (lack thereof) has been tied to the lead poisoning and easily contracting sickness limit.

EDIT: I'm the worst, now it's done.
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Psst the appearance section.
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@Zeroth


I decided to just get the profile out. I'll search for pics after that resemble what I envision.

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Inertia's character sort of already does that, although rather than open flame the focus is on explosions. While the body-hardening would put a different spin on it, I'm afraid I'd really prefer if there were as little overlap as possible between the powers, sorry. I do like the idea of a body-hardening Quirk that uses different materials, though--maybe use some metallurgic knowledge of alloys or something to figure out another way to apply this kind of power? Is there such a thing as two metals that become magnetized or electrified when rubbed against each other, or something like that?

I thiiiiiiink there is? Like, just doing a quick search on it, iron, nickel, and cobalt seem to do it? If you strike it with a hammer or rub it around at least.

I really like the idea of a body-hardening Quirk with different materials too, but I'm honestly not interested in researching the science behind how that stuff works. I could just leave it as body-hardening, but it feels kinda boring to just leave it at that.
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So... villain time! I remember another villain I used to have in another hero RP a few months prior. So, having done some alterations and such, I've made this guy come back. Hope you like him.

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@Zeroth
Exactly how much detail do you want us to go into on a Villain's back story? You want their origins? Or just sum up their basic villainous shenanigans and reveal their backstory later in the RP, if possible?


As much as you'd like within the minimums listed in the CS; if you have specific "story elements" you'd like to keep secret but feel I should know about as a GM, then feel free to PM me.

@WriteAlright! With the four limits, the specifics of your powers, weight, etc as described in the CS are fine. She's approved!

@Holy SoldierThere's no mana or magic in the setting, just the superpowers, so that needs to be changed in his backstory. As for his quirk, I think being able to take on the properties of other materials is a bit distinct from the initial stone-skin; can you go into more detail of exactly what you're wanting him to be able to do with his power?

For his skills and techniques, does Dead Weight consist of him literally connecting himself to the ground, since you say he roots himself into a rocky surface, or is it just that he's so heavy he's hard to lift? For his strength, I think being able to lift a car at the beginning of the RP is a bit much, especially since his power is defensive and not offensive.

You have some good limits, though, so some of that could be justified once I have a better understanding of his Quirk.

@LmpkioIn the Hero Academia series, usually people who have "form" Quirks that turn their bodies into something else are generally always in that form, with only a few exceptions that do a full transformation. But for those that do transform, that's usually their one specific power--to transform into X. Terror Wing has the ability to camouflage himself and split plasma as well as the natural abilities his form gives him. If he's stuck in the form, and there are some more detailed explanations for the other powers, it could all be bundled into one package. But if his power is to transform into the beast-form, then having those other powers is much harder to justify. I think, given how powerful he's intended to be, he could also do with a few more limits.

Another way you might be able to "add" powers to him, though, would be through the experimentation that was done on him. Maybe his parents added cybernetic enhancements of some sort to him, or something along those lines?
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@LmpkioIn the Hero Academia series, usually people who have "form" Quirks that turn their bodies into something else are generally always in that form, with only a few exceptions that do a full transformation. But for those that do transform, that's usually their one specific power--to transform into X. Terror Wing has the ability to camouflage himself and split plasma as well as the natural abilities his form gives him. If he's stuck in the form, and there are some more detailed explanations for the other powers, it could all be bundled into one package. But if his power is to transform into the beast-form, then having those other powers is much harder to justify. I think, given how powerful he's intended to be, he could also do with a few more limits.

Another way you might be able to "add" powers to him, though, would be through the experimentation that was done on him. Maybe his parents added cybernetic enhancements of some sort to him, or something along those lines?


Now to be fair, I have virtually no knowledge when it comes to Hero Academica, so thanks for letting me know on that. If you want Radon to just be in his beast form, I can totally live with that no problem. The serums and all that stuff that would be injected into his body will also have the pigment transformation and the ability to breathe plasma.

Now power-wise... I could think of a few additional things, but cybernetics will probably not be the way to go. I mean maybe down the line when say his arm or his wings get ripped off (I should add the weakness being his wings btw), he could get picked up by some organization and make him have said cybernetics, but that'll be down the line. For now, I'll think of a few more abilities for him to use, so stay tuned.
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