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Will work on a character sheet after I finish my post in the other RP.

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Ok done.
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Subject to review, but I’m still adding to it.
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Yeah this looks interesting, so I'll throw my hat at it with this.

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Its been awhile since I've been in the Advance area. Cut me some slack lol.
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@Shortcake & @Wolpertingers

Both of you are missing BB coding, leading me to question if you guys will be able to format a post, well, properly. Do you guys think you can fix the coding?

@Anders Presuming you're adding to it in terms of clan history that'll be fine.

@Renny Woo boy that's messy.
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Heya! Just wanted to express my interest in joining your rp. Tell me if there's something I need to edit though I intend to add more to his backstory depending on how the rp story goes, if that's okay. C:


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@baraquiel you're my sworn enemy from now on. Be warned.

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baraquiel Angel of Moe *:・゚✧

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@Spanner whyyy
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@baraquiel Join the discord and you'll learn why.
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Review in red


not accepted yet since you're missing pivotal shit. i don't get it -- i included a whole section for custom jutsu but you ignored the most pertinent part. reference my sheets if you want to see how i organized it - imho it's easier to read for me. make changes and i'll revisit and review it again
Subject to review, but I’m still adding to it.


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you need to make some adjustments in the jutsu's and the arekuruu parts of your story but otherwise it's fine. edit, put in character sheet

Its been awhile since I've been in the Advance area. Cut me some slack lol.


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Heya! Just wanted to express my interest in joining your rp. Tell me if there's something I need to edit though I intend to add more to his backstory depending on how the rp story goes, if that's okay. C: no


You should make some minor edits but overall this is a decent character meaning once you edited it, it's accepted


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@Odin ready to be judged for my sins ok
which includes the whole jutsu/equipment section bc it was draining my sanity no


Overall accepted but your weaknesses to your custom jutsu need more thought put into them other than 'these techniques are pretty hard, and someone more experienced obviously will do better against them'. Edit and put in character bin


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nice to see you here


needs some edits


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@Odin
Well take another look pal cuz I can clutter my formatting with the best of em.
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